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This was feedback posted for H.D.
hd won this bitch im sorry 29's verse was fucking amature
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Voted For: twenty9
Vote twenty9 This werent a strong battle but someone has to win. No wordplay, multis werent that great. Overall twenty9 JUST came out with a better verse with flow which won it for him. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: twenty9
h.d sayin i spit garbage, he must b high or not no the definition, im gonna win, this is the truth, not a mutha fuckin premonition/ aight ya got ya fictional rappa called contam-ination you’se a bitch, its known throughout the nation/ ok don’t battle me bitch, u’ll be leavein in a hearse, u only won a battle, cuz flow couldn’t drop a verse/ decent personal, aight ending focus more, stop with the basic flow, get more creative i cant tell you no more 29 times the amount of character used in every on of ya rhymes is the odds of you winning You’d do better surviving a dinner date with Hanibal Lector, tied down on a stretcher set up dont rhyme with the follow up, but aight punch Locked in the kitchen, you could up chuck ya deserts, than me? You’ll never spit sicker Ya style causes laughter, I’ll shatter ya bladder through ya hip bone and leave ya ass pissed dont rhyme, could of been a good punch 2 danm.. Your punches wouldn’t have impact if had two brass fists, with meteors crammed in em You could claim to be divine 29 times, I’ll watch 29 signs of God damning em wasnt feeling the ending... you had a chance to really win this battle EZ, but now that i read your verse you wasnt focus as i thought you was, bars wasnt rhyming, you toss in a quick punch with a messed up set up, FOCUS MORE, RHYME YOUR PUNCHES WITH THE SET UP LINES, and you will be better |
thanx, uppin for more votes............................................. .................................
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This is why I started dropping explanations with every rhyme word in em... acuse yall really do just look at the last couple of words per line... Ther is no rule in hip~hop that you have to rhyme there... rhyming is the name of the name... not where you rhyme... and brass fists and ass pissed rhymes... say it out loud... *smh* You're a multi styled emcee you should know this better than most |
wanna hear sumthin funny h.d.? if all the votes that were dq'd counted, i'd be winning 4-3
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MY VOTE GOT REMOVED???? WTF. Oh and H.D you n your 5 battles?? that are apparently up, you only won 1! ppl look at his record. |
^ said from a guy with 13 L's ............ hell up
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atleast motherfucker i dont float around on the forums sayin iv got so many FAKE ASS awards
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uppin for some votes, and please explain them, we have too many dq'd votes.
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Voted For: H.D.
damn you got this battle on lock ,better flow, better punches,better vocab tw- i like the way you drop but it was to basic http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873 first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873
first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap |
^^^^^^^^^^^^my bad heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873 first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap |
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