There you go again. You're using that wack structure that don't work.
Plus you typed up a story. Your shit didn't rhyme, jerk.
Look, if I'm the guy above you, then you shouldn't post in here.
Cuz every time you do, you go back to where you're from... No where.

Get it? Going Nowhere? HAHAHA I crack me up!

we all know gfx dogg is weak,u know dat w/ bar's dat make us fall asleep-
im raw on beats,but u "suck" badd should of named yaself "straws" or "leech"-

4get bein on a clue tape,why hidin ya record dogg? but whut rapper u ate???-
ya moms wasn't gon have u but when she found out she was pregnant it was 2 late-

lmaoooooooooo just spit back tellin me whut words i spelled wrong dickhead

You're garbage... That's all. But I guess I HAVE to spit, huh?

Welcome to class. Today we're gonna talk about flow.
You're the Da SiCKesT oN DIs sItE!? Well here's few things you should know.
Inconsistencies in structure only make you look like a dick.
I wasn't gonna say it, but dude. You can't seem to spell for shit.
And played lines. Gee, they really don't have that much kick.
You basically saying the same "OMFG! Your mother sucks dick!"
Please for the sake of all of us be more creative next time.
But even then, you couldn't win this even with your best rhymes.

Yeah.

dogg u spittin again?? i aint notice just finish gettin head from ya moms-
i mean look at BITCHSLAPPED ppl i called dis pussy out he neva respond-

i should fukk u up cuzz im use da felony's,seriously whut fukk u is tellin??-
your not a rapper we on da computer gfx is just a human spelling bee-

i just key off n smerk,cant even make his words ryhme i know he often hurts-
datz all he do but i guess he's madd cuzz "african's" wouldn't "feed" off his verse-

HAHAHAHA! Africans! Feed! Nice! LMAO!

I'm sure you do understand that I can rip you with ease.
Especially since in kindergarten, you lost in spelling bees.
Oh, just so you know, your whole second bar didn't rhyme.
So you realize, you have not the skill to talk about mine.
Get back in your place. leave the thread, and please stop with the posts.
RV's resident grammarian'll just show you why and how you CAN'T flow.

lmaoooo flow & post ryhme??? dont force it dunny n u feedin 2 hard

im suprise da reader's is not dead,took dude 20 min. i believe he's a cock head-
if i aint in it "settin ya sweater on fire's" da only time u'll be in a "hott thread"-

no kind of creativity just spittin da same line's,flow & post? dat aint ryhme-
i got 10 cent 4 every rapper dat came from CT i guess ima have da same dyme-

oh u madd at marv cuzz da site adore em?,& da shit u resite just bordem-
neva battled on here yet when u get on rv u just come 2 da cypher forum-

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yo im gonna rip this shit...so go suck your dick/
man your fucking sick ...im spitting this shit real quick/
you say your the illest on this site/
man ill beat the shit out of you in a fight/
you know im fucking right/
your ass cant rap/

well thats just a lil something
PeACe no hard fellings

basic bullshit, spit quick with ya immature pubesent mind..
my floresent rhymes'll light ya basic vision untill ya blind
i cant wait till this kid leaves... please..im sick of him..
i read his fucked structure.. n it left me in a predicament..
of anger n rage mixed with a lol boredom n dissapointment..
this kids in hospital, but missed his first elevation appointment..

im bored................

It's a Sin of course when a broke dude use million dollar words
Only to say simply "You suck" then place it on neon lights to be observed
Lyrical virus must be a light chest cold
Trying to be slick w/ rhymes dipping lyrics in heavy batters of crisco
You could tell by his words ... this kid spits panty lines
Then cross dress back to thug whenever it's Grammy Time

Peace

Barz&Penstripes stole his flow from tha swap-meet....he needs ta retire
he couldnt spit flames even if his vocals cords had caught on fire
thaz why when he saw my verses his ass was inspired
he tryed ta copy it but for him...it was as hard as tightroping telephone wires

You talk like you don’t go to the swat meet //
You mad cuss you dint swap those week rhymes //
Your mind ill not like mine your mic lines is disposed //
Like your hoe//
What inspired bye the retired emcee that couldn’t be tight if he dint get fucked in the but and busted a nut on//
you just as scared as sudoam//
And look dumb ass if you was to touch the wire's on the telephone you would get shocked//
you’re so stupid you disserve to get shot//

uhh....sorry b....but those was some wack as lines
u u call ur self a emcee....but u dont even RYHME in ur RYHMES

fuck tha sawp meet...im branded adn custom fitted
u talk about barz&penstripes being fucked in tha butt....but last night u was all in him

fack eminem....ur punk ass needs ta back down like JA
maybe if u knew howta RYHME i wouldnt have fucked u up in a weak ass 3 BAH (bar)

bitch

got guns dat a put dis fag in coma's,ya average soldier wont grab a toaster-
if i take ya chain trust me u wont eva get ya "diamonds back" like "arizona"-

who's believin in dis kidd??,no 1 but i stay with ya girl just skeetin in her wig-
and dogg look at "banks" facial expressin he look madd just bein in ya sig-

but u wastin ya time on dis site tryin da get a verse off,dis jerk's soft-
he gay look at his "av" could of got a girl but he got "50" with his shirt off-

lol ohhh shit



anyways

the only thing MARVALOUS is the hed ya mom gave me
im like a broke sprinkler no chance you could spray me

you couldnt rap if you was a christmas gift
but ill teach you how just shut the fuck up and listen bitch

Ok dude, I'm waiting. I thought you said that you would be teaching.
What type of wack rapper stops before he's even through speaking?
What type of faggot will argue over the pic that he posted?
Keep bitching about how he looks and how the people ain't voting.
You're not ruling anything, I'd advise you change your name.
This thread is basketball, and your just too fat to play the game.

ok heres a Good Fucking Xample of a bitch in rap(g.f.x)
why you always talking shit and when you spit you whacked

why you got a pic up telling you fight in the army
when the closest you came to war was soldier games on atari

damn bitch dont know why you follow my posts
maybe cuz every rap you hollas a joke

maybe cuz you looking for pointers
and you run from battles like jackie joyner

Do I? Are you sure you're even talking to me?
And don't you know, "Wack" doesn't have an "E" or a "D"?
See, you've gotten me back into correcting you cats.
Oops. I'm not who you think I am, I think you should take a look back.
Pay attention. Next time, go back and look at who you're dissing.
You came here for me, knowing this was a losing mission.

Haha. That was wack.

Caliph

Ur words dont rhyme like this is a place for rookies~
When some1 disses me its like they got their hand in a jar of cookies~
U gotta have a strategy if your gonna try to write~
Cuz theirs plenty of emcees that would eat u up in one bite~
Im on the top of that list cuz im numba 1 like t mac~
Im backin niggas down til thier under the hoop like im shaq~
U say ur the ghettos shakespear but u aint "playin" no1~
Only thing u pretendin to do is fuckin carry a gun~

215 posts and you're talking about cookie jars -
If you worked out, & got a trainer...you couldn't still spit a power bar
If you're No.1? Then I'm in the wrong thread-
I'm in room with the League of extra-Ordinary-men
Really I think you rhyme a little too passive
Flow-2-Crazy? Only when a baby's in a tub doing some lite splashes

Peace

with just da wave of a gun i could stop yo,dogg far as rappin u not so nice-
maybe u got "bars&pens" but i heard on ya block in bk u dont got no "stripes"-

lol nuff said..

fuck this due reppen exception this rap site to be tight with the streets if you got beef in the chat room the only way its ending is pulling out chaps tic on and start suck in dick dog fuck those line you rhymes is dis effective like your gat that’s plastic nigga like you sarcastic got to much of a fantasy world that in reality you the girl in relation’s passion your self so your wealth wont run out come out with a gun you better kill me cuss ill bing still crazy you just don’t face me

Kidz' trying to be hot, but he pops em wit cool dropz.
Lackin in syllabel count, rhyme structure and full stops.
Keyin it quick, ILL brang sick talent to tables.
Cos he left vomiting shit. Stick to paper like staples.
You aint able, in freestlyin, So go back to freepostin.
N most of that flow ya showed? its obvious.Ya prewrote them.

lmaoo whut da fukk was dat?????

nigga u luv me be runnin sayin damm marvjay fam is so gutta-
"U.G" mean's "UGLY GIRL" & umm dogg dat stands 4 ya mother-

this nigga name marvolous he is so fucking scandalous this line is venomous,
cause when i rhyme its vicious next time u better be cautious does this make u furious
ill come round and make u bow down u fake ass clown wait till i com around to ur town
u belong in tha pound with ur big ass frown to late now u cant back down
ur beter of to retreat caus u be lookin at the bottom of my feet after u feel my heat
i goto to your bitches house to feed her my meat now its time for u to sleep
Boom !
kURSe

u talkin like u ill da shit i read it was basic,da gun a give u head n a face lift
since you from "Rap-city" tigger's moms gon find you dead in "tha bassment"

4 me its a joy da fight,so y dis boy is hype i could get u killed dont toy with life
come on u a newbie dat cant rap i'll make u leave da same month u joined dis site

ima i dont really like da merk chicks,but u gon wind up missin ya soul in church stiff
# "1" u'll neva, cuzz u "2" wack i should of did "3" lines or "4-5" cuzz u aint worth "6"

yo marvellous my shit is miraculous yo shit is just plain Wack, (with a capitol W)
you shit dont even attack my shit is so dope it would give you a asthma attack,
when i find you ill stab u with my knife cause i lead a professional life,
you these line cause u strife by the way i fucked your wife,
im a blast your with my desert eagle but it aint legal so get in the regal,
before this shit get illegal cause right now its only paralegal,
and shut the fuck up they got u in playgirl with a spread close-up did wittle mavrvoloues forget his drinking cup ?

sup marv..


why you tryina rhyme with GOOD cats, cuz? my hits'll rock n' fleet
like mos def said, its all "mathematics" and i excel in "trigganometry"
full force, I rule whores... completely slit ya feet n' rip ya bearings
this aint a spelling comp, kid... so why the fuck you usin a dictionary?
cripple heavy, bringin death..ya shit gets fucked my raps are evil
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whoa sorry bout that... im just tryna rhyme "drinking cup" with "paralegal"

One Man Band, ill flick you off my finger like a rubber band,
cause iam the one in master command i hope you can take a firm stand,
ill make ur skin quiver dont make me pull out my gat and deliver the shot to ur liver,
ur whole crew gets a shiver cause iam the lease giver and i do live on the don river,
ill shoot u in the back cause ur rap was wack and i wont give u a warning of attack,
u got all ur raps off the beaten track so all my niggas hit that sack

nice one man band not nice enough :P

kURSe

the 3rd verse with kurse it gets worse

one man band keep on sippin on your sand cause i got all this shit planned,
after i shoot you your mom with be on the witness stand,
but as u can see i got the upperhand and iam living on cultivated land,
see my words have more than 1 syllable yo but i aint never billable,
cause my shit i drop is tropical so ya put your shit on the table,
and lets do this shit like men with out your pad and your ballpoint pen,
just name the place and when now come inside to my gambling den

peace man
kURSe

infuse with hate/you niggas dinna now i'm scrapping my plate/the knowledge of truth/you niggas pussy down to ya roots/not stopping above i take it to the top of the post/accelerating now bout to take it to cost/call me the host/the one you look to for intruction/just in case you didn't know i ain't bluffing/handcuffing cats game to frame/and let my baseball bat peel back to ya brain/unwritten hazard that just don't make sense/been in the game and still can't bring no defense/yo raps ain't ______ filll in the blank/ HOLLA

Now where do get nice shit from tha Gutter
I dunno but my Rhymez so sikk dey make u Stutter
Now if i wasent sure ur Structures Beat
Cause if i let a Punch out then u be eatin ya own meat

the_one its about time u learned to rap and stop being dumb
u see i got a thompson submachine gun and you aint got none
i got a defence at a organization expense time for the real offence
nigga u got no commonsense i got a biological warfare defense
i spit words u cant ever read i just kick back and smoke my rheumatism weed
now im a leave u to bleed did u like my stampede all ur raps were just misleeds
now its time to leave go on spit your shit proceed u is da size of a pumpkin s__d
u fill the fucking blank in --------------------------------------------------^

kURSe next time spit your worse

Kurse Rehearse ur Verse next time u spit it
Cause the Closest u git to a gun is ona Colt-45-Fitted

Complex Illness wtf was that with your 2 line i'l leave u stillless,
ill leave u face down in the dust with my lyrical illness,
i got the mac and i aint afraid to die all u is a punk ass mediterranean fruit fly,
man that line up there hurt my compound eye my verses will make u cry,
your choice of weapon is a replica colt 45, i know no bullets aint gonna fly,
ill peel ur face off with my switch blade so your gonna need audio and visual aid,
dont make me throw a rifle grenade u couldn't even hide in the military blockade,
yo u need financial aid cause u is poor u is also immature,
this way for a fucking detour u best hope your house is secure,
yo u wouldn't be here today cause im ur daddy remeber we used to drive around in a 1987 golf caddy how can u be a rapper when ur fucking name is maddie?

WTF was that...

I seen better flow out of a still ocean~
Its like ur tryin to move but u aint got no motion~
Ill leave ur weak shit paralyzed n layin~
Ull be on the ground 2 seconds after i start sprayin~
Hey kid we all know u suck... ur shit is just plain~
Boy u couldnt make it more excitin if u jumped out a plane~

This guy is "2crazy" if he thinks hes any good/
He's so useless if he had a gun he shoot himself in tha foot/
This guy prolly rap better if he was cursed wit a stamner/
Tha definition of wack is this bitch hitten self wit a hammer/
It's a sore sight but if everyone on hea is like you ill have to adapt/
My simply remarkable flow will leave yo' ass bitch-slapped/

Are you lost,cause auditions for backup Ja singers is down tha hall ta tha left.It seems like soon as you logged on all tha real Mcs got up and left.Lookin at ya text jus makes me wish I couldn't read.......you not a Mc you pickin on wack folk like flow2crazy.Din you got2lazy and slacked on ya rap,get together wit ya peoples so yall can get package wrapped.Out my mouth freespittin caps,sit up in fitted hats, A yo are you a ninja turtle,cause you always hangin wit rats.And I stay swingin wit bats like Robin is my side kick,how you claim you in tha game when you benched on tha side and shit.And tha people say what, nigga look at tha quote,you got Micheal Jackson dancin for you,lets me know dat yo azz is a joke.

lol.your pathetic life is but just a 'waste' of air like a "dump breathing",
your a broomstick wit bad teeth a 'wack plaque' is all you'll recieving,

thats all your worth ..lmao

lol past me my smithern western homie so i can verbal abuse to sleep,
this nigga try to big like big ass snoopy cause ur lessons were pretty cheap,
u you need to buy a gat cause your shit was wacker than wack,
u fucking florida water rat so go home and learn how to fucking rap,
compared to u i am the big boss cause i is the illest
my raps is so ill ull have conductive hearing loss cause im still the stillest