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make that 10 kos on my way to 11.... my bad
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Who decides who gets in?... I'm confused here...lol
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ayo im a newb, but im tryna come up feel me so let me know somethin
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...29&page=2&pp=15 |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144426
^^ only battle on this board....definately not my best but i guess the kid is wack now some other shit ive done your basically WORST-ON-THE-SITE, aint audio cuz moms heard him CURSE-ON-THE-MIC next time we battle...get ya fuckin PERSONALS-RIGHT!! //1 (25) guess i'm a gas clerk, cuz i have KIDS-SEEIN-THE-PUMP haha, this the only person that votes himself as EMCEE-OF-THE-MONTH //2 (25) halt-ya-brethin cant stop-the-demon even with a POPE-WHOS-BLESSIN-YA just for the medi belt he needed a VOTE-THROUGH-MESSENGER //3 (25) WROTE-A-CURSE, HOPE-IT-HURTS 6 challengers & i just SMOKED-THE-FIRST honestly...what faggot goes to cafes just to POST-A-VERSE?!! //4 (25) killer rhymes i recite plus i place the KNIFE-BLADES-TO-YA-ARM we all know you prewrite but shit....NINE-DAYS-TO-RESPOND??!!! //5 (24) DONE-SPLITTIN-JAWS & lettin ya FEEL-THE-TOOL sorry your in UNWRITTIN-LAW, just place ya foot to the scar and *HEEL*-THE-WOUND ^(posted as respected demon) i frequently SLAY CHUMPS IN DROPS while you PLAY TOUGH ON COMPS since the voters want personals im fuckin ya bitch on BANGBUS DOT COM!! reading my flows leaves you cursed~with~mental~scars, skills my god-your-lacking my verse *hertz*~like~rental~cars and yours...well...*not-exactly* kid, these-is-facts face it ya team-is-trash twice when we meet-ta-clash the site seems-ta-crash my verse contains all components-of-pro-flows im throwin-some-low-blows you only still champ cuz ya last two opponents-were-no-shows tired of peasents in my presence thinkin their worthy i'll just place the 9 to their spine like a steve mcnair jersey my style is grimey and intelligent, my flow will cause-teams-to-know-that when i leave you with *red skin* from the *bullets* like a pair of washington-throwbacks!! (gotta like sports to get that one) tired of typing now ^^edited for a typo |
the second half was way better...youve got some well developed punches...you need work on those though but the multis were ill...we dont have a multi head so that kind of sets you apart
meh...i vote yes |
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No, This Guy Gets D/r n Sway'er Votes, I Have Extensive Evidence If You Need It Exposed. Next. MadProphet: No Doubt, Some Hot Punches...But Can You Come Consistant? And How Active Are You... How Many Minutes/Hours A Day Will You Be Online? I Say Weve Found A Text Head, But Get Rid Of Those Dashes, Skwiggle Lines, n Caps. Your Verse Will Look Much Better. Erm, Get A Record... Verbs Vote: In. |
aight yall i guess i do have to drop a verse... ok this isnt my best battle verse from the site but its decent, its my first battle after a month of not battling so it might seem a little rusty but either way i KOd the guy with it 5-0.... it was against Chillz... here it is
______________________________________________ aight check dis shit... anotha down ass nigga from da NYC tryin to drop it ill... step back bitch while i scar and kill... nigga you know i be for real... fuckin newbie bitch on tha text bringin it straight softcore... this nigga still suckin at tha tit of his momma tha whore... Son my lyrical form will send chilz up yo spine... bitch singin his do' re' me' but we all know he cant Rhyme... you reppin da city that neva sleeps and tha apple so BIG... yo lack of skilz shows in yo lack of battle a battle SIG... BIGPAPPAs here to bring you your lyrical death... my rhymes hit quicka than a slug to ya chest or an OD off Chrystal Meath... a yo dis shits just about done fo sho... this nigga so unexperianced he couldnt "RAP"e kobes hoe... get tha fuck up out my face dawg... our shit aint tha same dawg... bitch i slap ya ass harda than a lumbajack smackin da log... motha fucka Imma bring it back old school and bring it illa... NIGGA IM THA FRANCHISE AND YOU GOT FUCKED UP BY THA REAL LYRICAL RHYME KILLA...!!!! BIGPAPPA76 ________________ aight so holla back at me i know i could be an asset to your crew so let me know ASAP yall... Peace.. BIGPAPPA76 |
Take place for LilJ, but you can't stop my run, bitch
He's so desperate to win, he had to resort to fake punches// He's using old material, cuz he alwyas lacks-the-diss You're the one RECYCLING more than 'Mother Nature activists'// "I'm eating , like I was eating a whole deck-of-cards" I wanted to quote your type of lines, just to show how whack-you-are// I would eat you alive, but i'd probably end up hurling He couldn't make it for the battle, so he sent his girlfriend// He's trying to smash me, but you're lacking-the-crunch-guy Yea you got mutlis, but why'd you sacraficed your punchlines?// You're on asian raps, then why're you acting like the blackest-G? by the way, U was ducking my call-out, cause you were just too whack-for-me!!// so wat up |
Lil Nae's pretty good, it's up to y'all tho.. Lil Nae's aight.. anybody got feedback, Vinci?!
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Yo Whats Up Do I Have Any Spot In Dis Crew I Battled Automatik// Ice-pick// And String I Think I'll Have An Chance To Beat Him Iam In Da Lead By 2 Votes//
So Doi Have A Spot |
yo im down to tryout... im a hard worker looking for an ill crew to help me elevate.. im not too bad tho.. i beat ILL Tempa and Schema and Da jokah those are my best wins.. i really dont wanna drop a verse.. im too tired right now.. but i wanna be down wit ya'll
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no for madprophet and yes for sik
i wasnt feeling madprophets |
No 4 prophet and Sik iz decent
but u gotta come harder 2 roll wit uz Next~~~ |
meki vs. ice pick
Records: (r.v.= 0-0) (I-net Total=16-2) Gender: Femcee Position: Text, (ive also been known to make a mean topical) Age:16 Status: Trying To Find A Solid Lyric Battling Site Activity: 5-20 Posts Per Day meki vs. ice pick note: i dont like using math vocab, it is part of the battle... ...had to use these words at least once... (words in bold). Pssh, Demands From A Dope? Got Fem's Instincts To Force Some Beef, Eh...Must Have Solved Em. Calls Me Out With A Task Column, Your Verse Should Be Legit. Not A Math Problem. Catch Solem At His Act, Thinks Hes Brave With A Mathemetician Policy. Needs A Job, Cause Hes In Denial If He Thinks Rap'll Get Em Into College Free. Ask And Its Written? Like Folks Truely Obey Ice Pick's Vanity. Avy With Eyes Of Chink, Thought Its Trendy? Ill Let You Know When Rice Hits Sanity. Lacks A Sense Of Humor, So He Stuck To Advising Herbs. Thinks A Dividend Will Curve His Results, When His Best Shots Biting Words. He Keys Cause Fighting Hurts. Whitey Surfs, No Chance For His Revival. Read The Bible, Jesus Christ Himself Would Tell You, Your No American Idol. Comes n Spits A Fraction Of Truth, n Hopes For Positive Factors. A Dope At School, Made Drama's Fool. Radically Gains Derogitive Fractures. 39-6? Minus The Dash, Add A Decimal n Youve Got His Weight Per Pound. I Dont Know Whats Worse About His Verse, The Played Or Faker Sound? What A Bakers Ground Of Beef To Slaughter. Plus Hes Vet Division. Ill Circle Through These Rhymes Again, Once He Removes His Head's Incision. (avy) Special Eds A Given, Like Red In Linen, This Threads A Driven Blood Supply. Too Rational To Let A Drug Apply. Like If Mackenzies Thought To Leave Spud A Bride. Left Love Aside, Dont Want Dome? Hed Rather Let Text Degrade Him. He Wont Put Out. Hes Prude In Manner, Unless Its A Sex Equation. Spits Multiply Until The Rest Evades Em, This Ends With Him In Lack Of Sentence. Attacks Decendents For Trash Genetics, Next Act You Menace...Dont Mix Rap With Ackedimics. Sorry If You Dont Get My Flow, Im New To Text. HeHe. What You Think? |
^not bad for meki.. i don't know what y'all think? and genecide is good as hell, if y'all decline him, sumthin' wrong seriously.. nigga got skills!
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