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MoTiF 05-04-04 07:14 PM

ight still uppin here

MoTiF 05-05-04 05:15 PM

Votes plz

sun jian 05-05-04 06:30 PM

uppin yo

MoTiF 05-05-04 09:43 PM

yo uppin here plz

MoTiF 05-06-04 04:26 PM

Still needin votes

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-06-04 05:09 PM

Now its time to knock were u belong,The bottom of the Barrel//
Your rhymes are more of a Joke then a Show with Will Farrel//

^Ok Opener Could Have Been' Better!!! 6/10

I was readin ur verses and noticed how ur Flow is Tired//
There Older then 50 gettin shot I guess rhymes dont Expire//

^Nice Punch' .... 7/10

Ur my first Win like its a Math problem take out the Exponential//
Dope lyrics and leavin a Flamin mic from me is an Essential//

^Nice Vocab' ...!! But Wheres The Punch? lol!! 7/10

You never stood a chance goin aginst a Mc of my Calibur//
You just got Crushed by the King but no need to call me Sir//

^Weak Closer' ... 2/10...!! lol

Checckit Checck

here go a few rhymes im about to bust.
yo rhymes so old they startin to rust.

^Alright' .. A Bit Shallow' ..!! No Bullshit Weak Opener' ! 1/10

yo your gurl is straight up fine.
so fine i had to put that in my rhyme.

^WTF Is This Shit? .... See Its Shit Like This That You Don't Need To Involve In Your Rhymes' .. Haha!!! 0/10

but i had to be sippin some hipnotic.
cause thats the only way your gurl will look exotic.

^Once Again No Need To Input It In Your Verse' .. 0/10 Your Coming At His Girl' .. Stupid Trick!!

i can go evil and fill your ass up wit terror.
so much it will take ten of yo dicks to measure.
should have never put that its givin you pleasure.
but every mans trash is another ones treasure.

^ Ok' ..! Went Off Subject There' ....!!!!!!! WTF???


Vote: Terror' .. !!! Ah Ha

MoTiF 05-06-04 05:12 PM

ight uppin

sun jian 05-06-04 06:16 PM

uppin yo

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-06-04 11:46 PM

okay umm cool battle

opener-terror
structure-terror..sun ya lines got short then long
punchlines-terror he had a few
creativity-terror
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
enjoyed-terror....sun ya verse was real basic and u aint have no punches or nothin really so u lost dis with ease dunn

my vote-terror...

return da favor ya'll da links is in my sig

MoTiF 05-07-04 01:38 PM

Votes plz

MoTiF 05-07-04 07:40 PM

Still uppin will return With Honost votes

sun jian 05-08-04 10:08 AM

uppin yo uppin

MoTiF 05-08-04 07:39 PM

Still uppin

MoTiF 05-09-04 01:19 PM

Still Uppin

MoTiF 05-09-04 07:56 PM

Still uppin


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