This was feedback posted for Wrecker
 

Wrecker
Leave ya brain cells dead excusable if ya misspelled guy...
...& he question's his skill..That's the reason he added the Y *

no, think harder

Hatin?, Yea I've got a hate list, & killin' everyone tha's listed...
...& I'll End 100% of careers, so you'll just be another statistic

almost, think harder

Yea you're better than me ..... at being the worse X- none...
...So how do ya love ya crew? ..when ya spelled cryme wrong

whack, think harder

Text is soo last week... but ya battlin' me.. are you dumb?...
...cos if it's really that old? .. then ya style's soo last month

umm, almost hit, need better wording

C.S. is wack, text kings, please ya'll will never be royal...
...& this kid's in the back of the syndicate, like bad lawyers

nah

The champ of all .... son wrecker hand you the reign check...
...& this kid's from philly, but still can't make a blunt statement

almost, think harder

enygma
Wrecker's a queer.....even takes it in the ass for cash
So he's on the road to Riches.....Mikes, Sams, and Jacks

dopey

The Definition?....You're kidding, these are my opponents
Correcting kid's spellings are their only defining moments

enygma?

I'm at the top of my game.......never do the mighty fall
Even raising the bar.....got you playing limbo by default

meh, so-so

You should be thanking me.....I'm here to show ya fame
Cause after this ass kicking people might know your name

no@SG

Blah, I'm only going ten.....be glad I'm not storming ya
Knew the fag couldn't see me....so eye had to come cornea

I'm telling

overall enygma shoulda won but meh battle overall

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wow......only a month and already three votes :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for enygma
 

ya'll verses are dumb so i aint votin but it'd go to enygma for knowin you good enough to make fun of the fact u correct grammer and then you did it like twice in ya verse, pretty amusing. but gyeah enygma, gay lines played much?Wrecker's a queer.....even takes it in the ass for cash
So he's on the road to Riches.....Mikes, Sams, and Jacks

The Definition?....You're kidding, these are my opponents
Correcting kid's spellings are their only defining moments
^^^but this definately won you the battle jus cuz it was a mad personal cuz the bitch done did it in his verse.

Voted For: enygma

Leave ya brain cells dead excusable if ya misspelled guy...
...& he question's his skill..That's the reason he added the Y *
^^^LOL... nice opener..... 8/10
Hatin?, Yea I've got a hate list, & killin' everyone tha's listed...
...& I'll End 100% of careers, so you'll just be another statistic
^^^^mmmm...... bit of self glorifying here... but not bad. 6/10
Yea you're better than me ..... at being the worse X- none...
...So how do ya love ya crew? ..when ya spelled cryme wrong
^^^^ first line... played cocepts.... second line.... nice personal.. 7.5/10
Text is soo last week... but ya battlin' me.. are you dumb?...
...cos if it's really that old? .. then ya style's soo last month
^^^well..... had the ideas.... but didnt really hit... 5/10
C.S. is wack, text kings, please ya'll will never be royal...
...& this kid's in the back of the syndicate, like bad lawyers
^^^^^dont like this line.......
The champ of all .... son wrecker hand you the reign check...
...& this kid's from philly, but still can't make a blunt statement
^^^yeah pretty nice closer.... 7/10
overall pretty nice verse.... a couple of bars should have ben rethought but nice verse man.. total.. 33.5

Wrecker's a queer.....even takes it in the ass for cash
So he's on the road to Riches.....Mikes, Sams, and Jacks
^^^LOL..... nice intro... 8/10
The Definition?....You're kidding, these are my opponents
Correcting kid's spellings are their only defining moments
^^^^ LOL...... very nice personal here... 9.5/10
I'm at the top of my game.......never do the mighty fall
Even raising the bar.....got you playing limbo by default
^^^LOL.... first bar... a bit of self glorify... but really set the scene for the second line which was brilliant.. 9/10
You should be thanking me.....I'm here to show ya fame
Cause after this ass kicking people might know your name
^^^^na.... dont really like this, ideas were aight tho 6/10
Blah, I'm only going ten.....be glad I'm not storming ya
Knew the fag couldn't see me....so eye had to come cornea
^^^^ HAHAHAHHA.... nice closer... 8.5/10
Overall... brilliant verse by enygma... must add that the structure was imaculate and the flow was nice...
total.... 41

vote enygma..... yo enygma.... ca you return the favour and drop a vote on the top battle of my sig... im dying to get it closed... thx

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Voted For: enygma

v/enygma

wrecker-you had a good verse this was a close battle but you had a messed up structure.......good personals........but usuing a spellin isnt a hard one cuz ppl do tha all the time as slang.......your punches were okay.....coulda came a little hardder with them.......some of ya end's didnt rhyme too well togther and some just didnt pd.......work on that......and dont fill in spaces with .... in ya verse fillers ruin it......

enygma-you came over the top in this battle cuz your punches were wittier............you had a lot of humor in ur verse......the ends of your lines actually rhymed together.......you had better vocab than wrecker as well..........nice perosonal bout spellin......cuz it was even shown that its tru in this battle so it made it all the more harder......good job.......

return tha favor....
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144
honest explained
:thumbup:
v/enygma

UPN :thumbup:

I love that channel.................:laugh:

Voted For: enygma

Enygma :

Wrecker's a queer.....even takes it in the ass for cash
So he's on the road to Riches.....Mikes, Sams, and Jacks
^^lmao dope opener 10/10
The Definition?....You're kidding, these are my opponents
Correcting kid's spellings are their only defining moments
^^decent meta good punch 7/10
I'm at the top of my game.......never do the mighty fall
Even raising the bar.....got you playing limbo by default
^^lol good meta 8/10
You should be thanking me.....I'm here to show ya fame
Cause after this ass kicking people might know your name
^^played 3/10
Blah, I'm only going ten.....be glad I'm not storming ya
Knew the fag couldn't see me....so eye had to come cornea
^^dopest bar of the battle 11/10

overall : 39/50 (78%)

Wrecker:

Leave ya brain cells dead excusable if ya misspelled guy...
...& he question's his skill..That's the reason he added the Y *
^^good nameplay and opener 7/10
Hatin?, Yea I've got a hate list, & killin' everyone tha's listed...
...& I'll End 100% of careers, so you'll just be another statistic
^^decent punch 7/10
Yea you're better than me ..... at being the worse X- none...
...So how do ya love ya crew? ..when ya spelled cryme wrong
^^weak 4/10
Text is soo last week... but ya battlin' me.. are you dumb?...
...cos if it's really that old? .. then ya style's soo last month
^^ funny lol 8/10
C.S. is wack, text kings, please ya'll will never be royal...
...& this kid's in the back of the syndicate, like bad lawyers
^^good punch and meta 8/10
The champ of all .... son wrecker hand you the reign check...
...& this kid's from philly, but still can't make a blunt statement
^^wack 4/10

overall : 39/60 (65%)

vote: enygma