shit was real, deep emotion really showed,nice vocab,nice word play, alil edgy at first but evened up all in all nice drop kid, keep postin this ill shit.peace god.

damn thats all i got 2 say bout this shit man sometimes when people flow its like 3d they come right at ya

uppin
last time fo sho

nyce post playboy, nice job for tha first time, good story.......as always things like wordplay and rhyme scheme could have been betta, but practice helps that ish out, good luck, peace, 1 luv

hott love shit yo

i lied uppin again

***Uppin***

holla unreal i R @ school lol doing work not, you know me not doing work you leaving early? hope not!

my O.P. is that on my IQ scale this iz a 8 of 28

28 is the highest score by the user

tupac at
rapworlds.com peace! nice drop,!

wht the hell does tht mean? anyway raid go on aim

Damn, nice drop kid. .you have talent for sure, very emotional throughout this, took me on some what of a rollercoaster journey while reading it - deep emotional lines, very poetic description throughout trapped with passion and that shone through in this. Vocabulary could of been a touch higher and the bar length could perhaps be made shorter, but other than that i thought this was a good drop my man, although more poetry than open mic from my opinion, stay up!