CJ your not "Wack"....your just lyrically challenged//
sayin ya off tha "scale".....but your gettin kicked with my "New Balance"//


^^^ good opener...good wordplay


if wack rhymes was a crime.....Countree Jay would be on Death Row//
Chippendales the place he's gettin booked for a show//


^^^ lol...funny...im imaginin dat...good visual..uuuugh


Yo Jay.....heard when ya not on tha net...your softer than a hostess//
Next time put more thought in your rhymes and snap the fuck outta hypnosis//

^^ decent closer...

Deleon...wordplay seems to be something u hold down...wuz good here...this coulda been better with more multies and vocab...otherwise, 32/40 spit




Occupation: Killin' dis katz? Must be a form of Spanglish,
Nigga I was just playin' about you not speakin' da language/
To battle me you'll have to pull out every word you know,
But after shit, bitch, and fuck, you got a blank line to show./

^^ pretty good...it hits hard..but lacks wordplay

I always make Good on my M.C. hunting, so you can call me Will,
Wait till you choke on your bars, then you can claim Lyrically Ill./
Let me try my hand at Spanglish, Tu leave la musica alone hoy?
'Cause we know you ain't no True Thug- Enough said Homeboy./


^^^ Not bad...though, the mangled spanish you could have left out

um...good verse...wordplay doesn't seem to be your strength..but str8 hard hittin disses...good though...however, i place a premium on metas/wordplay...so I'm going with

Vote: Deleon

aight lets get some more votes up in here

come on now lets get this shit over with...........

DAMN!!! this shit is gettin slept on madd...drop your damn votes

Uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

~CJ~

Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Deleon-NIce Spit did come decent..Pretty nice..Structure
was good..Nothing about dat..Similies amd metaphores
was decent..Just work on similies more..aight
7/10


CJ-Came aight..Not well though..SImilies
was lil off..Metas was aight..So was balance..
STructre was decent kept everything clean pretty
nice..Came off wit the flows a lil do
5/10

v/Deleon