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gkillaz nice structure good flow average punchs and multies still need to wrok on your vocab and creativity hel pyou ewlvate and make your ppunchs hit harder cause dotn nobody see em comin and try workin on personals those are alwas good kdogg your structure was everywhere you never really got your flow goin right with strtched lines then back to short lines threw of almost all of your punchs to me just elvat e i nvocab also and try tightin up your strucutre that should help with punchs |
I think G took it with Punches and Flow.It was pretty evan but he took punches and n my opinion that what wins battles.
G=6/10 Lil=5/10 Nice battle |
UPPIN 4-1 ... I need one more vote peoples!
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I already know I am gonna win and this in only the first line...
My flow is deadly like Extacy, Im gun break apart your spine... Leavin' you standin there crippled like you cant even walk... When im done wit my spit they gonna outline you in chack... Your 1/2 Man and your 1/2 Women you stupid transfestite... Ima Knock you out, so say good night and leave this site... Lilkdogg is from Philidelphia how you gun call yourself harcore B... You a lil bitch you dick ride so much even your crabs have HIV... Full of STD's but you keep on goin thinkin you gun make it BIG... Your Nothing, I am gun add you under my K-O List on my Sig... Lilkdogg is from Philidelphia how you gun call yourself harcore B... You a lil bitch you dick ride so much even your crabs have HIV... nice line^^^^^^ nice verse here landed some nice punches and personals came off harder than the other guy and i like the vocab in this. Yo! Was that all you had to say cuz i'll tell you right now that shit was gay// I've got nothing to say except i've heard better rhymes from Kid n Play// You say i'm a Dick Riding Faget! You insecure about yourself// You can't rap and you gay so put it back on the shelf// thats when i wanted to stop reading this shit your rhymes is simple nothing complex about them punches and personals didnt hit hard at all vote=G killa Vote on that S.Carter Vs Deleon |
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