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checkin dem pollz.......

Voted For: ••••Dice••••

honestly i think dice took this battle....he had more creativity with his punches.....i like your 4th bar..it was pretty good.....
zeus
you should try batteling with more stuff directly to him instead of using other people names and experiences to compare to him....it would be probably help you out a little more.....1

Thanks for that vote, I'm pretty sure i ripped this one, up'n.

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dice return da favor H......http://community.rapverse.com/showb...002446&posted=1

me vs. mista authentiq 1-1

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Voted For: ••••Dice••••

••••Dice••••:
TYPE YOUR WHOLE VERSE LIKE THIS, ONLY WAY YA GOT KEY’S ON LOCK.
Tried to drop a hard-bar so he started write’n his verse up on the cock,
5/10 - OK Opener.
But pack’n 2 inches get’s you bout 1 sentence so he settled or another loss,
Yes sir, your in desperate need of elevation, someone call Dr. Spock
4/10 - OK Line.
Fake and played, couldn’t get your nut’s off, if ya last name was planters,
Last time I saw shit like that on paper, MF I was in pampers!
4/10 - OK.
My post’s produce a finer thread that mean’s I’m better attired, just better retire
Cause your “battle’s” should come equipped with rattle’s and pacifiers
5/10 - Good Multi's.
Ya edible like cookies ya crumble-son, in text, I’m incredibility cumbersome
So who’s next? I got this one wrapped up like fuck’n cumber-bun
4/10 - OK Closer.
22/50



Verdikal:
Name=Dice? This Kid's Nothing He's Barely Bigger Then Rice
He Could Be Nelly's From Pimp Juice And Still Wouldn't Be Nice
3/10 - Weak Opener.
He's On A Review Mirror, Coz Defeat Is Closer Then They Apear
The Only Way He'll Get More Wins Is A No Show By Will A Peer
4/10 - OK.
He Tryed To Scare Me By Making A Name Like Cali's D-Iced(Dissed)
But He Dissed Himself, By Thinking He Was Twice As Nice
3/10 - NO.
Your Elevation Is Like Parallel, So Your Provide Your Humiliation
Blurred With Smoke You Couldnt See Defeat If Troop's Your Affiliation
5/10 - OK.
This Kid's Shaking Like He Was The Star In A Jello Commercial
Step Up Or Step Out, Now I'm Abusing You With Ya Verbals
4/10 - OK Closer.
19/50


OVERALL: This was a close battle, but I give my vote to Dice for better punches, better flow and harder personals. The other guys verse didnt have anything that great in it. Both need some work in there verses.


Vote - dice

Voted For: ••••Dice••••

Name=Dice? This Kid's Nothing He's Barely Bigger Then Rice
He Could Be Nelly's From Pimp Juice And Still Wouldn't Be Nice
WAK OPENER...........
He's On A Review Mirror, Coz Defeat Is Closer Then They Apear
The Only Way He'll Get More Wins Is A No Show By Will A Peer
1ST LINE WAK 2ND LINE A LIL BETTER.........
He Tryed To Scare Me By Making A Name Like Cali's D-Iced(Dissed)
But He Dissed Himself, By Thinking He Was Twice As Nice
SUPER WEAK DAWG...COME ON.....
Your Elevation Is Like Parallel, So Your Provide Your Humiliation
Blurred With Smoke You Couldnt See Defeat If Troop's Your Affiliation
WAK
This Kid's Shaking Like He Was The Star In A Jello Commercial
Step Up Or Step Out, Now I'm Abusing You With Ya Verbals
THAT SHITS ASS....

TYPE YOUR WHOLE VERSE LIKE THIS, ONLY WAY YA GOT KEY’S ON LOCK.
Tried to drop a hard-bar so he started write’n his verse up on the cock,
1ST LINE WAS GOOD BUT 2ND WAS STUPID.....
But pack’n 2 inches get’s you bout 1 sentence so he settled or another loss,
Yes sir, your in desperate need of elevation, someone call Dr. Spock
DIDN'T RHYME AT ALL AND IT WAS WAK......
Fake and played, couldn’t get your nut’s off, if ya last name was planters,
Last time I saw shit like that on paper, MF I was in pampers!
AGAIN...2ND LINE WAS DECENT AND THE 1ST WAS WAK....
My post’s produce a finer thread that mean’s I’m better attired, just better retire
Cause your “battle’s” should come equipped with rattle’s and pacifiers
FUCK...GET A GOOD OPENING LINE...2ND WAS OK...
Ya edible like cookies ya crumble-son, in text, I’m incredibility cumbersome
So who’s next? I got this one wrapped up like fuck’n cumber-bun
WAK CLOSER...

Dice gets my vote for this battle..work on ur opening lines to ur puches...

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