[color=blood red]Shit, I Didn't Even Know Amend Still Existed Here......Ha! Ha!


Does The Cat Who Used To Go By IDhragonzI (Or Some Shit), sK!LLz, u.E. aka Tone-E Tone, i.E., DoPeN/DoPeY (One Of The 2), Repitwa aka Fracture, CoMetaPhoRe (Or Some Shit Again), MuLingHa, Eck, DejureTheFlaw, Or Anybody From The Original Textual Harassment Still Exist Here?


Shit, The Only People I Remember On This Site Are Amend (The Old Trivia For Points Games), Jae Cyph (Bannin' Me From HHI Or Some Shit & Being My First I-Net Chick), Camarac (If It's The Same One), SpLiT-ScREeN & Bruk Formerly Known As self (Because Of His Sigs)

Ha! Ha! Ha! I Remember When I Used To Think Bruk Was A Chick...... :cool:


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amed shut up ei is what keeps this site alive, i agree with everyone else you should just leave, your just bitter cause you finally found out nobody likes you and your overrated.

^^^
See you the prime example of what I'm talking about,
I heard people like Jay-Z, Freeway, Royce the 5'9, Nas use that rhyme scheam all the time

Jay-Z on Renegades......
"Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty often
My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home/"

"Could not stress to me I wasn't grown; 'specially on nights
I brought somethin home to quiet the stomach rumblings/"

Thats shit is

....AB.....C..ABC
...ABC...............DE/

............DE.....
..DE............../

Like on that last line, "wasn't grown" and "somethin' home" is the only words that rhyme in that, and they not at the end...
It dosnt have to rhyme at the end for a lien to rhyme, it depends on how you flow with it....

I'm not 'bout to sit here and explain shit to your lame ass about rhymes schaems and shit....Got damn yo ass just the type I'm talking about......

WOW! .. i beat him here .. O.O




Of course its me you fucker, Lev!
I left for like .. a year and half though, that was when you modded LLBL .. so i doubt you'd know me much, if at all.

[color=blood red]I Just Remember The Green Thing In The Avatar & U Were In p!LLz Crew.....[/color]

Shut ... The .. Fuck .. Up

"Do not step to me -
I'm awkward, I box lefty
often
My pops left me
an orphan, my momma wasn't home/"
"Could not stress to me I wasn't grown;
'specially on nights I brought somethin home
to quiet the stomach rumblings/"
the rhyme scheme is:

AB, AB, AB, CD
CD, CD, EF

I have no idea what the fuck you think is happening there, but obviously you dont know how to count a rhyme scheme for shit. Its actually not that complicated, your trying to make it into something it isnt. The reason the end bars dont rhyme there is because its a run on sentence, the lines dont stop to rhyme there, he carries the bar on and forces it into another rhyme.


Dipshit.

Cam Is The Icon To A D/R. . .Nuff Said
Just Read His Posts, He Critisizes Anyone Opposing His Opinion & Quotes/Explains Further With Anyone Who Said The Agree'd.
& Cam, You Have No Deal. .Wheres The CD, Whats The Label.
I Seen Your Pic, Labels Take Looks Into Consideration Unless Its Online, & Last Time I Looked, Your About 15 With An Accent & Lanky. Im Not Leaving RB, Far From It. & Who Says I Gotta Contribute.? Im Not Teaching Because Im Still Learning, Which Will Never Stop. I've Been Here Longer Then You Cam, So I AM COOLER.!

Kid, who gives a fuck that you've been here before me? A couple of months more, wow .. drop the names of the people that actually give a fuck. Fact is, ive always been and still am better than you, and the board see's that. Your fucking pathetic. Making thread's on a message board for newer members to feed your ego, but its backfired and now your trying to save face by turning attention to me .. just give it a rest and drop it already, you've made yourself look dumb as fuck just by posting this, and if i EVER see you call someone a herb again, i'll just link you to this thread and show you your nothing better than they are.

Just drop the subject now, fairy cake.

Your fucking lame.

Blah blah blah. That's all I see. Same people bitching about the same thing since fuckin 2002. Half the people listed sucked anyways. So don't worry about it.

Oh and Cam.. that wasn't the real Fracture.. I hope you know that lol.

How you arguing with me if you argree you sayin the same exact thing, ass.
..

Regardless how the fuck you twisted the shit up (how the fuck you split bars up with one word and shit) When the last time you seen a person write shit like that!?!

Yo ass talking about some....
asifhj;p
asd
a
apsdjpoj, adpij/

Tha Fuck!?!


He still didn't go like
.........AB
.........AB/

however you put it.

OF course he rolled over that why I added the next line to SHOW that..
I'm talknig about 2 lines at a time

1................2.......................3........ ...............4
Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty often

1................2......................3......... .................4
My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home/


Lefty often
wasn't home/

Thats that end of the 2 lines, they don't rhyme, yhea he used other words in the line to rhyme but it's still not the traditional
.........AB
.........AB/

That was I was sayin ALL ALONG..so what ta fuck!?


It don;t fuckin matter aruging with a you anyway about how to WRITE a fuckin a rhyme down..... I was just using a fuckin examle and you takking it to heart so, I must of stuck a damge to your little textcee complex. IT's alot of pople who can write good on text, but can't flow for shit..........

No, the fact is .. in audio YOU DO NOT WRITE SO THE BARS ARE EVEN, YOU WRITE TO THE BEAT .. hence the line goes:

" Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty
often My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home... "

and THATS how the fucking rhyme goes, its not supposed to rhyme the last two words in the sentence .. BECAUSE HE IS NOT A FUCKING TEXTCEE, ITS IN AUDIO. Your writing to a beat, it doesnt need even lines that rhyme at the end.

word to cam, i was about to say that.

See you arguing with me and don';t know the fuckin line....

awakward goes with often and orphan the way he said it, he said it with an accent to rhyme with often and orphan
so the multies is like
step to me-awkward
lefty-often
left me-orphan

I knwo he's saying it to a beat....but if were were writing it down on paper or on text thats how it would go
you don;t do no...

adfadfadfaa
ad/
adfdf
adffddadfadfadfadf
adadf/

Someobdy might be dropin a text but they stilll have a beat or flow in mind, or at least I would THINK they would.

Now the way you just text that yhea you can SEE where the the word rhyme, wit all the bold and italic shit
but if you would just type it stright out without all that

Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty often
My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home
Could not stress to me I wasn't grown; 'specially on nights
I brought somethin home to quiet the stomach rumblings

You KNOW mofos would be on here like "that dosn't rhyme
becasue lefty often and home don;t rhyme", the flow is off becasue specaily on nights and stomach rumblings don't rhyme", not even realize what going on in the verse.

And this shit is irrelevant becasue for all I know I could be aruging somebody who can't keep a beat if you had Dr. Dre in a safe so...Fuck this, wasnin time on some bullshit....

and your analyzation of a rhyme scheme is for what reason...

whitelighting said something a few pages back about Vets taking Newbies as students and help them elevate...i suggested that and it didnt get off the ground

Chrit, Sureal both said: It sounds good but we are too lazy to actually help

If the talents is getting low here then practice until you own this board...then talk shit to everyone...until then

SHUT THE FUCK UP AND PRACTICE

^ He is actually right. The reason the newbie's here are shit is because all their doing is going against the same bullshit newbie's, if you keep going against people worse than you, you wont get anywhere, if you get beat time and time again by good members, eventually you will get better. Unfortunatly, none do this. me included. So yeah, i realise their shit. I see its partially my fauult they are shit. But ehhh .. no one ever taught me, even as a newb i was better than newb's are now when they first start. They seem to all use the same style of forced multi's and generic lines, hardly any personals. None try for newer wordplay, they just use played old stuff. No original concepts. Which is why i cant be bothered here anymore, i gave up battling here and id much rather conversate in the lounge here, making sonnage posts and beinga generally high level boarder.

= )

^I agree

But w/ so many members its inevitable that there will be
a majority of 'wack' heads...we just gotta help..hope...
and pray that most will elevate

^ Yes, but with the number of members here, there should be an equal ammount of good member's, and there isn't. See what im trying to say ? There's no way you can make it happen unless the newer members actually dig in and try to become decent.

...we should go on trisha

Im gonna post this final statement, then i wont post in here again. I think by posting this, i speak for me, Cyph, Quo, Tone-E, all of us who have been here long enough to be considered the new RB 'vets', so listen up ..


We all know the reason we began posting in the first place was to display & improve our rhyme / writing abilities. After being around each other, and dropping rhymes for multiple years, it was logically the next step to relate to one another in a non-rhyme format. This discussion board is the result of individuals having that want to communicate with their peers without rhyming and without being judged. Weve already proved ourselves, weve already elevated. Weve already mastered what we can from posting in the other forums, there's basically not a lot more we can do.

That's at least how it is for me and most likely many others. I could give a fuck how people rank my open mics, my battles, my success in the various tournaments and league's here or how much certain newer heads here think of me now i don't write / battler here as much as i did. My discussion board traits, my 'ego' that im better even though they take it the wrong way, my writing abilities, etc ..
Because if you're that socially inept that you need affirmation or validation that people view you as gifted or that you feel the need to conform and fit in at a message board with other users that will vote for you just to boost your ego's, you're obviously lacking something in your life as a person. I kinda feel sorry for you, for honestly believing that how you're judged on an Internet hiphop board affects how you view yourself as an individual.

It's pretty damn pathetic when you think about it, but that's how i feel right now. And im tired of kids trying to say im wack / fell off / that i should do more to help newbies when ive done that shit for years already, proved myself one of the better heads here and now i just want to have the freedom to post what i like, when i like. If i want to just chill in here, i will do. And i don't care how many stupid fucks write about me in a rushed topical league magazine, fact is, i was better than you now years before you were who you are now.

if you feel battling lacks, try helping to bring it back. it's not like you won't become one of the top heads over time. The reason all the new kids suck is cause they battle a bunch of other inexperienced new kids and therefore aren't challenged by superior battlers.
It's like playing basketball. If you play against people worse than you, you'll never improve. If you always play against formiddable foes, you'll continually improve your game.

Yes, it's OUR fault that battling sucks now. Not newbies.
But you can't expect us to help them if they aren't willing to help themselves.

End of the discussion. I don't want to hear any more about this shit.


Pz.

I agree with Cam.... hell has frozen over

Well as I can see you arent helping, looks like im going to be doing alot of practicing

Everyone else: Go practice and take constructive critism...

END OF TOPIC!

lol.. WOW ... Cam... Was That Book You Just Posted Worth It ^^

LOL..

I actually believe it was. Im really sick and tired of adressing the same questions of "If SS is shit, then sign back in .." "If the newbie's are wack, why dont YOU help them .." so i thought id close the discussion once and for all.

Why Do You Insist On Contradicting Yourself, If You Didnt Care You Wouldnt Have Reply'd To This Thread 14 Times.

AMEND, there is a new board, by Shadow and Bare...




...but no one wants you at it. :)

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green_wit_envy2005@yahoo.com

Darn.?

inactive as fuck...but good :)

shit from whut i see, alotta uptight joka's on here,
no one's votin on battles and shit, i think i'll try audio's
maybe shit illa in that session,


uh huh