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iamthatdude87 04-18-04 10:22 AM

This is my battle wit Potentially Fatal

its me the muthafucken ecko/i drop lines but u cant hear my beat though/
my lines hit hard and goes strait to the point/but i cant figure out whether i should
murder u or go smoke a joint/Any Ways when i rap my ego gets very giant/when that happens i usually become very defiant/bitch!!/In my World u the White Girl And Im KObe Bryant/Ha!!Ha!! so u want to battle me?/nigga i dont think u can even handle me/let alone u cant even stand wit me/ill eat u up and i wont gain a pound on me/
so u say ur PotentiallyFatal/come on fuck wit me and i'll and leave u unstable/
u like a gay porno artist/ready to get anal/but i guess thats the only way u
could be PotentiallyFatal/ as i drop my last lines u can consider it a medal/cause when u get murderd ur going strait to the devil/it wont cost u nothing but but imma beat u for free/i'll whoop ur ass like it was back in the day slavery/if u get one punch... watch...i'll award u the medal of bravery/when im through wit u ill throw u like the trash from yesterday/So when u come to me don't be fronting/cause u know its over Ecko left u Runnin'
PM ME IF IM IN

Real Thorough 04-18-04 02:12 PM

Pschological confusion, illusion or reality?
One conclusion short of a foregone formality
Seemingly a slave to my laid back mentality
Thoughts spinnin round on an axis like polarity
Frustrating me....... Suffocating any clarity
Constant inquisition of my mission and morality
Gallantry......... I apparently possess
But without endeavour I will never earn success
Fuck sess, man its just hindering my progress
Issues never dealt fucks my health plus I talk less
Temporary solution, useless when its warin off
Lungs like lead'n the resin means it hurts ta cough
Prepared to stop.... But Im mentally addicted
Once again my will powers potentially restricted
I've scripted masterpeices, my thesis on humanity
Rhymes skillfully encrypted, mistaken as insanity
Euphemisms, truth-is-in-em, but render me impalpable
Cant work me out so claim the equation is incalculable
Im malleable, versatile, but this is THE F'Nominon
More styles in my rhymes than are sides on-an-octagon
Essential to my aim, but will it attain fame for me?
Besotted or neurotic?? My optics strain to see....

Who fuckin wit me, All I wanna do is rep a crew or fuck it start my own! I dont wanna have to cuz that'll mean yall aint feeling me or take me as a joke and I'll have to hurt someone - lyrically, but get at me

Killah Bwoy 04-18-04 05:43 PM

damn i think dp would let you in....if you still interested pm me ^

simulation 04-18-04 06:55 PM

you ask what can i do for lyrical destruction?
just try to make life easier like a tax deduction
get a good reputation for this crew and disaster piece
im like insurance waiting for her after she crashed her jeep
i dont really need a crew, id be fine alone
cause im a lucky catch, like a shrine in rome
just tryin to get some peeps here, who got my back
i will can never get attacked, and not fight back
my multies make your head spin
not like em, rakim, biggie or redman
this aint who you think this is, try to find my alias
but unlike jennifer garner, i aint a hot crazy bitch
it aint that hard to impress people when ur me
creatin so much positive fuckin energy
cant stop here, keep goin all day
gettin mean mugged up and down the hallway
im like insurance for my crew, like a 15 minute call for aflack
so we can cruise around safe in our lyrical hatchback

Real Thorough 04-19-04 11:20 AM

Yo I mean what up on that lyrikal tip, I'm bout to see whats up wit Class Sic in a miute, yall cant hit a niggih up

B_Loco 04-19-04 11:42 AM

y0

da master of keyin the text//
really tho..who seein the best//
in da hood im squeezen da techs//
clapin foes have em bleedin ta death//

im juzt da ill s0n of lyrickal greatness//
breakin down bars easily like ruined relations//
no hesitation,im waitn for da claimed king//
so i can merk em,switch em from rapin to an r&b queen//

no army or team,on this site im dolo//
and will have emcees duckin me like playin water polo//
spit fast or slow-mo,but this text-yo//
so im keyin a quick verse,it might be my worst but i ont kare so//

imma keep my thang up till i reign supreme//
plus when im not in da booth spitin truth,im in da hood maken cream//
neva been on mixtapes kuz raps not my future//
its only for fun,nah mean when im on da computer//


*my first open mic...lol..but ay i'll spit sum shyt to join later on if yall want.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-19-04 03:28 PM

Alright I Appriciate Those' Who Wish Me Luck! :) Examples; LoT, SPuL, Kuniva, CreaTiviTie, & Last But Not Least!! Enygma!'.. Haha ... DAMN First Time Making A Crew Of My Own And Shit' You Know!!' .. Anyways' ... Let Me Get At This Shit!!!.. If You Disagree With Me In AnyWays.... 'Killah Bwoy Let Me Know!' Cause You Are The Leader After All Ah Ha' .. Im Just Backing You Up You Know!!' .....& L.I. I Do Hope Your Crew' Goes Well' Only WIsh You The Best Of Luck With That Shit You Know!'

Alright No-Bullshit!!!!

GKillaz05 - Your Shit Is ALright' ..!! Not Great! But 'Cool' You Know' .. You Could Work On 'WordPlay, Creativity, Rhyme Scheme, Vocab, & Multies' No Disrespect Im Just Giving You Advice.. To Improve And Get Better' Evelate Some' ..But You Do Have Some 'Potential' ... Get Back @ Me' Once You Think You Have Improved Some What' ..!! Alright!! - - -But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

Ecko296 - You Could Use Some Serious Work Son' I Mean Not To Be Rude Or Crude Or Anything Of The Sort But First Off You Need To Work On Structure And Get That Shit Down Because' .. Once Your Structure Is Off That Throw's Your Whole Verse Off Balance' And You Don't Want That'!! Secondly, You Need To Evelate Kiid & Get On Some Kind Of Level!! Because Im Just Not Feeling Your Style- True Yes EveryBody Does Have There Own Style' ..!! But Yours Seems To Be A Bit Off Hand!!, Work On Multies, Structure, Flow, Verse, Wordplay, Efficientcy, Rhyme Scheme, Vocab, Punches, And Put Some Effort Into Your Rhyming Compatibility!!' .. Aiight . Im Going To Leave You With That!!' - - - But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

Real Thorough - I Really Am Feeling Your Style.. & Your Rhyme Scheme No Doubt! I Would Say You Have Good Potential .. @ Getting Into This Crew' ..!! I Like Your WordPlay & Multies' ..!! That Verse You Dropped Was Dropping Decent Bar's.. With Nice Creativity & Proportion!!' .. I'm Going To Say You're In!! ..' If You Can Handle The Heat'!!!!

simulation - Again You Need to Work On Your Verse!! Youre Flow Was Weak And You Feel Short In Almost Every Aspect!! Of Each Category' ... Once You Evelate Get Back @ Me' ... But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

C_R_E_A_M - As Much As I Like You'!! .. Im Going To Have To Say' You Need Some Serious Work Also!!!' ... NO Doubt Some Of Your Lines Feel Off Short Witch Indicated That You Could Evelate Some And Work On Your WordPlay & Vocab..!! I Wouldn't WOrry So Much About It Though EveryBody Starts At One Point Or Another!! .. EveryBody's On There Own Level .. & Has There Own Unique Style.. But Work On Your Verse.. And Get Back @ Me' .. But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

TheSinnister: I Have No Problems' Nor Disrespect For You @ This Point But Continue' On.. And I Just Might!! - Recognize Who You Are Disrespecting' .. & Fucking With Playa' !!! - - - Straighten Up Your Act' !!!!!!!!!! If You Aint Got Nothing Posotive To Say See YourSelf Out Of This Thread!!!

L.I. 04-19-04 03:53 PM

goodluck witht his crew disaster....hope yall get sum sick emcees...and once u get enough for a forum....FURIOUS FLOWS VS LYRIKAL DESTRUKTION....haha until then goodluck with ur crew and i hope it all werks out.....holla

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-19-04 04:06 PM

Thanks L.I. Billions! :) Ah Ha

accomplishment 04-19-04 04:08 PM

yeah good luck i'll miss ya in da crizzew... It just tears my ass apart to know you dont love my crrreeewwww.....

Killah Bwoy 04-19-04 04:12 PM

truth so members are:

disasterpiece420
killah bwoy
real thorough


sio lets gio yall drop ur shit

GKillaz05 04-19-04 04:16 PM

iight thats kew you didnt want me in after that spit, Ive been talkin to Killah Bwoy and after this battle he wanted me in.. so yeah, check this one out:

My punches are so hard they leavin ya beatin-and-torn...
Once im done defeating you, ya gun wish ya wernt born...
So watch your gay porn.. ya might learn how to betta ya dik ridin'....
Also Killah take my advice...get out the closet and stop hidin...
Your style is 'ice cold' man like its 90 degrees below zero...
And your not even 'cool' couldnt be your own sons hero...
Go get some pointers from your other crew member DisasterPeices...
No body here likes you man... Im liked better by all your neices...
YOu wanna Killah Bwoy... I Kill grown men right and left...
Thats why when im done writtin there gun be none of Killah left...
When Im done spittin' I get an invite to go on Spoke-N-Heard... (mtv show)
When your done spittin' everyone wonders if your smokin-herb...
If your really serious about Rappin man go read the tutorials...
I murdered ya... cya all at part 2 called 'Killah Bwoys Memorial'....

and yeah I won the battle 5-1, so is that good enough to get in?.. let me know!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-19-04 07:23 PM

Accomplishment'!!!! ... I' Do Regret Leaving Class-Sic' ...!! But I Thought I Would Start A Crew Of My Own' Up!! You Know' .. I Have Nothing Against Any Of Class-Sic's Crew Members And That Will Stand' By It'Self!!!....


GKillaz05 - Aye Yo Maybe Killah Bwoy Was Right That Shit Was Heated!! After That Verse I Would Say' Your In Just Need To Work On' Your Multie's A Bit'!!!... And It's All Good From There On!!! But Yeah' ... I WOuld Say Your 'In!!!!!!!!!!!

Triple_N 04-19-04 07:54 PM

damn disaster you shoud've told me you had ya own crew, I woulda rolled wit cha fo sho' shawtie

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-19-04 07:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Triple_N
damn disaster you shoud've told me you had ya own crew, I woulda rolled wit cha fo sho' shawtie


Its Aight Mah Pimp!!! :) Your Cool With Me Still!!!!!!!! Ah Ha lol


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