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Incineratedrose 01-11-05 01:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Force.
Hopesfall used to be my boy. Don't know if he still remembers me..wasn't he AFI_KILLS_RAP ?



yes i was, who are you?

mC.Cm 01-11-05 08:36 PM

yo im under a alias let me in foo!

Da Vinci 01-12-05 12:02 AM

Who are you? ?

Ysdat 01-12-05 08:01 AM

He didnt pm me so he aint shit. Take that sig out. unless you holler at me explaining what's up.

Wickedclown 01-12-05 12:21 PM

aight im tryin out again... my record shows enough... ill drop some of my shit here....

This is my poetry battle against flow intelligent for poetry league:

1964


The writing on the wall, the jumbled mess of words
destroys my inner brian, eating away at the very fiber of my soul
one mans torture written out acrossed the cement walls of his cell
for all to see, what was he immagining when he wrote
"Sleep daddy, sleep daddy, sleep forever no more"
upon the corner of the floor where he died the night before
this young man so old and hungrey for the world who
cast him aside like yesterdays garbage played out for everyone
his own metaphorical armegedon upon these very walls
falling apart as i read, the immages that enter my mind seem
to be swalowing me whole, taking away my verry innocence just by
reading on, the words i see are horrible accounts of the daily "life"
of the so called madman from 39th street, whos brutial murders were
the hottest news of 1964 in town of maulberry creek, here he tells
of each and every sinister account, writtin in gastley detail upon
the now seamingly fleshy walls of the inner most part of the state
prison where he spent the last 62 years of his life in solitude
shuned by the world and forced to sit and fester over his doings
in hopes that one day he will be forgiven and be set free, maybe
not in body but in spirit, given the oprotunity to stand before
god himself and repent for his horrid deeds, and be alowed to walk
amongst those he hurt in heaven, alowed to talk to them and
say he was sorry for what he had done, but whos to say that
this will ever happen for inmate 15993, one can only sit back
and read another tale the wall has to offer and slip into fantasy
hoping, praying for the man who lost it all one summer night in 1964


This next one is from a text battle against Mystirious (Zeke)... Zeke was
20-0 on all alias names ...i KOd him...here it is

Aight look.......


Like the legend of bigfoot, ya rhymes are mysterious
thinkin he can win... shit this kid must be dalerious
kid has to be an alias cause he came at me pretty damn quick
now mysterious u know u cant rhyme bitch so get off my dick
ya new and already make me sick so get ready to feel it u fuckin prick
no one knows you so why should i care, come on run yo mout i dare
soon youll be flailing around like a bunny caught in a hunters snare
here lookin for fame, sit and watch while i tarnish ya name
and all of RV will fuckin do the same, cause u aint shit in this game
ya shits straight lame and your wack enough to match
your careers gonna be shorter than that of charlie batch
i see myself asking, why does this dude try to rap
probably for the same reason this prep shops at the gap
caue he thinks hes hard but inside this fags soft like a baked cookie
in for a rude awakaning when all of RV gang bangs this rookie
face it, nothin you say will ever change one single fact
you will neva be a gangsta no matter how hard you act
and i hope that settles well with you and you learn to deal
with the fact that you will never make it and thats just bein real
with you... dont even bother, quit while you still standing
cause this shits to hard for you, the lifes to demanding
so sit the fuck back and wait for your crash landing
cause you leavin in a body bag, never again to spit a rhyme
im doin u a favor, ya death is here, its the end of the line


This next one is from my battle with parallel (Exclusive) i won 5-1


haha! fuck this kid.... look

fuck this faggot, must be livin in a PARALLEL universe
hearin ya shit reminds me more of a plague or a curse
cause all of RV knows you cant spit a real ass verse
ya leavin in a herse, be prepared for this to be ya last battle
cause soon this kids gonna be shook harder than a babys rattle
ya just anotha little boy who cant drop hardcore hooks
i hear ya gonna do audio... musta learned from garth brooks
readin country music song books and aint gettin no looks
from anyone in the fuckin game you claim to love so much
cause no ones ever gonna respect you, ya have no touch
no tallent and no future, ya might as well up and quit
kill ya self faggot, go and get ya wrists slit
cause i know you cant deal with the fact you cat rap
deep down you know your just anotha prep that shops at the gap
so give up, gather ya shit and just move on home
dont make me up and split open ya emptey dome
ya brainles faggot, why do you even bother to try
fuck you bitch, ya been merked, run home and cry

New Meth0d 01-12-05 01:20 PM

i beat you 5-1............lol

Force. 01-12-05 03:29 PM

lol my votes in.. and everyone drop feedback on my battle..

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171646

Wickedclown 01-12-05 04:31 PM

new method why u always gotta hate son... i dropped my shit for a try out... yeah u beat me... so the fuck what... i know im council material. so get off my back kid

Technical 01-12-05 11:01 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1891032
^^dats a link of a KO i juss had. i noe im council material. get back at me and tell me if im down

Macca 01-13-05 06:55 PM

iight I'm back for a second try. Check the link in my sig and if you don't like that than I got more with better. and I'm gonn drop some new open mics. Check those too.

Peace.

Macca 01-14-05 07:12 PM

iight I'm waiting on my answer. If I need to drop summin I will.

Sovereign 01-14-05 07:30 PM

ayo im trying out for this crew...been here since the beginning...i think around march of last year...anyways...lemme know if i have to drop something or just check one of the links below...

im text right now...but ill be going audio soon wit phat mic...


~1~

Sovereign 01-14-05 07:32 PM

um...oh and my recent alias was class.sic but i changed it for a friend...d.j em sce...anyways...i was beating intensify effect but he turned into a mod and started dq'ing my votes...it wasnt my best battle but i still beat him...pz..

Kawn Flixx 01-15-05 03:20 PM

I'll make threds for both of you,don't worry. I'm here :cool:

God 01-15-05 03:22 PM

werd.....Send me the pass if ya want me

Sovereign 01-15-05 03:24 PM

haha funny guy indeph....

Kawn Flixx 01-15-05 03:32 PM

WTF legacy you want in????????I'm 100% sure you in......

and Legacy and Sov...threads both setup...

God 01-15-05 03:34 PM

iight yea, i wanna be in

ps: I WANNA MOD BLUESMOKE!!

Sovereign 01-15-05 03:34 PM

aiight...im bout to go audio soon...coz text is just gettin kinda wack with the voting and the newbs ya know...anyways...much appreciated....pz..

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Technical 01-15-05 03:50 PM

yo wat about me homeboi, i wanted to b down too, dam!

Optimus 01-16-05 10:18 AM

I'm looking to join Tc...i think im the type of personality you want..i battle frequently, haven't won a battle yet though altough winning most of my battle's,<that doesnt count i know lol...
but if your willing to check my stuff id be greatful, im gonna be dropping poetry and OM's since people have urged me to..have a nice day :).

Incineratedrose 01-16-05 12:11 PM

lol.... zero is funny....

Gotti Nuffguns 01-16-05 12:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Zer0
I'm looking to join Tc...i think im the type of personality you want..i battle frequently, haven't won a battle yet though altough winning most of my battle's,<that doesnt count i know lol...
but if your willing to check my stuff id be greatful, im gonna be dropping poetry and OM's since people have urged me to..have a nice day :).




:laugh2: :shocked:

Incineratedrose 01-16-05 12:20 PM

i liked the "i battle frequantly, havent won a battle yet"

God 01-16-05 01:59 PM

** Waiting***...
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Gotti Nuffguns 01-16-05 04:06 PM

Hmmm ..

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Blah? I don't know

God 01-16-05 04:28 PM

Damn this is taking alittle to long for me ....

Ysdat 01-16-05 04:37 PM

we will have answer's for everyone very shortly.

Fuck This Life . 01-16-05 06:24 PM

I wanna be in this shit.....

Quick Text Drop...


I'll embrace ya name so you aint getta taste of fame
Raps so stupid you could spell rapverse backwards
Tell me how that works,yea we wear black shirts
I snap in the power of revenge i'll be bent till the end
For my whole family killed all the blood that spilled
Takin lives with knives because my family strived
We made money offa the easiest of things
Such as emotionaly helpin a dreamer repair there wings
Thats how it was till the love was shatterd
Even tho too them its not like it matterd

God 01-16-05 08:10 PM

STILL WAITING Jezzz

JRoy 01-16-05 08:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fuck This Life .
I wanna be in this shit.....

Quick Text Drop...


I'll embrace ya name so you aint getta taste of fame
Raps so stupid you could spell rapverse backwards
Tell me how that works,yea we wear black shirts
I snap in the power of revenge i'll be bent till the end
For my whole family killed all the blood that spilled
Takin lives with knives because my family strived
We made money offa the easiest of things
Such as emotionaly helpin a dreamer repair there wings
Thats how it was till the love was shatterd
Even tho too them its not like it matterd


That was good for a quick drop.....but idk if you'll get in lil bro...get some more posts and wins....

Kawn Flixx 01-16-05 08:16 PM

*Gives Legacy a cookie*

Be pantient niggaford :thumbup:

God 01-16-05 11:17 PM

** eats cookie&**

Grrrr, Im still hungry

** waiting**

.Ike. 01-17-05 01:20 AM

yo check my open mic.....fucka jets kicker......link in sig.........and ive had 2 battles....1 is in the sig but i came weak on both because the peeps i was battlin were weak.....hit me back

Wickedclown 01-17-05 11:11 AM

aye i posted up 3 tryout verses last week.... anyone gonna answer them?

Optimus 01-17-05 12:10 PM

w/e, hopesfall and mictorious....
heres a piece of poetry i did.

My life doesn't seem complete without you company.
Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind.
Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head.
Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before.
I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality.
And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion.
To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's.
Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know.
That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you.
Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration.
Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend.
Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's.
And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see.
Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's
Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses.
I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface.
Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion.
Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely.
So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's.
That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two.

Sovereign 01-17-05 12:47 PM

um.... guys still havent decided...man....oh well...lemme know when yall do...props to indeph for settin up the thread...pz


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Insight. 01-18-05 10:43 AM

They strip us and tell us how we should look a European bully
They speak in a foreign tongue so we do not understand fully
Life within this room is all of my thoughts
I ponder on the pain and pleasure that it has brought
These chains depress me and keep my personality shadowed
I am not the leader of this trend and yet I am still followed
Emotion repressed by people's unneeded fears,
It cannot be stopped because of their shedding of tears.
My feelings and body are exposed as I am whipped like a slave
As my mind wanders I remember all of the sins I once forgave
My friends and family give in and let their soul be deprived
They say nothings worse than death; I do not even feel alive.
Air is my food, or a roach that runs across my floor
Why must I suffer because of other people's war?
Separated my male and female, how are we to live?
They keep telling us to unleash more, yet we have nothing to give!
Religion is our union; it is the only way we can relate,
Because we even argue over who has the worst fate.
The conditions make us vomit, and diseases are plentiful
We are considered outcasts because our religion makes us horrible
I despise my life; these people make me feel worthless
If I just live how they say then my pain is supposed to hurt less?
They send me to a chamber, but inside I wonder why?
As they close the door, they ask, “Are you ready to die?"
The women cry, and the begin their final prayers,
The people listen and laugh because they do not care.
It is not fair; while we suffer, everyone else takes life for granted,
You can see your home while now I am blinded.
This is the last place I will see, the last place I will remember,
No this is not a Nazi camp, this is Society's Chamber.

Topical against final. Winning 1-0. If not in please leave feedback.

Topical vs. Acuity, was a keystyle so ya.

Looking down the ebony table realizing my ivory friends,
Thinking bout all of the good times that would now be our end,
They press us and bang us, not caring for our needs,
These leads are their masters, ours is the attention on which we feed.
The man is now leaving; our servitude has now been served,
The road that once was going straight is now being curved.
Beaten and broken to align in the way we believe is right,
We continue as long as it cannot lift up its body to fight.
In our sight, perfection is obsession, and normality is rejected,
So many people deciding to give up and when asked say "I just left it"
It is hectic when people will not even stand up for their country; just disrespect it.
People are complaining because they cannot see their porno in 2 seconds while people starve,
People say that our actions now define our future; I say it has already been carved.
Men who deserve the right are thrown away because of what they believe,
The words are correct but corruption lies in the way they heart is perceived.
Disruption is not uncommon, in fact now it is just for comedy and making of past times,
Past lines of past rhymes describe how hard a good soul is the hardest to find.
A crime is considered cool, and murder is expected as a daily occurrence,
I hate my mom and dad, you do not realize your passion and until you lose it.
Traits are hated, and individuality must be killed,
For when someone great comes along, they must be emptied then filled.
This is the will of our great nation? To kill those who refuse to lie down and be shot?
Who give their ideas and give all they have got to this battle, which is still being fought?
This corruption of society blends inward to the days of every single life,
Every fight, every knife, that has made a back see the original sunlight.
Time goes by but life will always find something to corrupt and disapprove for,
No matter where you are the hinges for you will always be a little of the door.

Ysdat 01-18-05 03:44 PM

answer's will be given shortly for zero,personify and legacy

Optimus 01-18-05 04:22 PM

Cool, i will be awaiting your decision.


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