creativitie u now to come up with some creative puch lines

LostChild puches is alright i say u won that battle

one mo vote...thats it..............................VOTE!!!!!!!!

yo yo
 

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wtf vote niggas

first off we all know who killed who and we also know that g killas is obviously part of creats squad, because there is no doubt that lost boy won that one, even though creat had some tight lines like
"my rhymes severed your eyes and officaily left you a lost child//
thought u was a challange, but didnt even make dis shit worth while//"
but lost came with
"Creative well you betta come up with a whole lotta shit
Or you a be smokin crack SUCKING A WHOLE LOTTA DICK"
that was a killa and then lost dug up some of creats fossils with the line
"It's to easy I should ask yo squad to show me love
Kick yo ass out the group like Bizzy with Bone Thugs"
lost got my vote.

vote on my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120927

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aight lost had better flow better punches and structure
tive u had an ill flow but not that much punches ur starting was jokes tho but ye lost child came on top in ma opinion
my vote: lostchild

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LostChild Flow Structure and Rhymes was good

punches u lacked by a lil bit but overall 9.5.10


Creativitie u did good Flow Structure rhymes punches was good 9.0.10


LOST

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Metas 7/10
Multis 6/10
42/60

Creativitie
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Metas 5/10
Multis 7/10

39/60

Lost Child

Vote:lOST

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uppin for votes.............number 4

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uppin for votes......need two more votes.....................

votes
 

need votes man
please give me votes
need votes man
please give me votes
i'll return tha favor
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vote niggas
 

where are the votes at.........c'mon kids...vote niggas

aight check it....

LostChild
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:4/10
Vocabulary:2/10
Creativity:3/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:2/10
Closer:no comment

Overall:22

Comment:
man...what were you thinkin in this one guy....to tell the truth your cshit was the weakest of all im tellin you...punches werent there( if any ) and your Vocab sux, take my advice and go back to the 1st grade and learn da basics

Favorite line: there wasnt one

CreaTivitie
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:6/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Creativity:6/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:4/10
Closer:6/10

Overall:37

Comment:
dogg go to elevated coz all these newbs arent nothin...i coulda had my lil sis kill this "lost child" but really though this was a blow out...

Favorite line: i really didnt like any of them but since you won ill give you one i thought was almost good...The closer...it was ur best line

v/ creaTivitie

be sure to return da favor with NO HATE...