RapVerse.com Community - Paramik vs Ice Pick

Voted For: Paramik

good battle......ima break it down....

ICE PIK
P's battle success?-he-fails-at-this, so watch as Ice-derails-this-b1tch
INTESIFY EFFECT BEAT him so i think its safe to say your skills is shyt!!
^^^HAD a weak personal...weak punch..ur first line was ok setup.punch killed it.
5/10
sayin you'll rip ICE is like sayin' broke people can afford-hummers
ßά$ïć Ţђμğãήỗmίçź ???now ur confused like 1st graders multiplyin' wit four-numbers
GUD WORDPLAY^^^average punch 6/10
want tha truth???...ya skills is like fat-chicks...aint no one diggin'-ya rhymin'
You wouldn't be hot in a volcano in a carribean-climate livin'-inside-it!!
GUD WORDPLAY.AGAIN AVERAGE PUNCH 6/10
Pick???....i'm sicc-and-canivin', while u find dicks-to-your-likin'
^^EH.ILL TAKE THIS AS A MISTAKE COZ IT DNT RHYME WIT NOTIN
not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me
yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy
wordplay gud.punch ok 6/10
Bottom of the 9th P and imma throw the bat at you, watch my mood ‘swing’ and you ‘catch’ my attitude….
I'll rip u and remain casual….ill make u park in ur place and the ‘Board’ walk like monopoly Avenues...
played concept......6/10
Paramik get struck with injuries.. Im the storm in a distant vision ,
Once my lyrical Onslaught hits you your verse will be left in submission,
^^^filller 5/10
you came to this battle like a hurricane.. and blew your chances of winning
^^^again..does this rhyme????
PARAMIK
Already this bitch is thin on his ice, the way this faggot skater sways……
Ice picks flow still couldn’t be graceful if the judges’ marks were A’s.
played..5/10
And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow…
Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show.
^^^think this is worded wrong?.6/10
This fucking herb’s got gas in his ass but it’s the wackness that he supplied.
Knowing that this fags mostly likely to kill himself, than commit homicide.
played 5/10
He says he give the punches for those days, that day he felt lucky, son.
Considering that, the only days he had a punching spree, was only one.
OK 6/10
This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick…
Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick.
BEST LINE SO FAR 7/10
Still fucking the penguins? This guy is all iced out, I’ll tell this guy to chill.
This bastard made Nate Dogg proud, he finally found someone he call kill.
DECENT 6/10
Check in, I’ll be rummaging for Ices’ home, his location, and his house key.
Ice Pick is his own address, watch him obey me cause he’s a SERVER IP.
PLAYED BUT OK.6/10

ICE-34/60
PARA 35/60

scores look tight, but paramik also had far better structure...sum of ices lines didnt rhyme and it was stretched....mostly gud wordplay throughout...but a few played concepts, and the punches too predictable and not hard hittin.
think u both need to make sure u work on how u word your punches too.
overall.uve both come harder than that

best line
paramik
This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick…
Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick.
^^^hardest punch.