no i'm not looking for that shit you said, listen to something like...
Forest whitiker by Brother Ali...the bpm is at this rate...but he kills it...
Don't ever Fucking Question that by Atmosphere...kills the slow ladies song
or even
Harmonica by MF doom...

ladies might not like some doom or sleep type shit, but they do enjoy clever lyrics...

peace, but do you

once again no im saying your track was mad boring sounded like your where alking

i should say there was a lack of emotion...and your lyrics where basic you odnt have to use big words or anything but just that shit was mad basic not my style

and whats the use of me posting feedback if i cant state my opinion why would i say
"that was a dope track but not my style'
your sayign thats what everyone should say
if not then im lost becuase you said this
"is it a good track? definitely. Is it my speed? Definitely not."

see i think this
is it a good track? it oculd be if the guy who rapped wasnt so boring and upped his game..
is it my speed? no i explained ^^above

WTF is the purpose of that? thats exactly what i did but you think differntly

i dont want beef becuase thi is the internet...and yes im keeping an open mind about things other people may feel different but once againthats there opinion and this is my opinion......i just think your voice sounds shit on slow tracks and it dont really fit this song, but since what is done is done all i can say is what i would have done different becuase you cant do anything about your voice so i would have changed the rhyme scheme up alil bit,,

and you where saying this is a song for the ladies right?
and gay poeple consider themselves ladies right? i was just tryna cracka joke to keep your mind of the fact i hella dissed you

and its funny how someone gives you honest feedback and you get mad or defensive
but ive read some feedback fromy ou that said shit similar sort of.

but yea i couls tell he was new to recording but he got mad potiential

and im only getting mad descriptive on your flawse is becuase your going for shows and cds sales or whatever so you need your shit perfect unlike most these kids on here

dayum that dude singin' is sick.

yeah this beat is fuckin fire. and im feelin this lyrics.

1st verse: shit was dope, good flow. the voice fit the type of track. quality was good.

hook: hook is one of the best underground singin shit ive seen for a while

2nd verse: shits dope. im feelin it. good flow.

Like I said elsewhere, :shrug: Ok. To each his own. Thanks for the feedback regardless.




Tayj, thanks fam, appreciate it. It's a damn shame that me and Cream won't be collabing again any time soon.

Listening..

The dude singing is cool.. good voice.. almost as good as mine.. the beat is fucking awesome.. first verse.. i like how you came in.. flow is on and shit.. delivery is chill.. lyrical content is fine for this type of track.. that dude adding some adlibs in sounded good.. second verse.. love dont cost a thing, raised the toll.. that was cool.. flow is ill.. delivery and lyrical content are still going good.. ill probably end up downloading/burning this.. good shit.. just an overall ill track.

Time to leave some feedback on this one...

Loving the beat first of all...definitely good pick. Cream dude, nice voice, it grows on you and I'm already singing along with it now. Catchy hook without a doubt

Okay, you come in...some real talk right there...flow is on point just like the delivery: it's laid-back and relaxed yet it doesn't sound boring at all. I like the Cream dude in background dude, it adds something to the verse. I like your lyrics on this one, speaking some truth yet not in a vulgar way you know. You're just stating facts.

Hook again: I'm loving it for sure

Second verse: flow is getting better near the end in fact, it seems like you were getting more and more into the song. Delivery keeps on point, presence is there...lyrics are good just like in the first verse. I just like your overall attitude on both verses in fact...

Hook and outro: adlibs bring something extra to it, and I can't get over the dude's singing...damn...it really sticks to my head...*sings*

Props for real on this one...

*hops off his dick*

Haha...nah for real...props (feedback to learn rankings in RG btw)

the beat choppin is sloppy snares are wack hook singing sounds off pitched i duno
the first cat got a nice delivery quality got some his success line is cool this is a solid verse ur flow seems a little repetitive switch it up during the verse.
hook agian....
flow switched up so that nice styll flow on point as far as i can tell this is a solid track.work on delivery bit and chrisma on some of ya lines

Probably the most knowledgable feedback I've read here in months. Good looks.

BTW, I happen to like the snares.

OMFG im jelous of yo quality :(

but yeah, lyrics iz koo, n that guy iz good at singin. tha flow iz good fo both u n tha singin guy. koo beat. lol @ dooms makin them noises throughout tha chorus. but yeah, nice song, i like it, werd

yo this track right here is nasty...and ya boy cream can sing...deff hotness right here fam...uno

ok i liek the beat did you make it?
hook he has a nice voice most definately but i wanst feeling the adlibs at al to be honest lol
lyrics were good on the first verse props like ur voice very laid back
singer higggggh on one part lol damn props
dooms this verse had a few funny lines goos shit overall
production is good like it is on all of ur songs
look forward to hearing more from cream
if this is the clean version what does the regular version sound like id like to hear it
for stats

Colby, Malice and Willa, thanks all for the feedback.

Willa, if you want the unedited version, hit me when you're on AIM or something and I'll shoot it to you.