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HOW?
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This is the fuckin gayest shit ive been involved in in my life.
I ain't mad that I'm lost. Just that somma yall bitches are fuckin deaf or somethin. shit. either that or ur dumbasses |
Yo calm down man, you gonna make people hate you, those lines you had were nice but too simple, like your "hot sex" one
Its so simple to say "Fire" then say "Hot-something" if you know what i mean, you had good lines but they just too simple. |
And if it's for that fire sire line that i lost...Well i already said that before....but good battle, I guess. |
But its over now...you win.
Just that I personally thought I won. But guess thats how shit goes. Its showbiz. Holla |
Look Beam, Everyone who has placed a Vote on this battle has said, this was a good battle...I don't see why u trippin, U can't win em' all KID...
~From my eyes~ Both verses wasn't all that one hundred percent accurate to me, Punches were light...I mean "504" and then "Sire" come on yall...Multi's none, Creativity All the creativity in this battle was played...Beam U gotta learn how to take Constructive Criticism point blank kid... No Hate cause I am new...just being HONEST |
aight i was just waitin for a reason why i lost. Goddamn that one line. Shit did you not read the rest of em. Its aight tho, I GUESS ONE LINE CAN MAKE YOU LOSE?
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Good battle beam, -_- thanx for you opinion
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Yea one line can make you lose a battle, but you didn't lose because of one line, you lost cause ya whole verse was simple.
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Ya good battle. I don't think the scores showed how close it was. Guess you edged me out in everyones mind.
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im gonna have to go with Beam
He has some ill rhymes No offense lilbrick but you had only one good line all beam had was one bad one |
Sorry playa you can't vote you in his crew.
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He gave a good reason?
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I had more than one good line, so i dont know i guess he just saying that cause he in ya click. (i would do the same, if you was in my click)
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ok you win 4-2
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ayo vote goes to the lil man
juss tighter... close tho check this and poll vote http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41681 thanks |
Actually i won 4-0, cause the people that voted for you are in your click.
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What people should do in battle is not just look for "one" good line or one "bad" line, but the whole verse...I mean what is "one line" lol...When u Vote u have to know what u talkin about...
Like for instance...Vocab, Vocab kinda plays a major part to me in battlin because I feel like anybody can use small words mix them around and be nice, but to use actual vocab is more of a challenge, and it helps the structure of your flow...yall 2 take that in mind...I see potential in you 2 |
vote: Brick
He came alot harder than beam, he had better punches and wordplay also |
Thanx for your votes people. Keep them coming
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Whats up with the harder punches. Tell me how my punches were weak and his were harder. Just lookin for some help, thats all.
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Ok its like this, pit bulls and poodles are both dogs (we both spit) they both bite (we both had nice punches) but in a test of who bites harder, most people will say the pit bull will bite harder (my puncher we harder)
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R U callin me a poodle, dogg?
Naw, I just don't get that metaphor or simile or whatever that was. You got a better way to say it? |
I'm new at this shit anyways, soI'll take the L. I just need some help
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Ok...this is what punches are first of all...
Punches = a way to diss the opponent, using a source of words based on creativity, imagery, and werdplay. Lilbricks punches weren't that much harder than yours beam...he just won this battle over "personals" I think that's the only way he got the win to me, anyway... Personals = Using a source of words to the challenger not only about himself, but about personal things, like mothers, fathers, sisters, brothers, I mean anything personal...and causing it to have more impact... Personals cause more impact because it shows EMcee's that u can base your flow, on more than one thing...and u can keep a consistant flow, while you are writing 2 things at once...you feel me? He got you over "personals" not because your punches were weak or his punches were harder...because both were light, I am just being honest, and trying to help u elevate...he just got you with persoals that's it... |
Aight then
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And you fuckin go around tellin people to vote for you and shit...that ain't right. Vote for my battle basically means vote for me. Damn this websites fucked up. Guess I'll just spit for fun, cuz tryin to win is pointless. I don't got time to advertise every single battle.
Holla |
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