first off...

beat is POW POW POW

flow is ok...delivery is good...i reckon you could work on flow slightly...emotion is coo...up and down with the vocals and not volume wise but the way you pronounce ya words lol...hooks cool...BLAKA BLAKA...na man it's BLAP BLAP...tut tut...lyrics cool though

nice track flow could be better on this...but it was an ok joint...keep droppin :thumbup:

hahahah with a shell in yah back like Franklin the turtle hell nah, a yo this track real smooth cuzz, on some gangstah shit, I havent really heard no one do that around RV, usually its people tryin to prove themselves with there lyrical ability, but this right here something I can vibe too, on the real, quality good, and the hook was perfect, good track man

word appreciate feed man. upppp

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