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Voted For: Wes City
Wes City had better flow, harder punches and, Both of yall had about the same personals, so that is tied in that categorie. Both had tight verses, and it was hard to judge, but wes city did better in flow and punches catetgories, to take the win, Return the vote please in a battle in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
you did ok wit the punchlines so now start pickin up better rhymes
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Voted For: Kordozar
wes city: Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note ^^^MOMS BARS????..LOL... GET DA FUCK OUT OF HERE FAM..U WASN'T SERIOUS HERE Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne ^^^I GET DA ACNE/BUMP THING...BUT WHUT DO U MEAN ONLY THING THAT BUMPS KORDOZAR??...I DIDN'T GET IT Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister ^^^NOO...STEP YA RYHME SCHEME UP FAM U MAKE YA WORDS RYHME LIKE A NOOB I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb ^^^????? LOL DIS WASN'T HOTT ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials ^^NICE...GOOD PLAY OFF HIS NAME a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep ^^^NO kordozar: You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons ^^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...BUT DA WES PUNCH WAS WACK Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? ^^^DECENT PERSONAL OFF HIS ALIAS You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle ^^^OKAY..NEVA SEEN DIS WUN COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts ^^^NAH Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain ^^I GET IT....IT WAS MISSIN SOMTHIN Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises ^^^DECENT.... KORDOZAR TAKES IS BATTLE EASY...WES SOUND HE LIKE HE WAS TRYIN 2 BE FUNNY BUT IT WASN'T WORKIN DATZ BASICALLY ALL I CAN SAY.... |
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Voted For: Wes City
wes city... damn child... hahah you took this easy.. overall all your shit was on lock from the vocab to the set up very nice verse. nothing to imporve on ... could get a lil more complex vocab but eh i think you still took this.. i had a favorite line in this "ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials" ^damn Korz.. iw as expecting more from you on this but i liked your verse. it just wasnt as complex as wes cities was. you had some nice vocab and your thoughts in it were complex but they just didnt carry through. overall though nice job but it just wasnt up to wes cities... Vote Wes City RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=201689 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kordozar
ok Kord jsut had more thought out and better punches, and I liked his flow more, Wes urs was too short for me man..this was a hella good battle both had mea laughing but Kord made me laugh more and he made his hurt more so great job Kord..keep writing guys Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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