hows that for some better structure bitches, and multies, this is pissing me off, some peeps take time to type all this shit out and verify everything., but to me this is prewriting, so when i'm in a battle i write what comes to head and there is no turning back, mc takes time to think, y'all bitch ass neiggers..

it was a bright sunny day in the middle of the night/
2 dead boys came to fight/
but insted mike gave him a herb adn a light/
the nboys smoked up and obtained new sight/
now in stead of fighting they start war/
by this they are takeing out your core/
this site is getting to be a bore,
mabie i'll start up a rapbattles store/
then all you posers would have something to wear,
a hoody with the word PINE_CONE in big print/
and with all my money i get, i fix you so you cant stare,
cause my windows will be full tint/
" oh look at pine cone, he is the drone,
and i condone, that pine cone game me a lone:/
thats what y'all should say cause i give you the advice,
but insted most of ya's bitch me out/
this kinda shit is what makes me SHOUT,
fuck it drives me to even like that fuck "OBI TRICE"/
now, is there anyone that still has some commun sence?,
cause they are the ones that i'd like to battle/
hence, when they are in my sea of words, i'll lend them a paddle/

no part of this battle just tellin him things

man pice-cone winter is commin mabye then you can chill/
mabye you momma should have been on that birth control pill//-1
cuz man ur flippin out, just like water commin out of a spout/
during a summer drout, fuck shoot at you like u was a goat//-2
even if u was a goat no one would want you, and for me that makes two/
and man i though u saisd that you were through?, make up ur mind just come back out of the blue//-3

i'll show you up anyday you want, i'll just take my time adn write my perfect lines........
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yo real mc.............you faggot.sorry for tha freepost but ima get ya investigated coz ya put a hate vote on ma battle.......sum vets av already said i merked him yet ya put a hate vte against me...its your downfall

yea ok that was no hate vote its just my opinion you can't be purswaiding your vote man i vote for who i want when i want and you can't tell me who i have to vote for. its the same a an election u can tell a person to vote for the same person as u vote thats not rite man go check it again and then mabbye u'll see that it's not a hate vote dumb ass!!!!!!!1

yo lyracal, how do you think won this battle? you have been here a while you should know.............
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OMG!!!..THIS IS THE ILLEST BATTLE EVER!!!...The real mc had multies out the ass..and he had lyrics and all that tight shit..if he keep writing like that..he will someday be the illest on the site!!!..Pine cone came ok..but damn..I dont never want to fuck with the real mc..he is the definition of dopeness to the max:cool:
he gets my vote...









If today was opposite day..

Hit this shit up with the final vote..peace..oh and pine cone gets my vote..his verse made better sense..

why thanx for the comment Adrenaline Rush but vote on the pole and i might beable to win cuz i know that u didn't vote on the pole because i had 4 vote this moring at like 11:00 EST so plz vote the ploe.

I can't vote yet but i'd vote for Real MC coz i was really feelin what he was sayin shit like "beat his ass wit that phone, so he'll have broken bones, tape his mouth shut so he can't moan". I liked that.

Vote on this battle for me will ya's
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84407

Peace!!!

I didn't mean vote for me as in actually vote for me. I meant vote on the battle. Just so there's no confusion. I used the wrong choose of words sorry!!!

id give this to real......

man i liked alot of ya punches.....flow was okay......
id say u both should follow a constant structure then flow and delivery would be better.....

vote: real MC

yo anything more...i need HONEST votes on these two battles cuz people sleep on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

peace!