RapVerse.com Community - cameronj86 vs Mentally Kursed

I'll break dis bitch down the right way , verse by verse ....

Cams 1stBar
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan

( great opener , good rythme , personal , heavy punch , and funny as shit )

Metals 1st bar
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//

( Froot loops opener was kinda weak , However I got your meaning , and it was clever , even though it didnt come across the way you wanted it , yu might have been able to shorten this line to help the flow and still get yur point across )

1st Bar - Cam 1-0

Cams 2nd bar -
Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words
( Nice line cam , good personal , good punch , nice wordplay )

Mentals 2nd bar
Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//
(Lol , dont think yu were feeding off his verse , even though both bars contain Readers Digest , and you went 2nd , but yu masked it well , and turned it into a nice word flip )

2nd bar - tie

cams 3rd bar
Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?

(lol , true it sucks he remooved the MegaMan pic , but I remember it being there , good personal , nice flow )

mentals 3rd bar
Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//
( Hellen Keller lines are kinda over played , as with Bin ladin aswell , but it aiighht , nothing special )

3rd bar - Cam .....leading 2-0-1

cams 4th bar
I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic

( Great line here , dope shit , Dig it allround )

metals 4th line
Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//
( nice counter punch , good rythmes, but cams was harder )
4th bar - Cam

cams 5th
To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

( Nice closer , ..... Rasheed Wallace , lol , black reaching for wallets , good shit )

Metals closer
Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case

( Obviously we dont have to point out that he MEant FBI ,its pretty obvious , and its a tight verse , good closing material )

Closer vote Mentally Cursed

Summary - Good battle here , after my breakdown I vote for Cam 3-1-1 , but it was closer than that , both MCs came hard and demonstrated some dope skills , Fun to read , fun to judge.

Peace , CrazyE
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