aight keep themn votes cumin ppl remember no DICK RYDING............................................ .................................................. ..

^^Dawg.....swift you have got to be one of the biggest bitches I've seen in a long time, and you haven't been on the site for that long, stop bitching when people dont vote for you, obviously they thought ya shit wasnt good enough to beat this cat..so shut the fuck up.....Your shit wasnt even that dope anyway....But in my opinion you still took this battle, you had better werdplay, better punches and better disses, although you had a choppy flow.....and dont stretch yor bars as much, otherwise it fucks the flow and then without the flow your verse is fucked.....(just some help from a Vet).....

So +1 Swift

aight thanks

keep voting............................................ .................................................. ..................................................

let me break it down
multis-jack
flo- jack
punches-swif
wordplay-swif
vocab-jack
structure-swif
consistency-jack
CLOSE FUCKING BATTLE
but jack took more shit in my book
no beef, keep elevat'n
Vote=Jack

awww shit dis was a sik battle but................jack took it by a hair on dis 1 swift man u dont seem like the average newbie but anyway good battle

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swift check ya pm

Yo one more vote, read the battles carefully and make it a good one!.............UPPIN FO DIS ONE>.................................................. ................

stop swayin votes and shit swift, just wait for someone to vote its down to 1 last vote, no Dick ryders, no bull shit votes, nothing

yo this was a tight battle, but im givin it to jack cause i was just feelin his verse more, ya feel me, poll vote- jack

yo jack can u hit this up with a honest vote, thanx homie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0666#post670666

Im not Im tellin them to maek a good one cuz its 4-4 retard cill out.........................UPPIN>.................................................. .....................