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Nope 04-12-04 11:59 AM

Come on votes need this closed ......... drop links ill return the favor!.....You styll wnat that rematch when this is closed?.. i understand if you dont kuz you dont want to hurt your record nemore but if you styll want it tell me.......Drop good honest votes so this kid can see im better than him ......Drop a Link or 2 Ill return tha Favor

Nope 04-12-04 04:48 PM

Come on votes need this closed ......... drop links ill return the favor!.....

Inception 04-12-04 04:53 PM

nigga u lame and cant rap quit beggin for votez u did that so much u should done be dq wack ass kid nigga dont make me get my belt

uppin for votes

Nope 04-12-04 06:27 PM

man check the polls nigga you wack everyone knows it!!!!! haha you ready for that rematch so i can get up i that ass!!!!! pussy! uppin

L.I. 04-12-04 06:46 PM

My Vote
 
OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN.....

You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career..
Played out punch on ghost...ok vocab...
when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead..
my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama...
career in trauma...u basically stated that in your opener...nice punch tho...
dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama...
nice multi's...ok punch
ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see...
that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee...
no punch in here..ok multi's
But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane...
what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain..
stretched line...boring punch...blah blah...
You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory...
nice closer...sorta played tho

listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/
rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/
gay punch...ok flow
u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/
but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/
nice set up line but ur punch was wack
so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/
1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/
sigh...
got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/
wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/
fallin asleep now....
flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/
come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/
nice punch...
like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/
dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/
blah didnt rhyme...
yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/
wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame
Zzzzz...

Ok vote - Nope
ghost fix ya structure...werk on everything cuz u verse is a chore to read....nope werk on usin better personals...ok im out

Nope 04-12-04 10:13 PM

Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nope 04-13-04 09:06 AM

Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nope 04-13-04 10:39 AM

aight yo this is getting fucking ridiculous...... can someone please hit this shit up with a vote drop a link or 2 ill return tha fuckin favor LOL i need to get this closed!!!!!!!!!

Nope 04-14-04 10:12 AM

aight yo this is getting fucking ridiculous...... can someone please hit this shit up with a vote drop a link or 2 ill return tha fuckin favor LOL i need to get this closed!!!!!!!!!

Nope 04-14-04 01:17 PM

Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PoLiFicK 04-14-04 01:53 PM

nice battlez homie
nope-u started off jus right u came right at yo oppenant i was feelin dat u had good vocab good punches and good structure had a few multis and i was feelin yo flow

best line-You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career..

^^^ da start was sick

worstline-didnt have 1 all yo lines was consentant

ghost- liked yo style also,but u started off a lil slow and dat can effect yo verse homie
but u had some good vocab good ass structure and some good punches and lil multis ..

best line-so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/
1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/

woste line-listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/

didnt really feel da start^^^^ da rest was tight

nope-
punches-8/10
structure-7/10
multis-7/10
vocab-9/10
personals-9/10
disses-8/10
flow-9/10
start-10/10
end-9/10
overall-8/10

ghost-
punches-8/10
structure-9/10
multis-7/10
vocab-9/10
personals-9/10
disses-9/10
flow-8/10
start-6/10
end-9/10
overall-7/10
winner-nope cuz of da starts real big diffrence in my case


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