still uppin for more votes here, fa sho..............

BLACK..

I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"
this was an OK personal i guess

u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus
this was ok

Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow

nah,u didnt word this properly..if u had said..nigga's punches aint hittin,like boxing ur own shadow..it would've been a much better punch

o I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

sorry dude,but that content is PLAYED as fuck

douce

My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package"
this could've been ok,but it wasnt worded properly...

I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

this was ok,but it sounds a little too poetic for a battle


i have to give this to black...he had better flow n punches..

Duece had that battle definitly. All around better flow, better opener and better cracks at Black Quief, i mean Thief.

g won perfectly with his shit it was off da hook
man
with yo line that said
i mesmerise yo mind and leave yo nothing but a question mark to write

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Ok,

Black Thief And G: Deuce both did they thang. This shit was almost too close to call.

Basically even in flow, creativity, personals.

I think the punches from Deuce hit a lil' betta. Loved this line right here(same shit as everyone else)

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

But Gotta give the close shit to Deuce, because Ima just go wit the line that made me say "OH FUCK"! in a tight battle like this. But Thief, you definately held yo shit down my nigga. Both of y'all stay on yo grind.

uppin for more votes.......................uppin fa sho

still uppin for this last vote.....................someone please vote

uppin come on....vote please

Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow
Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow
HAHAHA I LOVE THAT...THATS THE WAY TO END A BATTLE...ight...theif...ur punches was hard and very personal..flow and structure was ight...no multies really..ur vacab u can use some work...

G-Duece-wasnt really feeling it..i know u can bring it harder than that...ur punches and vocab was ok..but thief won cause his ending was just sick...thats the way u need to end ur battles...ur flow was good tho...keep elevating

vote on this

quickpunch vs insidious

peeple
 

im a noob im here 4 some battles cuz i wanna make it 2 tha top and aint none of yall bitches goin stop me.

uppin for some votes in here.........................uppin

uppin for some votes....................uppin for some

still uppin for some votes.......................please

aight....
Black - u had sum nice punches....hot closer....werk on uin sum multis and uppin ur vocab.....try to up ur personals a bit too......good flow....nice spit....
Overall - 7/10
G - u had a lot of nice punches....hard hitting and great wordplay.....nice vocab in this....u simply got this based on punches.....cuz everything else was really close.....good effort by both but G gets this for better punches....
Overall - 7.8/10
Keep droppin yall....ive seen better by both but punches took this one....holla....

ight.........................uppin for one more vote........this going to be close....let the best mc win