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JPoll 04-15-04 04:15 PM

i have two votes for me but only one on the top>>????????????????????????

$$UPREME 04-15-04 04:24 PM

weak battle...
the breakdown....
flow-j-poll...but both flows were basic....
vocab-tie..neither
structure-j-poll..

both need to step it up.... VOTE J POLL

JPoll 04-15-04 04:36 PM

uppin for them votes hahahahahha where's all the trash talking now streets?

JPoll 04-15-04 05:03 PM

uppin............................................. ..................................................

guyver4mk 04-15-04 05:26 PM

I'll give this one to JPoll. I liked his style and flow a lot better. Had a few good punches in there that made me laugh.
Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!, lol I liked that.

Streetsweepa. Ya shit was tight. But u need some harder punches to back up ya shit and make the flow smoother so its easier to read.

Vote. JPoll

Da Solution 04-15-04 05:29 PM

Damn JPoll back his talk up sweepa He gets my vote

JPoll 04-15-04 05:36 PM

uppin this shit...yo make your comments longer thanks..............................respect

GKillaz05 04-15-04 05:41 PM

Alright Ima Break it Down This Way For Once.

Street:
I kno your afraid to battle, but ur online//
think about this shit nigga u can run but u cant hide//
4. Bad Opener didnt even ryme
You should quit rappin;come on nigga consider it //
what the fucks wrong with u jpoll are u illiterate?//
6. Alright Punch
shut up bitch u kno ur styles wack//
you an triple N dickride evryone knos that//
hes the only vote youll get “ and thats a fact”//
u talk to much shit and you should be smacked//
5. Meh, nothing great
tripleN might vote for u but no one else will//
all your shit is weak, sorry to inform u rappin takes skill!//
this battle aint over yet, i didnt even move in fo tha kill!//
u dont ryme like 50 u ryme like elvis for rill//
what? U think i wont win? Trust me nigga i WILL!//
7. Best Punch yet
for u this is gonna be a fucking disastor//
this shit is gonna be a canadian massacre//
ur my canadian bitch, and im ur master-
5. Lol, whatever

Overall 27/50

Jpoll:
Streetsweepa, you ain't shit, stop wit da threats,
Only language your usin is cussin, like a bitch wit ta-retz,
8. Nice start
Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!,
6. alright
I'm informin ya elvis never rhymed, n well neither do you,
You rhyme like a ref in sports, it's like your all sniffin glue,
5. Hmm....
N who the fuck is Triple N, i don't even know this kid
A reminder your verse was supposed to on me,not some fucking skid,
6. Nice
My advice to you, is get some new technique,
Start practicing, or stop rhyming you lil worthless geek,
5. same old same old
Me illiterate?!?!?,haha you're the one from The D-isease,
I could say anything here and still win, i like my OJ squized,
4. coulda been good
First you don't follow our rules, then you bring that weak ass shit,
Next time DON'T challenge me, I hate combatting "retard's spit"
7. Nice closer

OVERALL 41/70

I have to give this battle to JPoll for the better punches, and multi;s and flow... other guys shit was good too his punches just didnt hit as hard. vote/J

Can you guys plz return the fav wit my battle VS A.K.A thx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510


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