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Enygma 04-29-04 12:30 PM

Wow! This is the biggest display of free postin that i have ever seen.......lol

Wow! Another lyrical killer! - Just like the 2000 others,
... Fake and laughable, kinda like Warner Brothers ...
Good opener.....no need for a link, lol!
Posted your pics up and now you're being a tough talker,
In reality, the only person you've popped is Betty Crocker!
I liked it but it didn't seem worded right....should have used Orville Reddenbacker
Sure you've elevated from the start, and that's alright,
But your success is fading quicker than Vanna White's.
I didn't like the punch.....I get it, but it wasn't that good...
... Money talks, and you're living proof talk's cheap ....
I'm no vet, but I'll lay you and your dawgs down to sleep.
Good meta......
It's hard to see when you're in the eye of the storm,
But why should I take your crew seriously...
When you don't even have your own forum?
Okay people....this is a couplet, worded quite well I might add...


Come On Karl Everyone Knows You Pussy So Im Treatin This Batlle Like Date Rape/
Stab Merks Wit Tru Faith,An Make Yo Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache/
Nice punch but it got swallowed by the stretched lines...
Hes Just In The Company Of "Royal" Illness Like "Stayin With Lords"/
i Will Put karls "Life On The Line" Quick Like Hes "Playin With Cords"/
Tried to hard for the metas and never really landed a punch.....flowed better though
Comes In,Shows No Skills At All Like Retard Pieces In Art-Shows/
Heartless Flows Get You Hurt Quick Like Matadors In Red Clothes/
Ehhh....not that well worded...
Face It U Aint Hot,Just Half Baked Like Dave Chapelle/
Let Yo Carcass Rot, Burnt An Shot In The Back Of A Chevelle/
No real punch there....
Now Karl Malone Is Ready To Fall Again Like He Missed A Step/
Throw My Pics In Your Face So You Can Really Picture-Death/
Not a good closer......


Overall this wsa an ok battle at first glance......Karl came with a good flow and some witty punches. Nothing really stood out and made you say Ohh Shit, though. Had a few rough spots but an overall good verse.......E Looch started with a very stretched bar as his opener and it took away from the whole flow of the verse. I even overlooked the punch the first time cause it didn't flow right. You had a lot of metas and wordplay but sometimes you forgot the punch. I like how you vote but i didn't like how you spit in this one. I'm sure you can do better.........

Vote - Karl Merks

SPuLâ„¢ 04-29-04 03:02 PM

yo, Karl, why am I on your blacklist?

Karl Merks 04-29-04 06:59 PM

Good question, probably because you rode L.I's dick last time.

I think you've learned your lesson. Unblacklisted.

puertoricanelly 04-29-04 07:02 PM

VOTE ON THIS SHIT ill return favors

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121024

K-Trin 04-29-04 07:04 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121425
^^^^vote in mines

Okay Karl,the flow was badly off.And ur punches were whack.Looch,your rap was oppisite of Karl's.Good flow,but the punches were not all that,but still lightyears better than Karl's

Vote-E Looch

Karl Merks 04-29-04 07:10 PM

Shady...

I looked at your post. I looked at your sig. I even looked at one of your battles. The bottom line is ...

You don't deserve to live.

puertoricanelly 04-29-04 07:40 PM

E-looch killed in this battle!!!! HOOT SHIT MAN

karl yo shit was hott too when i read it, it had my attention but E looch took it with punches.

nice battle
vote goes to E LOOCH

Diagnose 04-29-04 07:42 PM

i'll vote in this if u vote in mine..jst pm me wen u do...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121120

puertoricanelly 04-29-04 07:46 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121024

HIT MA BATTLE UP I VOTED ON THIS ONE SO RETURN THE FAVOR

Karl Merks 04-29-04 09:58 PM

I already did, and there's no need to post it twice.

E Looch 04-29-04 09:59 PM

hmmm who didnt poll ? shady?

uppin for votes

E Looch 04-29-04 11:14 PM

Uppin for some votes on this

E Looch 04-30-04 09:29 PM

Uppin leave links an ill return the vote

BoRn2SpiTT 04-30-04 09:30 PM

E looch:
flow:7/10
creativity:6/10
punches:5/10

Karl:
flow:5/10
creativity:5/10
punches:6/10

Vote= E looch
nice battle both of u..

BoRn2SpiTT 04-30-04 09:31 PM

Oh damn... i would vote but i cant cuz this shit requires 200 posts... gay shit.. anyways i cant so sry


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