more votes ppl

boring people vote 3-0 for daffer22 so.................

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battle was horrible, but daffer had atleast structure, baz had short lines shit that didnt make sense...this isnt the ghetto no one on heres hard and gonna beat anyone up...hurt them with words not by saying im gonna shoot u

*OUT*

forogt 2 vote - daffer took this easily.... and you know thats the truth...he had better everything. keep elevating kids got potential!

yo 4-0 for me one more vote plz

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Here's how I see it.

Flow=Tie, Daffer, you need to work on your flow a bit, it would make your over all verse better. Baz, I'm gona say this again, you need to work on your flow, it'll really improve your verse.

Punches=Daffer, you get this one but just barely, you should both work on your punches, Baz, your getting better at directing your punches but keep working at it.

Personals=Tie, didn't really see anything in the way of personals in either verse. Both of you work on this, personals are a very good tool in battling, a verse with good personals is a very fun verse to read.

Vocab=Daffer, you got this one by the biggest margin. Both of you should work on your vocab, I always say that good vocab is a very good thing to have in order to expand your verses.

Over all=Daffer, you need to work on your flow and your personals and your vocab, if you work on these three areas I think you will improve a great deal.
Baz, once again I don't mean anything by this trying to help you out, but you need to really work on the flow of your verse, your punches need to hit harder, and you need to throw some good personals in there. And again, if you improve your vocab it would help a lot, keep improving both of you and you'll both get there.

Vote=Daffer just barely but you pulled it out.

I forgot to ask you guys to vote on my battle, honest votes please. I took the time on your battle I'm only asking the same in return. Here's the link, thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

ok so I win 5-0 (when all the voters have got a 100 votes don't forget to click on the vote now button at the top of this thread)

Hey moderators I won by 5-0 so can you get this up in my wins

flow- daffer had a better structure so his flow was better, work on it baz
personalz - didn't really see any good personals, both try to add those cuz they can make a big difference in battlez...
metaphors - didn't really saw good metaphors neither, itz a battle, so both need to use more metaphors and personals, thatz what battlin' is all about...
wordplay - same shit, no good wordplay here, u guyz talk hollywood shit insteada battlin' eachother...
wackness - both had a great amount of wackness in their verses, good work on that one...

keep elevatin'...
vote - daffer22

baz loses for havin to many active battles yo .