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Kirk 08-04-08 05:06 AM

He was all talking shit like "I WANNA FUCK UP HIS RECORD! I'LL BEAT HIM IN ANYTHING!" Then comes to text battle and gives me a k.o. win.

Keith Moon 08-04-08 01:51 PM

Kirk > CALI anyday...
kirk had a strong verse.. CALI didn't.. wahhh.. so of course he must have dickriders
grow up..

Kirk 08-04-08 06:00 PM

Every single vote has been a dickrider............

Wordz AhGod 08-05-08 07:01 AM

Voted For: Kirk

CALI
Nothing

vs

Speaking of which, I please the pussy. Thats the difference between you and me,
And as for that faggot Cali? He ain't seen no fuckin' hore mone since puberty,
You ain't sick at all, man. You crazy if you think you might just win it,
Tryna get a clean sweep... But that broom don't look like it got much life left in it.
^ Im not quoting it, just saying its played on him already
And your jailtime? Bet you think you're innocent and their decision was too fucked,
Only right you got a felon knee though, considerin' you were on yours for a few months.
^ good concept and wording but the word felt really forced.

Well, this was yet another one-sided battle. CALI seemed to try to switch his style a bit but all it did was make his verse look more newbish then usual. I suggest that you actually take the pointers people give you as far a how to write a verse and the fundimentals of a text verse rather then just get mad and keep going on the way you are. Your style is way to simple and its compelled of a lot filler lines with little to no witt. Straight out shit talking whent out back in 04 man. No hate, just a suggestion. Kirks lines felt forced to me like the CALIPH line, I didn't like it because I never heard anyone call him that so its irrelevent to me. The felon knee' line felt forced because you didn't just spell it the write way and leave to the voters to put it together. the Broom line is always funny against CALI and an Epic diss but its played out like Wordz AhGod nameplays man. Still, with a few inconsistancies in your verse, you did more then enough to shut this one out and the fact that CALI got a vote must Equal either a dick rider or some one who has no idea what txt battling should look like nore has the mental capacity to put your lines together.

with that said

V/ Kirk

PS

CALI (please elevate home boi)


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