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TheOriginalBlitz 06-23-04 03:42 PM

First off maki...your vocals need lessons//
but before you learn to spit wit perfection//
ma toungue's complexion, 'll warm u up like aerobics sessions//
colder than a ghosts ressurection...like your slaughter//
i come with more torture, than mute kids on the corner tryin' too survive their lyricless disorda//
but you dun' kno this mans got more flow than water!!!

$hadow 06-23-04 03:49 PM

look at dis bitch tryin ta spit beef if he lucky i wnt knock out all of his teeth,
ima lay him out inda street with a bloody materase and a hole-y sheet,think before u speek,i aint talkin romance but fuck wit em and u'll get swept off ur feet,or knocked out of dat lyrical seat,thinkin u wearin a crown ur jus a original fuck up and ur mum looks like a clown,i hate it wen u people go agenst me i a lost soul and ur pissin me off so i mite jus av2 stuff ur face into a telephone pole!!!!!!!!! MOTHER FUCKER

$hadow 06-23-04 04:00 PM

I can see i've bin put to da test, battleing this chick....with no BREAST,
talkin bout battleing a chick,fuck u talkin bout,she gota DICK!
now a red dot on ur head means u in mid-range,
a red dot on your chest will open up ur rib-cage!!!!!!!!!!!!!
,it'll make u shudder,wen it hits u u'll think u bin struck by thunder!
It takes a second for me2 leap,i keep my weapons in reach,
,i don't even give u a chance to speak,
go against me and you'll get swept off your feet,
so just imagine,i get the lead and start ur head crakin',
smack ur door down and start givin ur mother a fukin good smakin,
ill leave wires in ur mouth, or reach in and pull ur fukin skeleton out,
ill put a bullet between ur eyes, sit back and leave u there bleeding till u DIE!!!
i can see that ur scared of me,its time for me to leave u inda RAP CEMETERY!

MOTHER FUCKER!!!

Ca'lam 06-23-04 04:17 PM

ya come second to me, like against nike some ascics..
how you spittin "complex" flows, whenya rhyme scheme <basic..*
i just read that damn verse and can tell you the typa-ta..
spit a wack bar, and get ripped up in this cites cypher..
get slapped in the mouth with ya own c-d, you taste defeat..
if it wore contacts that verse still wouldnt see-me..
man he spitts hollows, but the tip is dull and dont pierce..**
drinking some gatorade only way this herbs fierce..
bitting styles only leaves ya mouth tastless..***
call em dr satan, cause he spitts dry like hes faceless..****

* <basic means less than basic...
**gatoradfes new advertised drink
***its tasteless to steal or bite, plus they prolly taste nasty :P
****dr satan was in a movie house of a thousand corpses i think.. he cutt niaggas up and took they faces and shit...

explanations took longer than the verse did lol

BuddhA 06-23-04 07:12 PM

Dayam nigga that verse was so bad I gotta thump you//
The only hoops u eva got were the ones u jump thru//
or swing around ur hips like a little school girl//
I sippin neat Famous Grousse, while ur lickin strawberry swirl//
I whirl on fools like you like a cyclone//
Im the killa bee, while u just a drone//

Jeneric 06-23-04 09:06 PM

Whats happenin BuddhA, i cant really tell
it seems you slippin, didnt serve that last cat so well

Dont take this personal man
but i dont really like you

Yous a sucker mc
and i might just have to bite you

You could say that im wack
but thats the sound that you make

Sitting on the deck with your g/f
playing paddycake.

*Word up BuddhA no hatn tryin to up my posts
yo go back to my battle it seems you didnt vote*

Detrimental 06-23-04 09:08 PM

Just from that it shows what you spit is shit
Bitch my rhymes scary enough to make you twitch
Your rhymes are worse than that movie Lilo & Stitch
Shoot my rhymes at Hoops and you definitley hear a swish
I'm citrus cool like Mountain Dew or Sierre Mist
I'm the most untouchable lyricist
I compare myself to MC Hammer cuz you can't touch this
I aint gonna compliment you in this chyper
Your rhymes are childish, reminds me of when i was in my dyper
My rhymes sweep you away faster then the accelleration of a viper
That was only 10 lines and i bet from this shit i spit you won't be able rest
My rhymes are way too much for yo' ass to digest
I want you to TRY to top the best while he is on his last 7 dayz of house arrest
Your rhymes won't match, bad like the CD that was just released by Kayne West
From your rhymes...i don't consider you an MC...you on a level much less
Right now i got you in check...like we was playin chess
You can't counter it so i put you in check mate
Probably left yo' ass spechless, i bet you aint got shit to say

Diallo 06-23-04 10:23 PM

fuckin ruff dick ridah from akron ohio, we know you aint gangsta so why you tryna lie ho, actin like you hard in ya bars you a fuckin studio G, with simplistic lines you a bitch and I mean that literally, so back down with your wack sounds and soft lyrics like cum, you should think before you spit and swallow the wack ones, action you ain't bout it but you about alot of talk, think you a gangsta cause you know the crip walk, dressin reds n blues nigga be yo self, if you wanna see albums with yo name up on the shelf, i don't think it'll happen not with the way you actin hard, i got 12 young niggas in blacks n grey dickies ready to pull yo card,

[.:D:.] 06-24-04 01:36 AM

wassup wit this newbie thinkin he can ride and shit??//
When he prolly the nigga on some hard nigga dick//
Nigga you joined in 03 what you scared to post in bitch slap??//
Record still 0-0, nigga this site aint for free posters its for niggas that rap//
Go back to Orlando and have fun at amusement parks//
Dont try to get back at me bitch or the tools will spark//

Wordz AhGod 06-24-04 01:54 AM

all the shit U said in 24 hour cypher, better cut it in half/
U'll catch a stab wound to the left side of Ur ass/
oh shit, now who the fuck is gonna put B-more on the map/
lights go off when U alone, turn back on wen I make dat jaw clap/
stab U wit the same pen U gave me to write U an autograph/
spit beer in Ur face and let it get burn like Hi blood pressure/
U should be sitting in the bullpen caochin ur team on how to take loosing better/

MC AK 06-24-04 02:57 AM

haha, u made me laugh, every line of yours was shit
worse then the smell u leave on the mic after u spit
i shouldnt be mad at chu, i should be mad at ya momma
bitch shoulda got an abortion when she got pregnant off her brutha
eyedentity, u should really try n get a new one
cuz id be embarrased if i was u, it cant be fun
knowin everyone is laughin behind ya back
take my advice, stop rappin, n do sumthin ya not wak at

by tha way, i gotta though another fuken diss at shadow
come out n tell everyone where u got that first line of ya battle hoe
u been watchin 8 mile, yeh the fuken dvd! the added rap battles
where u got that line G.. top of this page, u no the one that cant rite
im just pointin this out cuz it aint cool to bite

riddlemethat 06-24-04 03:44 AM

MCAK today you gon see what its like to pay the price/
Don't know what it'll be till i see snake eyes on my dice/
Head itchin like infested with lice, like ya house is with roaches/
Blow down ya entourage coach by sabotage encroachment/
I look down on you so you can look me in the eye/
If only you was as big as ur ego you might have an identity/
See you on the range, in amongst the cattle with hand outs/
Even if you were a black dot an a piece of white paper, you wouldn't stand out/

Detrimental 06-24-04 05:36 AM

Ok...let me get it straight....your name is Riddlemethat
Shit sounds like a name that is really fuckin wack
Your rhymin skills are bad...that is somethin you lack
When i say you can't rhyme then that is a 100% true fact
Your rhymes need to be put back on the rack
Your rhymes are pure hell
Well i think they need to be put back on the shelf
They aint no good...they aint hard...i'd say they soft as lard
Soft like cotton...shit can't compare to the rhymes i'm droppin
75 posts and 1 win is all you've gotten
Your rhymes are ugly, hiteous, gone bad, and rotten
Your rhymes are worse then the clothes you buy when you are shoppin
12 lines and i know the tables are flip floppin
My rhymes are like fire they burn
My rhymes are flip floppers cuz the tables have turned
Hope you got somethin out of the lesson you learned

lol...i aint really that new...i just stopped comin here cuz i got busy with www.dungeon-productions.com it is fallin apart so i came back....my rhymes sucked when i got here first but i guess i elevated a lot....i really wanna battle someone... (long time since last battle) so if you wanna battle holla

MC AK 06-24-04 06:24 AM

who the fuck is this retard nigga tryin to diss
u might as well av walked up to that MC n blew a kiss
get off this board if you keep with that style ya aint smart :huh:
u should go back to dungeon productions n... fall appart
if u said the word 'rhymes' again i think id go beserk
rappin with a 1 word vocabulary, it doesent work :banghead:
dont tell other MC's to put they shit on the shelf
u weak bitch nigga, ya own words a danga to ya health :nono:
fuck u, im bout to have terrets on ya ass
MUTHA FUCKEN BITCH u better be gone before i pass
if this cypher had votes, id give u a thumbs down
im laughin in ya FACE bitch, while i drop u to the ground! :thefinger

R*O*B*B* 06-24-04 06:25 AM

bang bang there goes my gun
fucking wit me is no longer any fun
ya didnt see me unlock and load it
i pulled the trigger in ya face and then it xploded
now ya dead no more crap rhyms coming outer ya hed
now i flip ya off in french and translate it into english
ill make ya momma be like 'this is good who sings this'
ya say the tables have flipped but i flipped em' right back in ya face bitch


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