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Valerie 05-22-06 09:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Raw King
wow^...ur even worst the before....is that really u? I thought ur were supposed to get better at this...not the other way around...a/ewayz

was that supposed to rhyme?...I guess not...atleast if its theory...
I turn my brain off to battle u...If I dont..I'll baffle u by mearly speaking clearly...
U wak like a nigga jerking off in his room....
talk about my pic? u look like RV's ganetor...drop the mic and grab the broom....
I'll put ur ass in a tomb...cuz Theory dont speaks facts....

If u dont beleave me...just read that^....
U'll never be shit...even if u came out the wrong hole...
and the only way Ur blowing up...is when I let ur lil lungs go.....


played lines and punches suprised u aint ducked.
same old gay shit man no point all your shit sucked.
........army or not man your still a fag.
i mean jus look at the myspace pic with chad.
whats wrong here wack? fag? or just plain shit.
you could fuck a wet dream up with your lyric.
no wonder why people confuse you with SOLO.
cus your a easy win confused wack with dope.
your a joke fuck your gay lines like q your WACK. PERIOD.
Im not shittin you man you suck dry your luck... im serious.

Faime S. Quotez 05-23-06 03:45 PM

ya written's exposed, that you'll never be the sickest with flows
send clips through ya clothes, leave 'blood on ya white tee'
.................................................. ..like ya 'signature shows'
the serious fact is ....... your text clearly needs pratice
if this dude thinks he can beat me, this 'theory is backwards.'
disappearing ya tactics, shove a spear through your atlas
mad cause ya garbage? ...
you'll just have to 'play the role, frustrated' like an 'furious actress'

The Creator 05-23-06 07:16 PM

U just post shit after I post it...u'll get it later nigga....just follow the leader...


To show off Im ill...I'll put the sin in cinnati....then roast it....
I Quote the illest nigga ever....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Raw King
U just quote shit after I post it....

If u dont get the punch...I kick and scratch like ultimate fighter....
niggas who claim wats hot...get engulfed in the fire....
u endulged in my verse...now its time for the barz to body hoes...
I'll stop u in ur tracks like a dj wit out a turn table scratching ur audio...

Faime S. Quotez 05-23-06 07:48 PM

you going against me, better be hoping for help
you not dope to anybody, ....only yourself
you gotta be, cause you so wack, you quotin youself
cause nobody'll use none of ya wack quotes but yourself ...

The Creator 05-24-06 02:12 AM

come dawg...Iv seen u drop better then that man...^dont turn into theory on me here...he's super garbage wit a capital G on the real...get back a me dawg....

yeah...u out of material...like a taco shop with no imigrants...
fuck being faime S. nigga...I'll beat u like u a fucking kid again....
plus its a 6 line minimum...how much can I remind u...
cuz when I find u....The Quotez'll get emotional like a haiku...
dont make me destroy u...along wit the rest of these bitches...
cuz if I body u...every one after this verse is just a witness...
cuz in case u aint noticed...3 time the charm...
unless u use the same word 3 times...then 3 times u'v bombed....

Faime S. Quotez 05-24-06 04:01 PM

aight ...lol

when will it dawn on you that nobody is feeling your raps
you got beat, smashed, tore apart ....and you still coming back?
chill n relax, askin children for raps, you'll get killed in this match
your verses would be more nice...... if skills were attached
acting like you a villian with gats, just to build up some stacks
my venomous raps'll make your entire building collapse
who's feelin this cat, my writing's could clash with satan
nicest to rap a statement, abolishing any type of retaliation ...

Gopha 05-24-06 04:18 PM

I'll step up to tha plate and fuckin rock ya dumb shit...
yuh verse got multiez yeah... but you FORGOT THE PUNCHES!
dont stop at punches, honestly dog just forget the rap
cuz labels only sign Quotes when reporters want to check tha facts
Faime S. Quotes? Lemme ask you suttin, what does tha S. stand for?
im guessin 'Scrub', like what ya poor fams does for ya land lord...!

The Creator 05-24-06 08:29 PM

now if u step up to the plate...its only cuz I cut u down and left u quadraplegic...
u should've wrote a verse wit quotez...Id expect atleast 1 of u would write something decent...
Jesus....U both need to go back to writing poetry....
I fuck up this cypher...wat u think I do to bitches who try to flow with me....
I shit on ur skillz and smeere it like soy sauce...so follow wat the boy does...
if U kick spitz...then I sonic boom ur lil noise off...
cuz he quits rapping...u shouldnt have started at all....
he forgot to rap yeah...but u came hard like my dick...but u forgot ur ballz....

Gopha 05-24-06 08:48 PM

Quote:
Jesus....U both need to go back to writing poetry....

^^^wow you just proved that skill wise your not even close to me...
yeah that punch would have been dope... but RAP IS POETRY!
idiot, listen...
dont you find it sickenin that you dont understand tha art you kickin?
so just quit it, rap aint ya thang find sumthin else to do...
i'd feed off ya verse, but its so wack that id be HELPIN you!
Quote:
he forgot to rap yeah...but u came hard like my dick...

wait wait wait, you said your dickz hard? im startin to think your bent...
...considerin this is a site thats 99 percent men!

The Creator 05-25-06 11:03 AM

lol..I just threw the last line in cuz I had to log off in a rush but u got me on the come back....nice drop...


I'll smash u like un-ripe fruits in a basket...
If I ever put ur name on search....its cuz I need to know where the trash is....
mu fucka....99% are guyz?....thatz a sausage fest...lol
Im str8...cuz ur bitch gave so much brain...I left her fore-head stretched...
cuz I'll post up against a wall like a grafitti pic...
niggaz like u go to dental school just to see me spit...

had to spit some small shit so its not labeld as freeposting

Faime S. Quotez 05-25-06 03:18 PM

you could 'stand in a freezer with a mic', still wouldnt be the 'coldest mc'
his girl gave you so much brain ....yet,
..........................you not smart enough to know not to go against me.
ya through with ya wack spits, glocks make ya do numerous backflips
you gay as fuck, if i 'put you in a laundry hamper' ...
.................................................. ....you'd be a "fruit in a basket"*
resume to ya practice, or i'll roll up my fist n strike great
shells'll be like 'picking up a 10 lb. dumbell' the way it 'lift this light weight'

Gopha 05-25-06 04:29 PM

Quote:
lol..I just threw the last line in cuz I had to log off in a rush but u got me on the come back....nice drop...

^^^thx holmez you too

anywayz...

fuck ya wack metas and wording, id say your goin no where...
but then I remebered your from Cincinnati, so your ALREADY are there!
wut do i gotta do to get you to quit? money? just leave an amount...
and ill get it and pay off the mods to delete your account!
think im kidding? believe me this is actually serious to my health
cuz if i had to read another drop from you id gouge my eyes out!

Faime S. Quotez 05-25-06 04:57 PM

^^look,

You really want me gone? Well , too bad, it's not my leaving time
but if you're serious, I'll leave ...after you post at least 1 decent line!
Decrease ya mind, won't even give you time to get ya career together
if me leaving's up to you dropping a nice line, smh
.................................................. ..........I'd be here forever!
Better start resisting the clout, you dont wanna throw fist in this bout
go head, gouge ya eyes out, cause ...
like 'putting blind folds on blind people' you 'cant see me, with or without.'

Gopha 05-25-06 06:11 PM

Quote:
but if you're serious, I'll leave ...after you post at least 1 decent line!


aite listen dawg, cuz i really dont think you get tha point
leave after 1 decent punch? you shoulda left tha day i joined
matta fact scratch that, you can stay and get ripped wit flowz
yeah i aint spit anythin decent yet... cuz everything I spit was DOPE!
this bitch is toast! your a wack emcee so quit tryin to play back at me
blast this flea, see ya name in tha paper, now you'll be famous... actually!

Faime S. Quotez 05-25-06 07:07 PM

i'll bed you with raps, sending you to a doctor, so schedule that
ya punches are decent? DOPE? Please ...
....................they didnt even travel passed the level of whack!
I'm ahead of you, jack ..decease haters, me? ya keys cant serve
ya elevation needed is critical, ya lines are 'going downhill' like 'ski racers'
Watch ya keys get wrecked, proceed to death, never be a seasoned vet
not 1 punch from you in decent text, so i guess i aint leaving yet!


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