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so wut how bout it peepz..wut'd y'all think of my battle...tell me yo...
thanx..much appreciation... peace |
i liked his battle verse
.peep it ......... |
Twisted Needs A Little Bit Of Elevating.. But I'll Say In Because he Has Potential... Everybody Needs To Start Workin On Their Record And Elevatin.. I Want This To Be A Good Crew Subby.. So Get Active And Do Some Ish...
Twisted Rep Us In Ya Sig... |
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I Dun Have MSN.. But You Should Download AIM At www.aim.com..................................
Seriously.. And Then Get At Me On AIM.. SN In Profile. |
msn is better
aim sucks big the biggest infact. so yea. get msn :) |
I knew that Wil aint that good, bitch was bittin all along, I got my record up to 6-4, maybe 7-4 if Token don't get d/r votes like he normally does.
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Get It Right Kid...I Said You Were Kicked Out For Bein Wack...I Neva Said You Were Wack.Crew Leaders Did.
I Thought You Were Cut For Bein Inactive Myself.. Quote:
Fuck Me Huh?...Aight Kid |
Dude you said it like you said I was being lack, better structure your senteces next time, cuz you made it look like you said I was whack.
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Right...Dont Lose Your Shoes By Jumpin To Conclusions Next Time
Get It Right The First Time.If I Thought You Were Wack Id Say So |
Aight, not hate, just try to phrase your sentences so it don't sound like you dissing people.
I'm out... Peace... What? |
If You Think Im Dissin You Then Ask Me
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dont jump the gun.
thats all i gotta say. |
Or End Up Wit A Blow(n) Hole
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yea that would suck.
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ROFLMAO...I Needed That^.
People Got Beef All Of A Sudden Uppin This Im Done For The Night |
Rise
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yo yo yo.....nigga yo holla dogg what#'/??
what what...mess with me and ill bum you, step to this and ill bum bum bum bum bum you. yeh chek it out homeslice...give me some slak jak... hit me in the goolies and throw some boes... what>?tu cents is in the house and im gonna bum him, chek it out dogg holla nizzle for sho' |
^^^was that your verse. if it was u need some serious elevation.......i hope u were just playin
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aight here is a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83318 andhere is a quick little freestyle I would throw in some multi's but I think the caused me my last battle so My lyrics increase to a heat that'll cease your heart beat// this inferno's meltin Iceman to a slow creep// I'd like to hit at craven cause that shit was wack so fuck a slack// but i'll throw one to him and turn around to iceman and throw it back// he's the type of little bitch to run n be a snitch tell'n bout cats that just got banned// someone should sow his mouth shut, flows come out his butt his shitty rhymes belong in trash cans// yo ice I could be below freezing and still melt ya// cause the punches I throw are seizing and will pelt ya// ice ya better duck cause I'm shootin hollow tips // this is tha shit that makes your whole crew swallow dick// |
I said I wasnt going to but I had to throw in some multi's anyways oh well somone let me know whats goin on with this shit I really would like to get in this shit
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^^^Elevate and come back, that's my vote, you got some skill but for right now I am gonna say no, your good and all, but get some battles under your belt.
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True...You And VA Need Work |
I thought thats what this crew was here for to help elevate
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Oh Yea Thats Right...Im Thinkin This Is DM...Well Im Only Co-Leader Here So We'll Hafta See Wat Leaders Of This Operations Say
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yo alpha I just checked out ya last two battles man you got some nice vocab
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I Kno
J/K Thanks.. Uppin This |
Quote:
Did I Say You Can Talk Co-Leader??? No I Didn't.. Your On Timeout... Lmao J/k... VA Imma Have To Say No For Now.. I'm Really Not Just Acceptin Anybody That Tries Out.. Just People On The Right Track That Are Only A Few Steps Away From Becomind Good... Elevate And Come Back.. |
well then can I get some guidance on what I need to work on
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think through your lyrics
life isnt a free style. -/a painter that says" i can paint a picture in a day" may not be as good as a painter's one master peice that took his life/- |
I spit verbal physics that halts time, incisory lyrics to detract spines...
I pop nines, when crews collective brain cells implode from hot lines.. Derisive verbs, put peeps in hearse then evaporate the spectres.. Not words i destroy with letters, got more killer b's on c-d's than wu with vendettas.. Depart more knowledge than afflictions of alzheimers conditions.. Forget fists i fight with diction,assault crews in illegitimate positions... |
What Yall Think About Me
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Pretty Good.. I'll Add You.. But Get Some Battles Goin And Shit Dawg...
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past sites genius?
aim/msn? mic or battle? |
All Those Who Are Apart Of Raw Diamondz...Go To The Diamond Mindz Forum.The Subforum For RD Says Omens But Its Gettin Changed
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87179
can yall at least look at this and tell me what you think I think it was a good battle for me and then I hope you would reconsider about lettin me in ya crew |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0881#post860881
My only battle so far, the kid I am battleing bites, literally, his verse style changes all the time, but oh well, that is what I may have to deal with. |
ALL PEOPLE TRYING OUT FOR RAW DIAMONDS ARE IN... the raw diamonds is a chance to proove yourself worthy for Diamond Minds and it is free open entry, NO TRY OUT REQUIRED,,, goto the raw diamonds subforum and strap on a raw diamonds sig NOT a diamond minds one,,, if your are ill as hell and active then you will be considered for Diamond Minds...... GOOD LUCK TO ALL... this message also applies to anyone applying after this is posted,.
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Wtf^^^
Thats Not What I Had In Mind.. Unless Your Gonna Be Recieving IMs To Kids I Wanna Elevate... Disreguard That Shit Everybody.. Thats Not What I Wanted To Have Done... |
Yo Dawg im new at diss sight but i want in too. PM me cuz im just learnin how to work diss shit
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