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thugz took this for me with beta punches n flow......also structure was beta!

v/thugz

will ya vote on my battle with creativitie, thanx

thugzy wins dis battle with better flow,opener,closing,middle everything.i liked his battle a lot more dan illteachers although his was pretty good.

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opener- Thugzy easy takes the opener, nice punch homie
structure- Thugzy, easy to read which just adds emphasis to punches
punchline- Both of yall had some real nice ones, I'ma give it to Thugzy thought cause he a one or two more,
creativity- Ill Teacher, the punches you had, I mean the good ones were real good, and origional as well
multis- Thugzy, nice word play as well
flow- tie, only cause Ill Teacher really up'ed his style near the end
personals- Tie, yall both came correct right here
enjoyed- Thugzy's overall but, Ill Teacher if your entire verse was like the last 1/3 this would have gone the other way
closer- Ill Teacher you punches before your last punch (closer) were real good, and Thugzy your closer was alright

Vote- Thugzy cause he had a few more solid punches, and Ill Teacher you started off kinda weak but really picked it up at the end.

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ill i like your verse good punches. i like people who make you think when they rhyme. thugzy i like your verse better because almost every line in your verse rhymed. nice floe kid, nice multiples and great punches. your steppin up everyday. ill you had nice punches and a nice flwo but you got off track with you floe. if you goin to go hard and attack im verbally do it throughout your whole verse. be consistent.

vote=thugzy