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dam will someone fucking vote on this it has been open a while now and only 2 people have voted...uppin for votes will return the favor ~!1!~
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Yes Please uppin and I will return the favor
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i dont like votin on topicals but here we go.
Meta- Damn.....imagery was nice dogg....your topical made it seem a lot more real and shit...flow was good..wordplay was nice....vocab help it.just a nice drop not much more i can say except for that rape shit was kinda funny Flow Intel- for your 2nd topical not bad playa....i just think you need to put a little more thought...kinda paint a picture...imagery was good..wordplay too again overall another nice drop..i think that meta made me feel like i was there vote-Meta |
FLOW u came wit it pimpin.....that was some good rhymin at the start but in the middle you sort of loss me.nice rhymin. i understood your perspective and dat was tight
meta good versse too...u laid it down to a point but u could of came wit bettr vocab though a few lines caught me. v/flow |
well that would have been my vote if i had enough post.......................srry
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lol cant be serious Lol, even Flow admitted I won But if you say so lol
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meta and flow nice drops from both of u.you both stayed on topic and to the point.flow ur verse didnt have much imagery it told a story and thats wat i like wen it tells the story cause imagery dont matter. u had a good flow and good strucuture so it was easy to rtead it and understand.meta ur verse had good strucutre not a great flow. it needed some work it jus wasnt as good.
v/flow drop a vote on my topical http://community.rapbattles.com/forumdisplay.php?f=192 |
^^ill poll it once u drop a vote on mine thats the only way to get ppl to vote on battles im tired of uppin jus drop a honest vote and i will come bak and poll it
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