uppin 4 votes holla NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maddog is had a bettter flow came strong and hard
maddog yo rhymes good but perfect work on yo
punches then do much better aight

tonyself good rhymes he was a good rapper u came
hard and at tha beginning u good but u need to work
on yo flows and structure

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this is gonna be an honest vote - Mad Dog has his issues with me, but that's HIS problem, Tony voted on me, so I'ma do likewise...

Summary
Opener - TonySelf
Punches - TonySelf
Multis - TonySelf
Creativity - TonySelf
Closer - TonySelf
Overall - speaks for itself, don't it?

Breakdown
A problem that MadDog has yet to acknowledge is that rap has to do more than just 'kind of' rhyme - having lyrics that make sense also helps. Subject matter between rhyming lines, particularly openers failed him big time here.
'Elbow' and 'Soprano' do not rhyme.. okay they may sould a little bit similar, but you were pushing your luck on that one. But as for 'down' and 'South', HELL NO!!!
Your flow structure is far too simple and there is very little outstanding about it - "I'm flash like a photographer"???? "I'm swift like an eagle"????? Is this your 1st rap??? Hey, I'm not hatin', just critiqueing. And your closing lyric was like something you dug out of the toilet. The plus side for you is that you got heart, you don't give up in the face of adversity.

Tony, opner was cool, the bringing Tupac back line was alrite, even if the subject matter was a lil played out
Okay thru the middle, consistent, if not overwhelming, but picked up over the last 4 lines and finished well.

Tony gets my vote.

Na ima let that 1 go but if bigneks votes that'll be scandellous but fuck it i aint complaining uppin

You're gonna let that one go? Oh, how very kind of you!!!!!

I gave an honest vote - ain't no "letting 1 go" required up in here!

But I'ma break from tradition and say that the lyric you dropped on the UK page was better than most other stuff you've posted....... BUT it's a UK Hip Hop page - stop f*cking that up, man. Drop your lryics in the appropriate place.

I'm here for the sake of Hip Hop - you do you and I'll do me (go on, resist making a gay or masturbation joke, you can do it - I know you have it in you.....)

Ha i AM U.K Pro don't u get it? thats y i went there anyway honest vote thats cool dont worry ur next battle i'll HONESTLY vote ok.

You ARE UK???? Hmm, that's a very 'interesting' comment....... but f*ck it, self belief ain't bad, but when you get hurt you gotta learn to take it on the chin and be a man. In my humble opinion, you've been hurt, mortally wounded even a number of times but haven't been man enough to accept it. The only worthwhile battle between me and you would be face to face witha crowd and a beat - winner takes all (the glory), straight off da dome shyt. As far as I'm concerned, anything esle would be pointless. I would battle US cats because they are in the US. You're on the outskirts of London - ain't no excuse. I love Hip Hop, and I know when my games on, Hip Hop don't ever let me down. I'm trying to get the best outta this site - but it's becoming more and more apparent that not everybody respects the music the way I do. BigNeks ain't my bitch, dawg, he's my brother in the same army.

The Music is My Bitch, but too many fakes are trying to prostitute her. Be a part of the solution, not the problem.

Fuck u dawg i love hip hop infact why we even battlin on here set it up tomorrow and we'll finish this and oh yeah u won...ur battle thank me after i knock u flat on that mutha fuckin back HA HA HA

why you so mad playa? You on your period? Wanna battle me? battle me face to face. You think you got the king shyt, battle me face to face.... yeah, I'm feeling that idea.... squash this pretend shyt. You wanna battle, let's battle for real.... or are you only brave when you log in?????

uppin............................................. ...........

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Tony- 7/10 because overall together you came a litte harder than dogg, although your pener is weak, it seemed like it was already written, but you stuck to the topic of what battling is, you got personal a little I like that.

Mad - 5.5/IO ya punches was all over the place like known prostitute cuz, your style is to aggressive but yet not aggressive enough in meta's and punches.
Honest vote, return the favor, and my vote goes to...it's obvious.
TonySelf.