Brethren vs. JamesJr.
 

I can't vote because I dont have enough posts but heres my thoughts.

Flow - Both had decnet flow but Brethren to me flowed a little better.
Punches-I have to go with Brethren on this one. His punches were more
more creative and hit harder. Jame's Jr. had a few puches but they
were kind of weak and lacked that certain originality.
Personals- Brethren cleaned up with the personals. He did a good job of
ripping on Jame's Bio and quote. Jame's didn't really have any
personals, he tried with the Michigan line, but it came off too weak.
Next time he should try using more personals. Try checking out
your opponents info to find something to use against them.
Vocab- Jame's vocab was a little to simple for my taste. He needs to elevate
Brethren on the other, I thought, did a nice job on the vocab.
Overall- To me this battle was one sided. James Jr was not bad, but needs to
be more creative with his vocab and punches. It also couldn't hurt
to use more personals. My vote goes to Brethren because simply
he had better and stronger punches/Personals.

Please vote on my battles or give feedback if you dont have enough posts
thanks. apathy vs. jamie and apathy vs. Gravity

upping for the last time
After this I dunno what to do,
wait for the battle to close and have wasted the lyrics and time,
just say fuck it and battle again hoping it don't happen again(stuck in battle without votes or waste lyrics)


JamesJr.

People just expect their shit to be posted on for no reason
Me shit, I gave honest opinions on battles, open mics, poetry, etc
I didn't expect nothing in return, but just goes to show ya

prob 20- 30 I looked out for and gave them the time of day and real full attention

Oh well keep it up all real lyricists and peots!!!

I feel you, even if noone else does!

good battle brethren took this shit with all together better metas, punches, originality, and flow j had a better opener and closer but it just wasnt good enough

hit up this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=98529

Brethren obviously owned this battle....
his flow was a little stretched... but it was solid other than that
wordplay was tight, some good punches and personals...


James had a decent flow, multis were ok... punches werent hitting for me... i dont know if it was the setup or the content but they were just weak... like ya first line ...


My vote definetly goes to

BRETHREN