upp diggity.....

word. i was the first to read it when you sent this man this is a very good piece emotion an imagery was real good i loved it best om

wooooooooooooooooooo...thx upping

upping................

Aight...lemme break this down...

The concept first of all was very interesting and allowed you to put a lot of imagery combined with raw emotion in it. I love how you divided it into different parts expressing several aspects of the path of a warrior. The vocabulary was excellent, you had a high level of complexity yet it remained understandable. The flow was a bit off here and there but nothing too bad. The emotion was definitely there, it had a very powerful vibe to it. The imagery was the best though: very vivid. It was as if I was in the middle of it all myself.

Definitely HOF :thumbup:

WOOOOO here that^^some kats know wot it is fuckin maddrapper bitch anyway dram thx a lot!

upping fuckaz..i will rtf

uppin bitches...pz

Yeah this was nicew drop liked the vocab and emotion to this I imagined it like I was thier but in all this was coo 8.5/10

hell yeah...this was a tight ass piece...vocab was xcellent besides its lil complexity..the immagery was dope and concept was clear..i like the was u structured the whole piece mayne that gave u a plus the only thing that went wrong was that in some places ur flow went off bur fuck it that could be irrelevant the shit is tight...keep 'em comin...

holla

Vocabulary was excellent, really complex but all made sense. Use of alliteration made this shit just bounce off the tongue lol obviously the emotion was fire and the topic and the way u approached it was dope. Best piece I've read on RV and thats not an over statement. :thumbup:

holy shit ^^^wow ....nominate me if you like it:thumbup:

how do i do that and i will. U have straight talent man.

go to nominations n put the link in woooooooooooooo

Wow.. I enjoyed this. Your vocab was always indeph-like. (almost :))
I liked some of the messeges you got across. I actually understand your rap style,
which means you aren't a confused rapper who imitate what they say.
I'm dead tired and I still got entertained with a text open mic. Congrats.