Is this you posting your piece on other sites?

Sorry laddeh, cannae poost other saat links...forum roooles..

No posting of other sites links.

But i'll leave it on here so Gege can tell us if it's her, or whether someone has 'bitten' her work on that site. In which case, she can get in contact with the admin on that site.

NO THAT IS NOT ME!! and that fuckin makes me wanna not post shit on the internet anymore!! fuckin herb!! thank you so much legendary for showing this to me. I will definately get to the bottom of it..UGH!!

That dumbass guy didnt even have the sense to change the HIS'S to HERS..After the poetry tourny I dont think I'll post up anymore..unless its copywrited!!

True Colors

Where the bluest of ocean meets pink skies on the horizon.
Rainbow Raindrops capsizing; The morning sun rising.
These interaction of hues, are of satisfaction to you?
You say yes, But I know your attraction's untrue.
The mixed green and light blue, of a mornings fresh dew.
The black night changing to, the white moonlight's debut.
Through and through; I cant see how one could draw this view:
That when its nature, its beauty. But when its skin, it's taboo.

All too true. We're Like a 'facial-formation', to be honest,
Our interracial-relation causes people to 'frown' on-us.
Cuz they keep bigoted minds shut-tight like an eye-lid
And fidget with the twines of anything hy-brid.
For they love the blossom of deep purple, and would never wish to fade-it.
But forget it was blue and red petals that came together to create-it.
May not fit-in ur-group if one's peach and another's brown
But we stick-to-our-'roots', since we 'hold eachother down'.
Feelings deep, you can't dodge it; you just can't dislodge it
Why must ours be a battle between love and logic?
Love says: "Ive been there since the first time you kissed-him"
Logic says: "You cant marry a muslim and a Christ-ian."
But forget-them, and fuck that whole world they exist-in,
For if we were resisting, look what we'd be missing.
Tho he has different hues in the hint of his face,
I wouldnt fix them to match; not a tint nor a trace.
Even tho if they did, we would be more accepted
But why wish change on somethin already perfected.
I see his true colors, and there's nothing Id trade
For together, we make the most beautiful shade.

©2003 Property of DaGyrlRemarqabL

Motha fuckaz!!!!!!

Heh. It happens to a lot of talented poets, Gege. It's all good. Nice work on the copywrite thing. Now all you got to do is register it with a national literature board or somethin..(!!)...

Nah, but seriously. Register it with www.poetry.com. They copywrite all the stuff you put up there.

At least they banned the guy from that site. Now you know your stuff is very good since people are biting it..haha.

Hopefully I still get to read the stuff you write? Send it to me in email or something ;) I LIKE IT TOO MUCH TO STOP READING IT

this is damn-near the best poetry i read on here
good job

^Thanks much gyrl.

Thanks to you too Legendary.

And thanks for the advice, V. I appreciate it.

whats crackin girl...i gotta be real with you...when i read this i got a sense of relaxation of reading something that i haven't felt in a minute, ya know...It made me think and your use of imagery and tinkering of add on words made it even greater...

Love says: "Ive been there since the first time you kissed-him"
Logic says: "You cant marry a muslim and a Christ-ian."

That line was too dope...i can't wait to read more of your stuff!!

keeep doin you : z0

Damn, I havent been on this site in a minute, and your post is STILL on the first page?? you are doin it up fo sho...and u betta not stop postin, im wit legendary on that one..

^lol...ahh, nothin but love for you'ze guyz.

Yea damn This wus Beautyfull..........................The best shit i read in this damn poetry section by far talented women Nice drop

Peep mine ~There will never be Another ME~

What the hell is up with everyone riding your dick, DaGyrlRemarqabL?

Just so you know, Gyrl, I was riding your dick long before the riding of your dick was cool.

Um... not that you actually have a dick. And even if you did I'm sure I wouldn't have you insert it into my body. Not that your not good enough, you certainly are. Hey, all you have to do is ask and you may insert your dick into me. Not that I'm being a slut or anything, I'm a guy. I'm just being neighborly. Not that your my neighbor or that I have my 60 year old woman of a neighbor insert parts of her body into mine or anything or... or..

Yeah... I'm going to shut up now.

^lmao.
I THINK there was a compliment in there somewhere.
heehee, you're a character Necro.

n PS- no ones riding my dick here, just very much appreciated comments. Thanks everyone.

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hm, thanks for that.