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heh. I liked the first four line cuz I could actually relate to that. But murder and gangbanging. Thats some thing my brother would rap about so I guess you can say I only like a little bit of this. But good job......

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Mom never noticed what happened as I lay in bed and cried
She was working at the factory unaware of the pain in the room I lied
.
We started to rob bnaks, and turned that profit to crack
Soon pulling 200 grand a week by sellin the goods to blacks
Crack epidemic reached its high, the entrepenuers of cash
Making the biggest deal of our lives, a mill producing coke/hash
5,000 lb the first day, Crips on top, we had a royalty mentality
On top of the Underworld, but about to crash in reality

nice piece this had alot of potential nice vocab used this is a very good piece kinda stretched out try to cut it down or put . between verse ok cuz it just looks kinda stretched out but still good keep doin ya thing i liked the lines above from the piece it was good man ill like to see more pieces from u i see u got a lot of potential so keep doin ya thing man

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Originally Posted by Sixth Sense

Thank you...but This is old stuff

wow I havent rapped in 4eva

robble robble robble

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