you might wanna re-read my original post.... fuck it... i'm done with this... it's whatevers man.... make a good track and i'll give a good critique... better yet... link me to ya other shyt and we'll see wus up

*bolded section* ... then wus da point of tryna diss someone if it ain't gon be effective?....wow... emcees nowadays disappoint me more and more with some of the shyt that come out they mouth

I'll put the feed from Q's diss, *listening now*
Chorus - Haaa it's pronounced 'Led-E' like a pencil lead, it's catchy but gets redundant after a while...

Lyrics - I'm looking for punches, but I can't find nothing... a few random comments like Leady having sex with his cousin, not really anything hard hitting; however, I know you try to look out for your flow which was straight, the 'hizome' line was creative. But yeah, you have to work on forming punches and effective ones. It's aight to have a good flow just get a good combination going, don't sacrifice actual disses for flow.

Aight Leady, *listens now*

No Chorus, nice beat choice, right off the bat the quality is weird..

Lyrics - There were a few 'gay' lines that's been used before, and the Owning You Daily lines been used a lot... However, you had some alright punches here and there.
Quotables:
"n i dont mean music when he likes to down-loads"
"n he only started his own label cos nobody would sign him"

You started falling off from this part and on (flow-wise):
"listen man because you know im tough on beat
im crushin him.... but hes got a crush on me...

I wasn't into the freestyle bit at the end; I thought you should have left that out.

Flow - Tha Q had it easy.
Lyrics - Leady (when you diss you need punches/personals... Leady delivered.)
Quality - Tha Q. (sounded clean throughout)
Beat - Leady (more of a diss beat)
Punches - Leady (2 punches to 0 punches)
Delivery - Tie

To pick the winner is kind of difficult because Q didn't have punchlines and his track was more entertaining than dissing, it was something you could just bop your head to. However, Leady's flow started falling off a bit and started to get a little boring for me towards the end, but he had punches.

^^^thats REAL talk, again, i agree with that.

i said that when i heard your music aswell, but lets not go there.

Too be honest I 100 percent agree wit lady fiya

you both come nice too the mic but damn all this shit is un-neccasary

and word @ OYD hating cuz there in Q's Crew...well I see a point at that well simply cuz the fact that thats normally what most crews do help out there boys right?

^^^^exactly.

but hey, im used to heads tryna bring me down for my music, but its funny the same cats tryna bring my music down, are the same ones doing nothing past the net :thumbup: jealousys a bitch aint it.

feed based ono song not topic*

...flow is decent...damn at the static....lyrics are decent, nuthin amazing or ne thign terrible....beat is pretty cool....this isntj bad at all but some things could be improved mayne...

lol... that's real cute... i'm tryna be real with dude and he still on the defensive... say what ya want about my music but if you gonna criticize then at least do it constructively... anytime you wanna exchange rhymes we can do that.... it's on you homie....

oh... and as far as the whole beyond the net comment...lol... i've never been "new" to hip-hop... go around W 4th and NYU and ask about the Oracles of Dialect, K.O.C., MegaHurtz, Black-Ops, Dougus Productions, Soul Feet Deep, Donnie Hurtz and D.R. Square, The Mysticians, Cyanide, and Animosity.... Not only that but Russel Simmons (ya know... the dude who owns Phat Farm and Def Jam) came to my crib to listen to my demos when I was barely outta high schol and 2 times the emcee you think you are... i keep connects... what you doing besides basement mixtapes?

i perform all over, ive performed all over the UK, aswell as amsterdam n germany.

ive featured on other artists albums, got plenty of tracks on mixtapes released/based in diff countries round the world, got my first album in the making, aswell as a joint EP with a producer and a promo cd with a close friend, i got plenty of radio play around the UK, also had radio's ask for new songs that are in australia, canada and america.

u mean the same cyanide from new york??? the same cat who has given me props for my music and respect and enjoys the shit that im making/doing??? the same cat who battled millz and got through to an internet vote to decide the winner cos the judges couldnt decide???

good for you.

at least you know who cyanide is... that is one of my best friends and we tore down plenty of shows together... don't get it twisted ... it was respect as an artist... i KNOW my boy and we gave plenty of props to kats for doing they thing because of a mutual love for true hip-hop... but when dudes start getting beside themselves we tend to put them on the spot and make 'em show and prove... and if ya run into him again tell him D.R. said wuddup...

look... i ain't got no "real" problems with you, dude... you just took what i initially said and put ya own twist on it... i said it before and i'll say it again... i'm always fair when it comes to rating a track... ya flow was off at times... a few things seemed forced to me... granted, ya had punches here and there... but audio is also about how it sounds... if you don't care how it sounds then why should anyone else?

respect on that last comment then man, yeh like i said, i know this wasnt the most amasing shit ever, it wasnt intended to be, but end of the day a diss is about disses and punchlines over anything else, thats the whole point of a battle n shit, n i put more effort into gettin sum lines than anything else, tha q had no punchlines at all, i wrote the written part in like 15-20 minutes and then jumped up and started tryna record it instatly n had probs with the cable, that take was the best we got, the cable issue made me feel un-easy cos i wasnt sure how bad it was gonna cut off the vocals, i wasnt too fucked about perfecting the flow, simple reason being, i make money off my music, this is just some pointless yet funn pass time internet beef, i may have taken what u said the wrong way, ive had alot of shit on plate which i dont wanna get into but that has caused me to snap at a few people over nothing, so if that be the case, i apologise.

but yeh man ill tell syanide u said sup n shit, jus make sure we mean same dude, ur boy from brooklyn right??? if not, then its a diff dude lol, has a slight lisp???

but yeh man, ya boy done a couple battles for jumpoff(uk battle night which has moved to the streets and now new york) first he battled mic asassin from UK who been over there battlin round reppin UK, that battle was maaaaad close, n then he battled mills which came through on the internet vote, which again is maaaad close, mills had it in the first couple round, but only just, then syanide took it in round 3 kinda easy imo, so it went to 3, 30 second rounds which personally i thought sy JUST took it then it went to punchline round which was kinda weak on both parts, but still, kid got skills.

Pretty well summed up...And, I clearly stated in my "diss" to leady that I wasn't all out dissin him...It was mostly a braggin track wit a few shots at him

So, while Leady tried to diss me, I barely tried to diss him and owned him.

Oh...and expect a "real" diss next time...cuz I'm sick of his fat mouth

Nuff said

Q, have you noticed your crew are the only ones claiming its that bad??? even heads ive beefed with on several occasions have said your crew are saying its worse than it is.

like ive said, it was far from my best, agreed my flow wasnt all there, but i didnt try and perfect, i just wrote down lines, that was it, fact remains, your a hating little faggot, i have given you props when i fealt it was deserved, but i also tell you when things could be tightened up and all u do is cry and bitch like a little girl.

fact remains im far from as bad as you and others try to claim i am, and i would merk you and many people on this site in live battle, cos thats how i do, fuck shit for internet battles n disses, live is where it should be done kid, simple as that.

anyway ill try get some pics from my performance at a block party tonight to show u how i rock a crowed :thumbup:

if it's da smae dude i seen on ya myspace jump off then that's not the same dude... the cyanide i'm talking about was born in England but moved to Ny as a kid... he moved back to England cuz of issues with his citizenship... plus he's black... kid on ya myspace is white... the dude i'm talking about makes his freestyls sound like some shyt that took time and effort to write... he's just THAT amazing with his rhyme skills... you'll know him if ya ever heard him rhyme... prolly the illest rapper i ever heard... signed or unsigned...real talk...he'd make a killing if he ever got signed

man...LOL @ ur accent....beat is TIGHT.....flows nice,multis r good....

speach imped ? hmmm....

punches r their but..only a few were nice tho....down load line was nice...

clap line played...cherry line played...

ehhh...i'll have sumthin for ya then....fatty