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fuck up 01-18-04 05:09 PM

i'm ready to battle, so bring it.

~JaSa~ 01-18-04 05:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by fuck up




when i see tits on you and your b*tch, i'm lookin at sideways "8's"/
time to leave you "violated" like gays when they "slide down straights"/
unlike the presidential race, there ain't no "time" for debates/
you get cooked like eggs on skillets, see how they "incubate"/

you and your fat wad of cash, better not hang it out your wallet/
before cats think your a hooker, and start bangin out your balls b*tch/
like ending relationships, you see me and then dribble at your "lips"/
your "dawgfood" because when this flow hits,it will "KIBBLE YOUR BITS"/
your friends are "chocolate" the way they like to "stay on your hips"/

wanna cum back to my mastery? naw cuz i will be harrassing thee/
and to put it factually, you'll get exposed on TV as an "ACTUAL B"/
claimin that you "smoke trees" keep it real b*tch, the only way you can do it dawg, is by hittin one with "lit skis"/

i'll chop you up, and sell your "cannibal beef" across the nation/
that is, after you get "eaten" by an unleashed army of crustaceans/




Good vocab ... good flow.. punches were alright... good structure... i like it.. keep it up :thumbup:

~JaSa~ 01-18-04 05:16 PM

..........and uhhh wtf is up with sare 2 ?????????

fuck up 01-18-04 05:22 PM

i don't know, but he is wack, and stupid, and dumb for starting shit on an open mic board. LOL.

SaRe 2 01-18-04 05:41 PM

fuk you this neva would have happened if you read the pm... i was fukken around and i didn't know that i was on open mike then i said to dead it so you kept at it so i didn't stop

fuck up 01-18-04 06:16 PM

hahha, how was i supposed to know what the hell you were saying on that pm when you obviously don't know how to spell? it sounded like you were taunting me and i was going to bust back on your ass. muthafucka.

Abotizer 01-18-04 06:20 PM

it's an alright diss

but this isn't too topical or anything. it's alright

structur'e's basic , could use a few more internals

dirtyendzone 01-27-04 08:36 PM

your lines grab only you like you grab yourself
couldn't find a bitch, went for the Keebler elf
you couldn't get no nookie so you boinked the guy who makes cookies.
but he flipped it on you, and fucked you till you bled
then he poked out your eyes and fucked you in the head
your shit is wack, bitch my shit is fly.
you can't compete, bitch, don't even try.


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