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This battle is gona get so slept on like all topicals do. Lazy fucks.
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Voted For: Mentalz
v/mentalz...here's why drama, i liked your emotion and story, but i felt it was severely hindered by your rhyme scheme you used...i felt like you didn't portray and express what you were doing to its maximum potential which that particular way of writing. overall, it was nice; a heartfilled, dramatic story, which is touching...but still seemed like this wasn't as good as it could have been, sorry. mentalz, nice, didn't like your rhyme scheme at times, but i enjoyed the flow and your story a little more....plethora of images in my mind, descriptions were in depth, and passionate well done to both, but i think this topic wasn't explored and exploited as well as it should've been, but good job to both, keep writing... |
Yeah, keep voting. I need this battle to be closed and shit.
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Uppin' this old ass slept on battle. Will return the favor, so will DQ. Thanks in advance!
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Upping this again, would appreciate some votes or something. Will RTF honostly, thanks in advance.
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Uppin' the battle. Votes Please. will RTF.........
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Voted For: Drama Queen
Drama Queen- your verse was good i thought n all...Structure was good too...designed differently..but yet easy to read n all...wordplay was good i thought...Vocab was good too also...umm your flow was also good...but you stayed on flow..also had a nice storyline i thought too...and you stayed on topic overall i thought you just had a better piece, and better vocab... i thought... Mentalz- verse was ehh pretty good...structure good n all...vocab was good but some just wasnt ya know...you had a nice flow to go along with the verse...wordplay was also good too i thought...you stayed on topic n all..and had a nice storyline with it...its just i liked Drama Queen's verse and piece better... RTF..In My SIG against "Sobe"..Or vote will be removed(seriously)... |
Uppin' this old ass slept on battle. Will return the favor, so will DQ. Thanks in advance!
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Uppin' this old ass slept on battle. Will return the favor, so will DQ. Thanks in advance!
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Uppin' this old ass slept on battle. Will return the favor, so will DQ. Thanks in advance!
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^What he said...
Uppity Up Up Upppppppppppp |
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Oh my God.. somebody just close this so I can edit the RV Awards thread.
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