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thankx man for the vote and thnkx for the elevating tip im tryin uppin for some votes
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man i wish people would vote some time damn
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uppin in this bitch iight
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damn it fuckn dickridin no cheasting bitch
why u got to cheat |
who the fuck cheating noone dickridin man so jus keep cool igght
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vote pls
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vinman easealy won this shit he beat spikey in every aspect of this match both of you need work.vinman your structure needs a TON of work. and spikey i seen yo battle for real and now you didnt.you need to fix your structure and punches and the same for you vinman
ma vote vinman |
uppin for some damn votes and explain yo votes pls
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less break dis down
SPIKY: not a very good battle,you need to use different rhyming words,not just me and me,time and time,use your brain to find some new ones. best line:i cant find one worst line:your whole verse overall:3/10.horrible VINMAN:you obviously had the upperhand on dis battle,you had good flow,good rhyming,whoever said you didnt rhyme was wrong cause you rhymed da whole time,but you dont have to explain what some of your words mean. best line:he got the whackest name that ever saw// him being on this site SHOULD BE AGINST THE DAMN LAW// worst line:i cant find one. overall:7/10.solid performance VOTE: Vinman |
spike - aight first off...i've told u before ima tell u again....RHYME UR WERDS....thats the first part of rappin....plus u had no punches at all....go to tutorials and lwean bout punches and personals....ya flow sucks.....fix erything u do lol....
vinman - urs wasnt that great but u rhymed MOST of the time...u threw sum punches....even tho they werent good they were better than none....elevate kid....go to tutorials and learn stuff cuz thats the only way to get better..... Vote - vinman |
thanx for the compliiment s and tips on how to get beta and dawg father sorry for not spitin we will do it some other time
uppin for votes |
one mo vote pls need this ko come on pls
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my vote for vinman................................
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uppin in this bitch
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Weak battle.Spiky,you shouldn't state the fact that you lost to Vinman last time.You had the better flow,but not punches.Spiky,ur rhymes were far too simple.Add a little complexity to it.Vinnman,you had too many stretched lines.Some punches were dope,but flow was badly messed up.
Vote-VINman http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809 ^^drop a honest vote |
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