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^^illness,iv read all your shit addlib,its nice.
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Yo check it check it I got this battle won, it was done before this shit begun
you better relax cause you rhyme like you been takin Exlax I got lyrics like a passion, instead of winnin you?ll be crashin, your record it was great now that shit did what, evaporate,You can anticipate but can?t relate cause I seen your geeky classes you look just like bill gates(without the money), I got metaphors like your whore got sores(referring to STD?s) theonly thing is your bitch comes back for more, I told her I dont want those sores(referring to STD?s) so I turned her away just like before,Your excited, i dont?t know why cause you were out whited( white guy beat you) youve been beat, cmon face this defeat, I spit venom like a snake, one spit and thats all it will take, while you crumble and your knees start to shake, expose that you rap like Justin Timberlake(bad rapper) so everyone knows that your fake/ you battle cause your not virile(means have a small manhood) all along you been in denile, so you suck guys dicks until its worth your while, scared and shakin like freeworld off of 8 mile Is there any confusion after this you?ll need a blood transfusion, they?ll have to rewrite the constition, to say that you just had your biggest execution gte bak to me OK |
you already posted here....
I hate these kids who just post a pre written verse in every sub forum. you, sir, are a spam whore. |
Royal flush...myhand-is-tight...brand-this-tyke with a damaged mic//
My fetish for wreckin-letters-left-his head "spinnin" like Vanna White// Bitch, you claim to be "solidinster" but this minister could dimish-ya// Nice-with-my-shit...the-bicycle-kick fatality finished-ya// Leave this pussy rotten like fisting-mistresses-sick-with-syphillis// Addicted to Mega's scriptures...my vicious-diction-is-limitless// Maybe you were chugging-Moon-shine with wine or snuffin-huge-lines// of that cocaine flow that'll blow thru your skull-in-due-time// Think you can fuck with GameO? Better wish on a passing-star// cuz I'm leavin this chump dysfunctional like that plane in ya avatar// No one gives a fuck about your opinion...don't even bother makin-a-comment// Just watch as this ancient-prophet "pops off ya top" like LORENA-BOBBITT// |
So wha's goin down with ma verse.
Any good? |
^ I liked yours, just tell Game and D'Cyde to fuck off, lol. .
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yeah addlibb should be in here
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anywun else...wun more vote
addlib is inners... |
fine how about this (dont tell me 2 fuck off)
My ‘Ol Dirty’ lyrics, ‘ringing bells,’ bustin’ lyrical ‘GRAPES’// You could call this lyrical beef, but I’d say it’s lyrical RAPE// kerzzy boy, you know my shit is disgustingly-SICK// Your rhymes are repetitive, rusty-and-THICK// I know you ain’t droppin fire, it must-be-your-CLIQUE// If I ever bought your album, that shit would get dusty-real-QUICK// And I know you wanna beat me, so get back-into-line// I’ll run you over doing 88, send you back-into-time// Like DOC did to Michael J. FOX, plus I’ll clap you with GLOCKS// Fuck slappin’, let’s BOX, put you on the ground, bash your head in with ROCKS// Then I’ll boo you off the stage with a burning-animosity// Got you running at full speed like terminal-velocity// You might quite POSSIBLY be the worst emcee-alive// I’ll give you a left hook and a gash, like Jack Dempsey-wit-knives// Mr. Publess? a piston? damn your shit is simplistic// My rhymes are sadistic, makin’ you a statistic// Lyrically confusin’ your brain, this shit is straight mystic// My tracks are artistic…my missiles, ballistic// Now I’m on the right, so you know you can’t possibly survive// This shit is over, you’ll get a two, I’ll be somewhere near five// |
not a battle crew....
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Mad man let me in youve seen me in topical im straight come on let me in
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Game Fuck Off...
And Will'Con You Might As Well Too.. |
Yo i'm i in
Update me holla |
hello soory but umm yaw just totally ignored me...............i'm on the first page.......and no one replied to my request to join OVERCAST
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sand is a pusssssy dickhead wiper dont tell me 2 fuck off the only person u can tell 2 fuck off is ur gay dad
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....wow...so much anger...
i think he serious sand. what the hell is a pussssssy dickhead wiper anyway? |
lol, Game=herbalicious
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oh just shut up u stinking newbie ............
Untouchables the 2nd WACKEST crew ive seen here |
hello........can yaw please peep ma shit n tell me if i'm good enough for this crew.......yaw totally ignored me on the first page............... i'll drop links
HOW MANY http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54179 SHALLOW BUT DEEP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53273 DEATH http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill THREAD OF LIFE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill FIRE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill REMAINING UNRECOGNIZED verse 1 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=remain REMAINING UNRECOGNIZED verses 2 n 3 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill NEWS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55689 |
trill is dope...in or not? and did you call me a stinking newbie game? that coming from a herb who dropped the same verse in nearly every crew forum?
what does it say if you didn't get into the second wackest crew you've seen? herb |
u idiot shut up i dint AT LEAST I DONT LET NEWBIES IN MY CREW AND HAD UR BEST MEMEBER LEAVE LOL GO POST IN YOUR OWN CREW UR SHIT lmao
^ that made absolutly no sense^...can i say it any clearer F U C K O F F... herbs these days...:) |
lol sand, he's talking about me.
dude, I am in this crew. dumbass. and I let newbies in my crew if I think they have skill or potential. now shut the fuck up. |
game is a wack herb...shut up
hello did i make the cut |
yo im sorry about before for not leaving a link heres a link to my last battle it was a no show but i still dropped and i mite not be great but i got potential.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55101 |
my opinion ... will'con need to elevate a bit more...
i think tRiLL should be in... and I think that Game should realize this a topical crew... and he can also.... SHUT THE FUCK UP ....my 2 cents |
^Games a herb.........Simple
Yo did i make the cut????? Holla -one love- |
You sitting in the café, sipping on your latte (Drink)
Dropped the shit an burnt your self, My shit got sold out, your still on the shelves, I’m sure these people bound to agree, you ain’t no emcee, Metaphorically speakin, you’re low key like a rat squeakin, Your what we call status-seeking, get your ass popped, your flow is leakin, Its typical you in frontlines with three wins beside your name, But I’ll send you back to bitch slapped, docmeth here to “PRO”claim, Demolishing fame, it just ain’t the same, with out the fiend to bring upon shame, Acting as a crew brings hope to your surname, your like president bush, Looking for a butch to bring padding to your push, Getting hit by all these guys so hard you tried to push back but only got hemorrhoids, Lyrically destroyed, thinking this a sport you tried to use steroids, Trying to psychoanalyze emcees like you Sigmund froid, Doc the chemist mixing up lyrics to give you a original high, Feeding you rhymes outta my own supply, You couldn’t go off with a bang if it were the forth-of July, Trying to be the illest, asked to get put down as if it were a request, This ain’t readers digest, new york time dissed on you, you got “DE”pressed |
^^no shit latte is a drink...thank you captain obvious.
this is a topical crew...not battle crew...i dunno if this had a topic,but i didnt find one. |
yeah...its started off okay...in the first line.
then the rest was a typical battle rap, just with strange punches. |
Dam yall maybe i should change my name to invisible or sumin.
Just for you overcast- hope yall enjoy stereo type My state of depression...a reflection in my facial expressions Labelled rejection...male clearly unable to stable confession Tabled regressions...a cursed deliberant burdened with a purpose primitive My hurts inquisitive...so in the burning I still thirst definitives Remaining self-contained...in a selfish brain...health is stained Melted veins...lying in a pool of darkness...self-ashamed Still just doing my utmost to see through life's distorted lens But these stereotypical thoughts keep leading to aborted friends Assorted trends...but I strive to see the personality...leave the materiality A mentality that's challenged me to be free from the fear of fallacy I'm nearing gallantly...though my tries are hearty...my eyes depart me Imparted...eyes and heart bleed...trying to part these hierarchies I lie uncharted...neglected priorities mean we only see selected authorities Infected majorities...meriting nothing...merely reject the minorities Defects in their order seize our deranged basis...pain and range tasteless Estranged faces wouldn't be overlooked were thier names to change places To touch the equilibrium...narrow minds should surmise to a faction Beauty never lies in attraction...for beauty is devised in our actions Rise and detach sins...please lord I don't want to be evil I want to ease feebles...look past appearance...i want to see people |
Im newer to the open mic seen what do you think:
Am I Still Living?? My mind is still operating... I can't think of what just occured, but seems like ages ago Deep in thought and so disturbed, Aching head to toe Im still pulsing blood through out my body, why do I feel numb I can remember every event in my life, but none of this one My lungs are still breathing... I can feel my hot breath on my hand, im breathing heavily Trying to inhale every last bit of air, counciousness is gaining steadily I feel as if my lungs are collapsing every time I take a deep breath Try to speak with the little air ive gained but theres bairly any left My mucles are still strong.. But stiff, As if someone had pulled on them with all there strength Im remembering a run now, a run to safty but I didnt make the length I can feel blood pouring out of my muscles like daggers still in them Bruises engulf my entire body like black and blue pigeons, did I try to defend? My heart as failed.. I dont here my heart beat anymore, im getting nervous Am I still alive, or have I been attacked by deaths curses Im seeing those whitelights everyone has refered 2 Masked men hudling over me, am I in the emergancy room... To be continued... |
Addy Is IN..:)
SOrry Bout The Wait... |
Sup. . You know what I can do Sand. This is Quotient so yea.
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<--- Down if you're accepting people. . Denial's accepted, though.
Contact: bagels |
cats need sum heat..new b to this site not to da game..18-3 on da siccness.net if u aint aware that site the same shit this is..but i like this site its bigger better if uneed heat hit me up..heres sumthin quick..hola back i can come harder if u want me to.
probly never heard-of-me be-fore my rhymes are the siccest/ odlly ill verb-ally asaughlt ya-foes just to handle my buisness/ im quicker then ali ill drop u leave ya dead in ya-traks/ cuz im the ill-est my flows reach ya mouth an explode-on-contact/ the real-est emcee to have an adverse vo-cab still uzin dem-macs/ face dem facts ya crew needs me a true emcee/ one that can spit-flames never afford to be beat/ i spit solid heat in ya direction to re-main on top/ my verses are cursed wit pure perfection abuzin my-glocks/ this aint all talk need a great one luckily im in stock/ last one left after im takin the ones dat passed me up will be dropped/ on da daily bases u just fuked wit an impatient racist/ ill leave ya bloody an faceless masacurd on ya front step/ my death cases are pileing up on my desk wavin the tek/ to gain respect show me ya life an ill erase it u hearin da best/ |
yo :::
if this isnt a battlin crew, and just mostly a well recpected 'squad', then i will drop a verse... [delete this if i have to drop my crew -Aces of Destruction- for this] anyways.. ::: heres the topic [being murderd and sent to hell] [topical battle :: ] ::: being rushed by hooded cats with bats and gats...instead of running i stand straped and attack// but with lack of back i get cracked and capped, bitch slapped then dispatched// i was snatched by the undertaker grapsed and trapped taken by elevator to satans layer// trying to say prayers, but just sighing out dead air gettin mocked by the grim reaper ''dont be scared''// i led to the center of the earth as i prepare to enter the worst place possible// you think im intimdated, bitch that cant be plausable im unstopable even in hell striking 'fear' in me is impossible// traped in a blaze of flame the steel gates raise as im blamed for my sinful scriptures// the gates led to a scolding-inferno, but i cant-be-burned-yo/ im immune so intune that as soon as i step in you know i belong here my sins were remarkable/ i got rushed by a she-golbin she-be-hoblin tryin to attack as i steped back and cliped her// some time passes as i be blastin blunt after blunt with the Devil himself// tradin gory war stories in his chamber for the remander of time writing rhymes and throwin darts at the popes head ona shelf// for ever i remain in gang of satan the army of hell// sinful solider with a insane fraim of mind... "death to god", is how im compelled// i am traped in the grasp of evil// i never repented my sins now theirs no chance for retrevil//: |
here is one of my verses
Vendetta's fat raps think they fit like they The Iron Man I got the iron tounge and the iron hand I make the final stand The final showdowns come round and hit ya As I throw down my gauntlet so switch the picture If ya, look in the mirror you bound to get a reflection Like with, every action there is a reaction your battles get no attraction Listen up good call me short and it's on Bust you in the dome cuz I got little man's syndrome So dig it like like a shovel digs a ditch A West coast rhyme without using the word bitch Now his legal lyrics are very swell but this nigga doesn't come close to ILLEGAL clientele I give vets the Lethal Injection To see if any skill is detected, hitting you in your midsection You get up, kid, but you get hit up like graffiti it might be time for you to join the anti-gang Comittee when is he going to learn rapping aint a game ohh you got ur name from def jam Vendetta your lame if you wanted to get "played"<pimped> u should called yourself Marvin 'GAY' because he wants to get laid some much that his pubic hairs would faid I make world wide service, so niggas get nervous Vendetta's talkin jive like his crew label His unstable "elements" smack their relevence to fabels Able bodied cross breed of elephant and cable stop gettin hard off a wooden table My unforgetable shows - I'm fed up with those I have smashed vendetta so much were no longer enimies or foes I just call him by his new name "HOE" And he grabs the first mo joe you should've been home instead of recitin' them triflin' flows i'm a master of perfection I'm spittin' acid in ya section like alien ressurection Because of my freestyle, I have no time practice I'm hangin' emcees upside down and backwards Thought the fact is, I'm on point, like a cactus Fuck emcees, I eat planets, like Galactus Yo I write a illegal rhyme, in the length of a legal time My thoughts are sharp like the thorn darts on a lethal vine I strike with vocal blows to overload ya frontal lobe you front you fold styles olde-r than english in this, I got more back than dorsal fins I force a win over decision rock cuts with surgical precision are you allergic to the competition 5 or 6 months and ur still riding my jock as if I was on a horseback Ride up the trail, gettin tipsy off the ale keep writing the legal lyrics, it won't get you thrown in jail I feel kinda swale so it's time to tip the scale Fuck the line limit I won KOED VENDETTA pm me ur reply |
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LET-ME-IN! LET-ME-IN! LET-ME-IN! LET-ME-IN!
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iight ill just spit a topical verse here and ill let it be evaluated, ill create one now, im new to topicals but i won my first topical so im giving it a try along with text battles
Topic:Love Ive been lonely for the feeling thats been empty in my heart Ive been living a normal life but inside im missing one part Ive been waiting for passion and for someone to care Someone to hold and someone to bare Ive been gaining anxiety for someone to be by my side Someone to heal my wounds and make me feel happy inside Ive been thriving for this one thing which i am yet to get I finally found her and everything changed after we met She had ravishing eyes and she was as lovable as a dog I was holding her hands when we decided to jog I started to feel something i never felt in the past It was a feeling very special one that i would always fore-cast I wondered what this feeling was and the ways it made me feel How it made my heart turn lively and made all my problems conceal It was like a soothing feeling like wen you pet a dove Then i realised wat it was and it was the feeling of Love iight i just made that now, lettme know wat ya think, if ya need me to spit another topical then ill do it, so am i in? |
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