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Carmine 08-04-03 12:28 PM

Slim_lanky:Carmine you don’t even belong on this site /
Your job is not rap it is cooking me dinner every night/
Carmine:Don't gotta step-to the-mic,It comes-straight-ta-me/
I got telekinesis,Like-tha-gurl-from carrie/
Slim_lanky:Suck my dick bitch, that is humor! A girl tryin to spit/
Spread your lips bitch and ill show you my banana split/
Carmine:Oh god that's funny,but only thing that splits/
It's your mamma's legs while her son's rubbin her tits/
Slim_lanky:So you bring my momma in to this, that aint the right scene/
At least she not the hoe, dropped out of school and having a kid at 14,/
Carmine:I love how* you try so hard to defeat me/
But u couldn't win this battle even if u beat me/(physically)
Slim_lanky:Why do you even try against me you cant hold a fight
First, get a face lift then do some exercise get rid of that cellulite
Carmine:You're fatter than me,would you like some proof??/
If i punched you in the head,your ass would hit the roof/
Slim_lanky:For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor
Carmine:If you wanna be better you've gotta admit to suckin/
Wasn't it dashowstoppa2 that i walked in on you fuckin???/


There vote on it now....

MiCsYcKlE 08-04-03 12:31 PM

well i think carmine won after i read all this and props to carmine for fixing hers

Not bad Girly Gurl
Holla

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 12:32 PM

Carmine you don’t even belong on this site /
Your job is not rap it is cooking me dinner every night//
Suck my dick bitch, that is humor! A girl tryin to spit/
Spread your lips bitch and ill show you my banana split//
So you bring my momma in to this, that aint the right scene/
At least she not the hoe, dropped out of school and having a kid at 14,//
Why do you even try against me you cant hold a fight/
First, get a face lift then do some exercise get rid of that cellulite//
For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore/
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor//


-slim lanky-

Carmine 08-04-03 12:34 PM

All Late.........lol.....But No Hate!!1~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Carmine 08-04-03 12:35 PM

..thanx......still uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 12:37 PM

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

d-mecca7 08-04-03 12:38 PM

sorry for the free post but i brought back all my old battles that never got closed and i was hoppen ya ll could go vote on them please thanx holla front 1

Carmine 08-04-03 12:39 PM

aight aye I'll do it in a lil bit..~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Carmine 08-04-03 12:42 PM

Still uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

d-mecca7 08-04-03 12:47 PM

my vote goes to slim better disses mad props to carmin tho good battle by both vote slim and peeps go vote on all of my old battles that never bein closed

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 12:50 PM

still uppin for votes!!!!! ill hit your battles up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!__________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________________________

Rappad 08-04-03 12:53 PM

ok since this battle was like kinda fucked up its hard to call close shit but i gotta go with slim he has some better punches since you guys did it 2 lines at a time i guess its 3-2 slim in that case but w/e
Vote=slim
yo can you hit this up with an honest vote
thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70439
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Carmine 08-04-03 12:59 PM

keep votin this ain't over till 5 votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~

Rappad 08-04-03 01:06 PM

yo slim in my battle you explained the vote that you voted for me but poll voted for lil loco wtf?
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Rappad 08-04-03 01:07 PM

and sorry for freepostin just gotta get this straightened out
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Slik 08-04-03 01:09 PM

whack ass battle......but slim gets my vote.....his punches wre harder......came wit better wordplay too....

Carmine....Check Bitchslapped

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 01:27 PM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Carmine 08-04-03 01:43 PM

That was a bitch vote with Slik but whateva..~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So2Speak 08-04-03 02:27 PM

yo check this u all open ya eyes
this shit was a wired battle n it wasnt awsome on any leval

but carmine took it i seen like 1 or 2 multis werdplay was ok...all slim was doing was talking about girls cooking n being fat...wid a 1 word rhyme scheme or ...hat,cat,bat,lap,nap,trap,crap,flap....lol...k

i didnt see anything from anyone that justifise as EVEN ANYWERE AS OK lolol but carmine gets is when 1 or 2 mutls ok werdplay n flow...n creativity slim didnt come with enough lines he would have won if he came wid more lines hola

Carmine 08-04-03 02:39 PM

aight come on ppl keep postin' onthis shit~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~

MetaPhysik 08-04-03 03:03 PM

carmine why da hell u gotta include my name in ya shit do i even kno u hahahaha there is gonna be a reply fo u tho...........................no hate and sorry fo freepostin

Born To Kill 08-04-03 03:11 PM

Carmine you don’t even belong on this site /
Your job is not rap it is cooking me dinner every night//
Suck my dick bitch, that is humor! A girl tryin to spit/
Spread your lips bitch and ill show you my banana split//
So you bring my momma in to this, that aint the right scene/
At least she not the hoe, dropped out of school and having a kid at 14,//
Why do you even try against me you cant hold a fight/
First, get a face lift then do some exercise get rid of that cellulite//
For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore/
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor//

I'm voting for this one because it's the only one I saw in complete verse form.
Thus...
It wins with nice punches, decent flow, and humor thrown in.

I ain't got the time nor the patience to go back and distinguish what was freeposting and what was verses...

Get ya'll's shit together and drop the fuckin way everyone else on the site does.

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 10:01 PM

Uppin for votes need one more!!!___________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

Carmine 08-04-03 10:46 PM

WTF wasn't in battle form...Man fuck you;you need to read that shit before you post.......We tried something new...His was juss like mine....~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Slim_Lanky 08-04-03 11:52 PM

yea i mean that was a kinda unfare vote but shit happens you know i got jewed once when i was a newb it happens to every one but uppin for votes!!!!

J.K.O 08-05-03 12:14 AM

slim gets it with better punches,word play,and flow

so final vote slim

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