Decent little battle here.

Nice read.

Would have been nicer if it didn't have "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaackkkkkkkkkk* bullshit in it.

And the other would have been nicer if I hadn't been turned inta Clint Eastwood reading the shit.

And what's with the stretchy ass lines, peeps?

Pretty much better everything by Lethal.

His flow was a touch better, but his wordplay stoodout here.

Resulting in better punches.

The "God/Prayers" and the "Cuban" line were real nice...
And stood out more than anything Killer had.

Peace

Agreed With B2k I Thought Lethal Came Better

Lethal- Nice Structure, And Your Punches Were There Also, Most Of Them Hit With not That Many Fillers. Nice Flow, And Your Vocab Was Nice Too. Creativity Was Ok, And Consistency Was Consistent, Lol

Killer- Ok Verse, Ur Structure Was Ok, And Your Punches, Well, Some Of Them Hit Him, Nice Flow And Ok Vocab. Creativity Was Better, But Consistency Was Worse

Punches- Lethal
Flow- Lethal
Personals- Killer Emcee
Structure- Lethal
Overall- Lethal

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breakdown:
in my eyes....killer took this one by a little......he had better and stronger punches.....he put effort into them.....
lethalz were kinda fillers......they werent that decent and thought out.....
punches: killer- he came hard out on it.....with stronger and harder punches
flow: tie i really liked how both of you really kept the rythm
personals: killler.....easily
vocab: lethal......easily
vote: killler.....mainly for punches and flow.....nice battle
but killer took this.....no hatee

yo no doubt killer took dis one how structure was aight but his flow was much better than lethals also his lines seemed kind of stretched...close battle but i think killer took dis one in da line about the rapin priest, also his punches were consistant and hard hitting

OK, here's tha breakdown:

Killer - I can tell you are a real emcee... you rhyme in ya text like you prolly speak in real life (slang). The problem is, unless the reader is intelligent enough to deduce the manner and tone in which you are 'rappin' your words, they may not get what you are trying to say. Most shouldn't have a problem with it but some won't get it. Anyway aside from that, work on your structure and PUNCHES, PUNCHES, PUNCHES. Personals too man. That's what battles are about. Don't rhyme about what YOU do or what YOU are, battlin is about dissin your opponent. Every line should refer to the person you are battlin, nothin about yourself. Also, that whole "wwwaaaaaaaaaaacccccccckkkk" thing needs to go, cuz it's.... wack. Overall your verse lacked anything impressive, was just like freestylin, only not as good...

Lethal - OK, let me get my magnifying glass... c'mon man what is THAT? If I have to strain to read a verse, that's automatically one thing against you. You have a lot of good ideas, but you need to find a practical way of getting your ideas across... that structure is difficult to read and lukewarm at BEST. Nothin hot at all. I do see mad potential with your ability to come up with creative wordplay, and you actually threw a punch or two, which is why you won this battle. You need to fix your structure and method before you can elevate. That is all.

vote = Lethal

Look at dis "newb challenging" ignominy....."LehtalNJectionz"....**
He got lost somewhere in hiz flow.....n he askin me 4 directionz....
ok....
To me....i think that lethal+mic=wwwwwwaaaaaaccccckkkkk!!!!!
Get back on track, he runnin' from me as if he were "Iraq under attack"
i get the "wack" part.....but plse stop.....lol.
You couldnt "flip the script" if u stopped...dropped.......n' rolled ova...
Dis bitch tryin 2 fit in da "hip-hop" nation by tellin peeps he a hova...
niceeeeee
Yo....no saint.....and no "lethalNjectionz"...can withold my ballz.....
Like fucken raping priests.......dis fag is just like them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alright alright alright pretty good
Dis fag steppin in mah way.....thinkin dat he culd with stand my power
But ask da 7 pple dat i merked- anything that comes in my way i devour
ok could work on it but decent
So sorry to tell you (lehtalnjections)....but ur "shot"...reflected on you
And now u believa all da legends ur mom told u bou me are true!!!
moms jokes are played but not 2 bad 1st line was good
While I was sittin'...i waz thinkin...y rite 14 linez wen i culd kill em in two?
But den i thought....da min. is 10 linez...so why let dis eazy win go to you!
very good closer nice
overall- i give you a ummmmmm 7.5/10


..This Ventriloquist Dummy Got The Support Of His {Crew}, With Their Hands In His Ass..Bringing It To Me? I Had To Jump 10 Levels Down Just To Battle In Your Class...
good nice good opener
...This Cunt Needs To Confess, Your{N} {O}ver Your Head, So Ill Rudly {P} On {{E}mcee's} Dress.. Your Mood Shifted From Confident To Soul-Broken Like Fat Bitches With PMS...
please just lose the " { }" your killing it
...{Killer Emcee} Thinks He Rips Shit, But When He Spits The-Board-Cringes..Ill Bust Your Ass In Like Fags Visiting Your House Busting Down The-Door-Hinges...
ok not bad
...Instigating A Battles Like Massaging A Rabbits Foot, Ya Pressin-Ya-Luck..Ya Essence-Is-Fucked Cuz Ya Couldnt Get Into Gear If It Meant Depressing-The-Clutch..
can work on it but ok sorta played with the gear thing.
...Just Take The Beating And Leave Your Dignity And Pride..Wishing You Were #1? Thats More Prayers Then God Can Provide...
ok could revise that and make it better
...Keeping It Locked, So Rock This In Your Sig Kid, ?{Lethal}-Is-The-Best?..Cause Your Chances Are Cut Off, Like Mariah Carey Passin Sobriety-Test...
no offence but very wack could do better
...UPC Barcodes Got More Quotable Bars Then Your Weak Stats..Beating Me? Like Blind Cubans Reaching For Tampons, Close But No Cigar...

ok decent closer not too bad
total: ummmmmmmmmm about a 6-7/10 i dont know why, but I fealt KILLErEmmcees shit more your was good too both good but killeremcee took this one