breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:good job no down spots in my eyes 7/10

volcab:pretty good i've seen better but it works well with this verse 7/10

punches:some alright lines nothing too hard best," leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat" good job 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for L.I.:

flow:straight forward and nothing else i can say good job 7/10

volcab:solid use nothing bad here i think this is some of the best i've seen from you 7/10

punches:lots of real personal lines nothing too new but you stayed on him through the whole piece good job 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--i think in the end of it L.I. edged it out for the win good personals

5-4....shadows up......

5-4 shadow's edge wins