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-   -   Tactixx Vs. Lust (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=112928)

Oakley 02-15-04 12:08 PM

Lust
some tactixx u should use is a fucking dictionary
take my advice seek some lyrical rehab
cuz ur lines r whack and have no vocab
personal, punch = 3
u picked the wrong nigga to fuck with, you dont wanna test this
let me guess wat ur verse is gunna be filled with ,
-filler = 2
some gangster lines, then some prewrites, and a whole lotta bullshit
bitch u cant handle Lust, my lines will hit harder then any lines u spit
-self hype = 1
u dont deserve to battle me , u should quit
ill give u a tast of mah rhymes make u delerious n shyt
metiphore = 2
it will seem like u on shrooms n got a crazzi trip
stepin to me is like jackin off to a grim reaper poster ill beat u to death
metiphore,-played = 0

Wasn't liking this one bit. Last line was so played i had to walk off the laughing and coem back to vote.
Overall = 8

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Tactixx
I think it's safe to trust, when i say i'm quick to bust,
I must be...... this MC quick to let his skills rust,
multi,-self hype,-wording = 2
ashes to ashes dust to dust,
my punches hit you so hard tectonic plates thrust,
-filler = 0
my rhymes come in surplus, i got more in store,
assume the position, get down on all fours,
cause this whore gettin fucked, and im ready for war,
wordplay,punch = 4
poor lust, looks like you're in a bad position,
another victim... my rhymes shine and glisten,
punch,-self hype,-played,-filler = 0[b/]
listen, your weak new york style just aint hittin,
kid's soft as a kitten, i leave lacerations everytime im rippin,
[b]personal,punch,metiphore = 4

I'm not sorry for lyrically strippin your reputation,
I went easy on you kid your rhymes need elevation....
punch = 3

Not nice either. But it had more punches than Lust's did. Elevate.
Overall = 13

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Vote = Tactixx


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