nice flow........

since i no that shit wasn't perfect let a nigga no what I need 2 work on... cause Im tryin to be in dis BluePrint an I no that ya always need 2 Elevate... hit me up

Work on structure...stack ya lines don't mash them together...that style won't work on this site for some reason. Or better yet that style won't work for you. Stronger punches...i guess that really doesnt matter cuz this is was not a battle verse it was a tryout one. Take those smileys their played...all new people do that...Work on your vocabulary...this is just pertaining to that verse so don't take it personal.....uh that's about all..that i can think of right now...but there is probably more.

Fam they wanted to me cget ing....im 3-0 IN votes here my drop see if ya like it....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127499

wait until vango comes back online...he hasnt been on all day....but i say your in so don't worry about it.

KillaCam ^I Say Your In... And DaClassic Says.. Your In..!!! ...


I Guess VanGo' ... Has To Approach Every SIngle Catt.. Thats Trying Out For This..!!' So Most Likley Your Waiting For VanGo's.. Say So..!! Your In.. or Your Out..


But Most Likely Your 'In' ... Acuna Matata..!! (No Worries) lol

Well pm if im in im trying out for this and ill Legal..so whoever accepts me first

ight i want in,.... so check me out and holla back

okay............

killacam is not in and daclassic agrees. killa had some problems with our crew last saturday and doesnt get what were trying to do here. if you need any further explanation im sure daclassic can give you details.

Whitey - Seriously You Need To Evelate Son....!!!!!!!!!! ..

-You Could Work On All Aspects


Stay Up ..!!

Wun Luv,

- - - Lil Swirl - - -

^^^truth from the lady and vang

Last Saturday .. Was Last Saturday'!! Why Bring Up The Past I Mean, FoReal Was It A Serious Matter But I Guess... VanGo .. Says Your Out... So There For Your Out 'KillaCamFlow' .. Take It Eazy Boi You Know I Respect You To Da Fullest!! No Doubt About That!! Good Look With Ill Legal!!!!

-Out-

- - - Lil Swirl - - -

yeah it was serious enough that we told him he should find another crew.

fine all just clik my ass back to the front lines/...................................bitch