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ya flow was tight and ya topic kick ass

pretty good vocab and you had some good multis in there, pretty nice...Keep it up

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this was pretty hot, flow was coo..
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yo anybody here wna battle

I'd actually like to hear this in a song someday. It's really cool. Enjoyed reading it a lot. Never bored me.

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I liked dis piece a lot
nice flow and multies
good vocab
9/10
keep droppin!

lol ho wmany rdeplies you got now??

Unique...nice well thought out...

Have to read it twice I know there is hidden meanings..in your scriptes..

Flow was on point into me vocab was well used...

Nice piece..

..I can easily see why this piece received so much 'Love' this was truly an amazing piece..you really dug deep within your self to write this piece..saying that I would only assume this is your life story..if not..it is still a great piece and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work..

^ yeha... if flies over most peoples heads that the entire point of this piece is me telling how writing my thoughts and feelings down has eased my pain by allowing me to express myself.. kinda like a journal, except it rhymes... lol

anyway, thanks for all the positive comments... i appreciate it heaps...

That waz doper than methapetimime son, do it how you do it cause you done it how you did it? Bless the Mic!

That was doper than Methapetimime son, Do it how you do it cause you done it how you did it? Bless the mic!

dont freepost in his thread

^ lmao... thanks... but i guess someone should close this, ive heard enough positive things about this piece to have it on an album if i ever make one... so im happy with the feedback and thanks to all for replying...

good topic, nice vocab and multis, good read overall, not anything you need to work on in this peice

that was some hot shit

nice