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yes i was, who are you? |
yo im under a alias let me in foo!
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Who are you? ?
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He didnt pm me so he aint shit. Take that sig out. unless you holler at me explaining what's up.
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aight im tryin out again... my record shows enough... ill drop some of my shit here....
This is my poetry battle against flow intelligent for poetry league: 1964 The writing on the wall, the jumbled mess of words destroys my inner brian, eating away at the very fiber of my soul one mans torture written out acrossed the cement walls of his cell for all to see, what was he immagining when he wrote "Sleep daddy, sleep daddy, sleep forever no more" upon the corner of the floor where he died the night before this young man so old and hungrey for the world who cast him aside like yesterdays garbage played out for everyone his own metaphorical armegedon upon these very walls falling apart as i read, the immages that enter my mind seem to be swalowing me whole, taking away my verry innocence just by reading on, the words i see are horrible accounts of the daily "life" of the so called madman from 39th street, whos brutial murders were the hottest news of 1964 in town of maulberry creek, here he tells of each and every sinister account, writtin in gastley detail upon the now seamingly fleshy walls of the inner most part of the state prison where he spent the last 62 years of his life in solitude shuned by the world and forced to sit and fester over his doings in hopes that one day he will be forgiven and be set free, maybe not in body but in spirit, given the oprotunity to stand before god himself and repent for his horrid deeds, and be alowed to walk amongst those he hurt in heaven, alowed to talk to them and say he was sorry for what he had done, but whos to say that this will ever happen for inmate 15993, one can only sit back and read another tale the wall has to offer and slip into fantasy hoping, praying for the man who lost it all one summer night in 1964 This next one is from a text battle against Mystirious (Zeke)... Zeke was 20-0 on all alias names ...i KOd him...here it is Aight look....... Like the legend of bigfoot, ya rhymes are mysterious thinkin he can win... shit this kid must be dalerious kid has to be an alias cause he came at me pretty damn quick now mysterious u know u cant rhyme bitch so get off my dick ya new and already make me sick so get ready to feel it u fuckin prick no one knows you so why should i care, come on run yo mout i dare soon youll be flailing around like a bunny caught in a hunters snare here lookin for fame, sit and watch while i tarnish ya name and all of RV will fuckin do the same, cause u aint shit in this game ya shits straight lame and your wack enough to match your careers gonna be shorter than that of charlie batch i see myself asking, why does this dude try to rap probably for the same reason this prep shops at the gap caue he thinks hes hard but inside this fags soft like a baked cookie in for a rude awakaning when all of RV gang bangs this rookie face it, nothin you say will ever change one single fact you will neva be a gangsta no matter how hard you act and i hope that settles well with you and you learn to deal with the fact that you will never make it and thats just bein real with you... dont even bother, quit while you still standing cause this shits to hard for you, the lifes to demanding so sit the fuck back and wait for your crash landing cause you leavin in a body bag, never again to spit a rhyme im doin u a favor, ya death is here, its the end of the line This next one is from my battle with parallel (Exclusive) i won 5-1 haha! fuck this kid.... look fuck this faggot, must be livin in a PARALLEL universe hearin ya shit reminds me more of a plague or a curse cause all of RV knows you cant spit a real ass verse ya leavin in a herse, be prepared for this to be ya last battle cause soon this kids gonna be shook harder than a babys rattle ya just anotha little boy who cant drop hardcore hooks i hear ya gonna do audio... musta learned from garth brooks readin country music song books and aint gettin no looks from anyone in the fuckin game you claim to love so much cause no ones ever gonna respect you, ya have no touch no tallent and no future, ya might as well up and quit kill ya self faggot, go and get ya wrists slit cause i know you cant deal with the fact you cat rap deep down you know your just anotha prep that shops at the gap so give up, gather ya shit and just move on home dont make me up and split open ya emptey dome ya brainles faggot, why do you even bother to try fuck you bitch, ya been merked, run home and cry |
i beat you 5-1............lol
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lol my votes in.. and everyone drop feedback on my battle..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171646 |
new method why u always gotta hate son... i dropped my shit for a try out... yeah u beat me... so the fuck what... i know im council material. so get off my back kid
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1891032
^^dats a link of a KO i juss had. i noe im council material. get back at me and tell me if im down |
iight I'm back for a second try. Check the link in my sig and if you don't like that than I got more with better. and I'm gonn drop some new open mics. Check those too.
Peace. |
iight I'm waiting on my answer. If I need to drop summin I will.
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ayo im trying out for this crew...been here since the beginning...i think around march of last year...anyways...lemme know if i have to drop something or just check one of the links below...
im text right now...but ill be going audio soon wit phat mic... ~1~ |
um...oh and my recent alias was class.sic but i changed it for a friend...d.j em sce...anyways...i was beating intensify effect but he turned into a mod and started dq'ing my votes...it wasnt my best battle but i still beat him...pz..
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I'll make threds for both of you,don't worry. I'm here :cool:
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werd.....Send me the pass if ya want me
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haha funny guy indeph....
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WTF legacy you want in????????I'm 100% sure you in......
and Legacy and Sov...threads both setup... |
iight yea, i wanna be in
ps: I WANNA MOD BLUESMOKE!! |
aiight...im bout to go audio soon...coz text is just gettin kinda wack with the voting and the newbs ya know...anyways...much appreciated....pz..
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yo wat about me homeboi, i wanted to b down too, dam!
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I'm looking to join Tc...i think im the type of personality you want..i battle frequently, haven't won a battle yet though altough winning most of my battle's,<that doesnt count i know lol...
but if your willing to check my stuff id be greatful, im gonna be dropping poetry and OM's since people have urged me to..have a nice day :). |
lol.... zero is funny....
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i liked the "i battle frequantly, havent won a battle yet"
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** Waiting***...
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Hmmm ..
. . . Blah? I don't know |
Damn this is taking alittle to long for me ....
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we will have answer's for everyone very shortly.
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I wanna be in this shit.....
Quick Text Drop... I'll embrace ya name so you aint getta taste of fame Raps so stupid you could spell rapverse backwards Tell me how that works,yea we wear black shirts I snap in the power of revenge i'll be bent till the end For my whole family killed all the blood that spilled Takin lives with knives because my family strived We made money offa the easiest of things Such as emotionaly helpin a dreamer repair there wings Thats how it was till the love was shatterd Even tho too them its not like it matterd |
STILL WAITING Jezzz
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That was good for a quick drop.....but idk if you'll get in lil bro...get some more posts and wins.... |
*Gives Legacy a cookie*
Be pantient niggaford :thumbup: |
** eats cookie&**
Grrrr, Im still hungry ** waiting** |
yo check my open mic.....fucka jets kicker......link in sig.........and ive had 2 battles....1 is in the sig but i came weak on both because the peeps i was battlin were weak.....hit me back
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aye i posted up 3 tryout verses last week.... anyone gonna answer them?
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w/e, hopesfall and mictorious....
heres a piece of poetry i did. My life doesn't seem complete without you company. Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind. Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head. Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before. I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality. And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion. To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's. Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know. That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you. Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration. Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend. Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's. And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see. Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses. I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface. Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion. Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely. So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's. That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two. |
um.... guys still havent decided...man....oh well...lemme know when yall do...props to indeph for settin up the thread...pz
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They strip us and tell us how we should look a European bully
They speak in a foreign tongue so we do not understand fully Life within this room is all of my thoughts I ponder on the pain and pleasure that it has brought These chains depress me and keep my personality shadowed I am not the leader of this trend and yet I am still followed Emotion repressed by people's unneeded fears, It cannot be stopped because of their shedding of tears. My feelings and body are exposed as I am whipped like a slave As my mind wanders I remember all of the sins I once forgave My friends and family give in and let their soul be deprived They say nothings worse than death; I do not even feel alive. Air is my food, or a roach that runs across my floor Why must I suffer because of other people's war? Separated my male and female, how are we to live? They keep telling us to unleash more, yet we have nothing to give! Religion is our union; it is the only way we can relate, Because we even argue over who has the worst fate. The conditions make us vomit, and diseases are plentiful We are considered outcasts because our religion makes us horrible I despise my life; these people make me feel worthless If I just live how they say then my pain is supposed to hurt less? They send me to a chamber, but inside I wonder why? As they close the door, they ask, “Are you ready to die?" The women cry, and the begin their final prayers, The people listen and laugh because they do not care. It is not fair; while we suffer, everyone else takes life for granted, You can see your home while now I am blinded. This is the last place I will see, the last place I will remember, No this is not a Nazi camp, this is Society's Chamber. Topical against final. Winning 1-0. If not in please leave feedback. Topical vs. Acuity, was a keystyle so ya. Looking down the ebony table realizing my ivory friends, Thinking bout all of the good times that would now be our end, They press us and bang us, not caring for our needs, These leads are their masters, ours is the attention on which we feed. The man is now leaving; our servitude has now been served, The road that once was going straight is now being curved. Beaten and broken to align in the way we believe is right, We continue as long as it cannot lift up its body to fight. In our sight, perfection is obsession, and normality is rejected, So many people deciding to give up and when asked say "I just left it" It is hectic when people will not even stand up for their country; just disrespect it. People are complaining because they cannot see their porno in 2 seconds while people starve, People say that our actions now define our future; I say it has already been carved. Men who deserve the right are thrown away because of what they believe, The words are correct but corruption lies in the way they heart is perceived. Disruption is not uncommon, in fact now it is just for comedy and making of past times, Past lines of past rhymes describe how hard a good soul is the hardest to find. A crime is considered cool, and murder is expected as a daily occurrence, I hate my mom and dad, you do not realize your passion and until you lose it. Traits are hated, and individuality must be killed, For when someone great comes along, they must be emptied then filled. This is the will of our great nation? To kill those who refuse to lie down and be shot? Who give their ideas and give all they have got to this battle, which is still being fought? This corruption of society blends inward to the days of every single life, Every fight, every knife, that has made a back see the original sunlight. Time goes by but life will always find something to corrupt and disapprove for, No matter where you are the hinges for you will always be a little of the door. |
answer's will be given shortly for zero,personify and legacy
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Cool, i will be awaiting your decision.
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