And AGAIN UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dis wuz a decent dey flows were about even but riddle punches were harder so overall i would say tha my vote iz...........

vote=riddle

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riddlemethat
yo dawg for a first time u did aight i guess. u had some ok flow but it needs a lot of improvement and ure structure was wack man, ure lines were stretched like fuck. u had some ok punches and a couple of personals but other than that ure spit was pretty basic. u need ot beef up ure punches and work on more personals to get wins playa. OVERALL 6/10

mad dog
dawg, u came gud in ure verse, ure flow was a little choppy in places but it managed to stay consistently ok throughout the verse. ure structure to cud use some work cuz sum of ure lines were a little stretched. ure punches were gud, some were really strong whilst some were pretty weak tho, i liked ure opener, pure sickness, as soon as i saw the cat's name i knew u were gonna drop sumthin like that. u need to put more thought into ure punches tho, beef them up some more and fix ure structure.
OVERALL - 7.5/10


V/ - Mad Dog

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Yeah lets get this thread closed... drop a vote for my man here.

dis battle wuz str8 and all but i feel dat riddle came a lil harder in da punches and flow but mad got him in da personals but vote go's 2 riddle

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riddle me that won this because he had a very nice flow and punches and diserves to win this, mad dog you did ok but not the best becuase your verse and punches were kind of weak no offence. They both could of elevated and use more wordplay and multies.

vote riddle

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yo this was ight

mad dog ur punches didnt hit thathard,but ur multis and structure and flow was all good man...and the wordplay was decent....good job just elevate on makin the punches hit harder ok

riddle u did have decent punches but i didnt like ya structure ur flow was ok and you didnt really have any multi's or word play....but work on havin structure...and work on havin multi's and wordplay in ya verse homie.....keep elevating

v/mad dog


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