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SmokaJoka. 08-15-03 04:15 PM

neither of u have room to talk seein as lilbrick is about to be gone and youngblood has a smaller record than me.....

peace
4:20

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:15 PM

Look at MIC what ever the rest of his name is. HE JUST JOINED THIS SITE LAST MONTH and has 1000+ posts. He aint been around he is just some fat guy who say 8 mile and goes on other sites biting lyrics and comes here and posts all day. Dog you got a lil skill i'd admit but you ain't on A VET LEVEL, you are still a little boy man. Wait til real vets start to vote.

SmokaJoka. 08-15-03 04:17 PM

and it'll be all towards me cuz they will see ur a bitch.....bitch........................

peace
4:20

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:17 PM

ANTI-HERO you have to have 300+ posts to vote sorry. Notice all the people that voted for Smoka all joined the site in July. I bet they all from a differnt rap site that got closed and came to this one...What a coincidence!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

SmokaJoka. 08-15-03 04:19 PM

no i'm from HHAP, MS, FX, II, DUC, and many others....that are still up and running.....stop being a fuckin loser....

peace
4:20

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:22 PM

Damn look at all those rap sites you are on. Wonder why i said he copies and pastes lyrics. I CAN BET A MILLION DOLLARS if you go on all the sites he is on, you will see that he bit something. I can bet. DOG YOU A HERB you aint shit. all you got is played out punches, NO META's, NO MULTIES, and 1 personal and your flow sucks cause you stretch your lines out soooooooooooo much

SmokaJoka. 08-15-03 04:29 PM

every single one of my lines were new and authentic...only the Sars line was played....into ur Ali line makes up for that....and go check the other sites....lol...ur just mad cuz u suck.....everyline line i had had a meta....which is the same as wordplay....and every line i had had multis.....ur vocabulary sucks....ur punches were weak....ur personals were WAYYYY OFFF.....and u had noooo multis whatsoever except for small words that are igsignificant.......ur are a fuckin herb.....i've been battlin for two years kid u'll never rank to the caliber of me.....u suck....now stop wastin page space u fuckin camel toe

peace
4:20

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:34 PM

Listen to this dude. Wordplay and muli's are not the same thing you ass hole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you been battling for 2 years and you dont know that then you aint worth shit...wait you already aint worth shit. you just got an army of dickrders who all came in July hahahahahahahaha

Why dont real vets vote Fgee, Sureal, -_-, Avalon, Ruthless, X-Ecution....etc the list goes on and on. Dog if you ask any of them who know the differnce between multi's and wordplay and meta's and punches and who know's when a person has FILLER. you will finally know that you SUCK.

Read your verse over kid, EVERY SINGLE BAR had FILLER LIKE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:35 PM

and my ali line wasn't played it had to do with the following line you ass hole...but ofcoarse you wouldn't know that because you use filler every other line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SmokaJoka. 08-15-03 04:37 PM

Quote:
From Myself:
line i had had a meta....which is the same as wordplay


Quote:
From lilbrick:
Wordplay and multi's are not the same thing you ass hole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


^^^u make urself look stupider with every reply......and sure let fgee and Ruthless come here....they'll think u suck too.....

peace
4:20

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:40 PM

aight my bad i read that wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lilbrick005 08-15-03 04:49 PM

Dog you are a herb the people that voted for you are ALL newbies. Except iceberg...who was a hate voter cause i voted against him in his battle with phixion, why you think he gave that bull shit vote. and that MIC cat just joined in july and i never heard of him so i can tell he is a nobody!!!!!

Dog you dont even know half of the vets on this site. You aint shit man.

lilbrick005 08-15-03 05:24 PM

CALLING ALL VETS....THE REAL ONES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

youngblood 08-15-03 07:30 PM

yo lil brick check ya pm's dawg

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Pax 08-16-03 12:17 AM

flow: smoke
Punches: smoke
Wordplay: smoke
personals: no one since bricks wasnt true (and i know that they werent)
multis: smoke
metas: smoke

overall: smoke

fuck smoke had an iller verse fo show. other kid edited his whole damn verse lol and it still isnt as good. brick was vote swayin too. and his flow was fucked up real bad


vote=smoka

Sir Cedrych 08-16-03 02:06 AM

yo i think lil brick came harder with his punches,more disses by him, his structure was perfect, vocab was decent, didnt see many multiples,and his wordplay was excellin more than sj,

vote=lilbrick

no hate vote at all

Emotion 08-16-03 03:12 AM

I think lil brick lost this........I read through both verses and smoka had better word play better punches and a all round better verse,.....Also after the verses lilbrick kept talkin crap this also affected my vote ..........

Vote :smokajoker

Emotion 08-16-03 03:13 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Hypnotic
yo i think lil brick came harder with his punches,more disses by him, his structure was perfect, vocab was decent, didnt see many multiples,and his wordplay was excellin more than sj,

vote=lilbrick

no hate vote at all


U obviously dont know what structure is............

Sir Cedrych 08-16-03 06:32 AM

i explained my vote quite well...no beef tho............................................... .................................................. .......................

Dadi Kewl 08-16-03 08:53 AM

Sorry But Smoka's verse is all messed up
and shit is kinda weak........
Lilbrick's wasn't great but it was a lil harder hitting,
And he had personal's........therefore

Vote=lilbrick

(Some peep's need to learn what a battle verse need's to win)

NewPort 08-16-03 11:31 AM

^^ agreed wit addlib..

Smoke

What in tha hell was that bullshit ? You had to minimize tha font so it didn't take up tha whole page.. wow, talk about stretched lines.. and some of your shit just had terrible flow.. and less-than-hard-hitting punches

LilBrick

I seen you come harder too.. its like you guys got nervous on this shit and wrote a new chapter in a stephen king novel.. yours wasn't all that impressive either

Tha Break Down

Metas : smoke
Punches : brick
Lyrics : brick
Vocab : both
Wordplay : smoke

Vote - lilbrick ...

call me a d/r and get delt wit... i've only seen like 3 ppl post on this shit besides you two.. just from bitchin at each other you made this a 2 page thing.. it shouldn't be like that.. wonders when ppl gonna know how to do shit right

lilbrick005 08-16-03 11:41 AM

Smoka's vote needs to go back down to three because some guy with less than 300 posts voted. Treach P what do you mean my personals where not true. You prolly can't read. I dissed him about his record and about not knowing the differnce between a bar and a line and i also dissed him about his crew. saying he will never get it one (he is the leader of a crew with no name) meaning a wack crew that has nobody's in it...DUMBASS~~!!!!!

Ricochet. 08-16-03 12:08 PM

Punches : lilbrik
Personals - Lilbrik
Metas : smoka
Wordplay : smoka
Vocab : tie - both weakkk
CORNYNESS - TIE... BOTH STRONG!

This was a strange battle... strange cos i seen you both do better and i thort u wud come hard on a pinkslip?? w/e i think brik got it he had better punches and that wins it in a battle... even if it is a poor 1... good luck 2 both of you

vote - lilbrick

return favour please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71362

poll vote and i will

Avalon 08-16-03 01:18 PM

Smoka... not a bad verse actually... the mean less line... a lil forced... but not bad... flow was terrible... if you spit that infront of a crowd they'd never hear a punch...



Lilbricks... Ya verse was... in any and all other forms for the word... horrible... Period... nothing to quote... nothing good... Good bye... make sure no one knows your alias...


Vote: Smoka...

~HoTTie~ 08-16-03 02:40 PM

pretty dope battle..both came hard as hell but i'ma have to go wit smoka..tru dat sars line is played as hell but he made it sick..but of u had some weak points tho..brick u didn't come nearly as hard as u usually do..anyways

Punches : smoka
Metas : smoka
Personals - Lilbrik
Wordplay : smoka
Vocab : tie..neither really

Vote
SmokaJoka


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